Dragon24• Show poetry

OK so I guess you could call me the lovey depressed kinda girl. That seems weird, dosn't it? Kinda hard to find someone like that too. Oh think of me what you will I don't care what most people think. So now that that's out of the way, I want all of you to critique my poetry FAIRLY!!! Not just because you don't like it of its not your taste.

Hello I want you to know that if you don't like mushy, romance, love, or sad poetry GET OFF MY SITE!!! :-) I'm a total lovey-dove person and I don't want to be the reason for you to read anything that makes you uncomfortable, OK?

I love having my poetry critiqued though( yes you can be mean in you corrections- i DON'T BITE!!!)(much:-) and would love the help all you poets give.


Man my parents are a drag!! I can't even get on AP anymore at home because they say poetry is a waste of my time. They say I'm not a good poet. Do any of you think I have any talent? I'd appreciate the warmth but can you PLEASE tell me the truth. I don't want to be fighting my parents if it's for nothing.


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[[Put This On Your Page If you Were Abused Or Are Against Any Form Of It!]


Ohhhhhhhh, Coca-cola makes the world taste better!!!! :-)


When you do something for love, you are doing nothing wrong.


This or That: The Quiz

Q: Oreos or Doritos?
A: Oreos for life

Q: Kalyn or Steven?
A: wel i already got aboyfriend- Cody Hart- and i love him!!!!

Q: Shopping or TV?
A: Music

OK FINE, FROM NOW ON I'LL BE SERIOUS AND TAKE THIS QUIZ CORRECTLY...

Q: Ice Cream or Popcorn?
A: Pizza

Q: Miley Cyrus or Jonas Brothers?
A: Jason Dolley

Ok so I put my own answers. so sue me!!! put this on your AP page and answer it your own way:-)

So you love contests? I will be hosting one every now and then so look once a month to check out:-)


My heart is pure and full of love. If you look into it you will be lost forever in its depths...so look, if you dare...




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92% of American teens today would die if Abercrombie & Fitch said it wasn't cool to breathe anymore.
If you're part of the 8% that would be laughing their asses off, put this in your profile.


If weird is good, strange is bad, and odd is when you don't know which to call someone. Weird is the same as different, which is the same as unique, than weird is good. If you are weird and proud of it, copy this onto your profile!



Quotes I love:

“Life is too short to be little.”
~By~Benjamin Disraeli


"I declare this a heavenly scene, may this be the noise your soul to feed."
~By~The Narrow


Push up the level, the heavens will fight for me."
~By~The Narrow


“You laugh at me because I am different, I pity you because you are all the same.”
~By~Unknown


“I poured my heart out to the world and no one savored a drop.”
~By~Unknown

"love sees with the heart; not just with the eyes"~By~author unknown

"Soulmates are two seeds that have been planted
at different times who bloom in togetherness
within the same season"~By~Yvette Champ

Sometimes someone says something really small, and it just fits right into this empty place in your heart." ~From the television show My So-Called Life

“A woman can be anything
the man who loves her would have her be.”
~By~Unknown

“For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.”
~By~Judy Garland

"If my poetry aims to achieve anything, it's to deliver people from the limited ways in which they see and feel."~By~ Jim Morrison


"To write what is worth publishing, to find honest people to publish it, and get sensible people to read it, are the three great difficulties in being an author."
~By~Charles Caleb Colton (1780-1832)

A girl and guy were speeding, on a motorcycle, over 90 mph on the road...
Girl: Slow down. I’m scared.
Guy: No, this is fun.
Girl: No, it’s not. Please, it’s too scary!
Guy: Then tell me you love me.
Girl: Fine, I love you. Slow down!
Guy: Now give me a BIG hug.
*Girl hugs him*
Guy: Can you take my helmet off & put it on yourself? It’s bugging me.
(In the paper the next day)
A motorcycle crashed into a building because of brake failure. Two people were on it, but only one survived. The truth was that halfway down the road, the guy realized that his brakes broke, but he didn’t want to let the girl know. Instead, he had her say she loved him & felt her hug one last time, then had her wear his helmet so that she would live even though it meant that he would die.

~*~If you would ever do this for someone....then post this on your page asap!!~*~

Ninety-five percent of the kids out there are concerned with being popular and fitting in. If you're part of the five percent who aren't, copy this, put it in your profile, and add your name to the list. AnimeKittyCafe, Hyperactivley Bored, Gem W, Bara-Minamino, Yavie Aelinel, IwuvMyKenshyPoo, Heidiplease, iNsOmNiAc BiLlIe JoE lOvEr, Black Panther Warrior,Mina the Mischevious, SnowNeko, KylaMizuki, SkyeEyesSparkle7135, Ms.Misery.SouthernSecrets15. ChristinaXCuriosity, SecretButterfly, angel of the dead,dragon24


80% of Americans say "I LOVE YOU".
20% actually mean it.
If you honestly are in the 20%, paste this into your
profile

Too often, we lose sight of life's
simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you, it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm
and fuckin slap that motherfucker
up-side the head.......
Pass it on!


Abortion is Bad !

Month One
Mommy, I am only 8 inches long, but I have all my organs. I love the sound of
your voice. Every time I hear it, I wave my arms and legs. The sound of your
heart beat is my favorite lullaby.


Month Two
Mommy, today I learned how to suck my thumb. If you could see me, you could
definitely tell that I am a baby. I'm not big enough to survive outside my home
though. It is so nice and warm in here.


Month Three
You know what Mommy, I'm a girl !! I hope that makes you happy. I always want
you to be happy. I don't like it when you cry. You sound so sad. It makes me sad
too, and I cry with you even though you can't hear me.


Month Four
Mommy, my hair is starting to grow. It is very short and fine, but I will have a
lot of it. I spend a lot of my time exercising. I can turn my head and curl my
fingers and toes, and stretch my arms and legs. I am becoming quite good at it
too.


Month Five
You went to the doctor today. Mommy, he lied to you. He said that I'm not a
baby. I am a baby Mommy, your baby. I think and feel. Mommy, what's abortion?


Month Six
I can hear that doctor again. I don't like him. He seems cold and heartless.
Something is intruding my home. The doctor called it a needle. Mommy what is it?
It burns! Please make him stop! I can't get away from it! Mommy!! HELP me!! No .
. .


Month Seven
Mommy, I am okay. I am in Jesus's arms. he is holding me. He told me about abortion. Why didn't you want me Mommy?


Every Abortion Is Just . . .
One more heart that was stopped.
Two more eyes that will never see.
Two more hands that will never touch.
Two more legs that will never run.
One more mouth that will never speak.



[*] means this is true for you.

[] means this is not true for you.

Cinderella:
[] One of your parents is dead
[*] You are expected to do a lot of chores
[] You love to dress up
[*] You love animals
[*] You are waiting patiently for your Prince Charming(i already got him)
[*] Your mom is really strict
[] You have sisters who seem kind of jealous of you
[*] You’re afraid to speak your mind sometimes
[*] You have left your shoes at a friend’s house before
[*] You have blonde hair
TOTAL: 7



Belle:
[*] You’ve kissed someone your friends didn’t like
[] You’ve been lost in the forest
[*] You love to read
[] You are not shy at all, and not afraid to speak your mind
[*] One of your family members is a bit weird
[*] You have done volunteer work
[*] You have a wild imagination
[*] You love to take care of people in need
[*]You’ve had guys like you only because they think you’re pretty
[] You’ve rejected at least one person when they’ve asked you out
TOTAL: 7



Jasmine:
[] Your dad is very rich/important
[*] You are very clever(sometimes)
[*] You’ve been with someone way different from you
[*] You’re unique and different from everyone else
[*] You’d never marry someone just because they were rich
[*] You have set a lot of goals for yourself
[] You don’t have a lot of friends
[*]You’re independent
[] You are wealthy
[*]Your parents try to control your life
TOTAL: 7



Ariel:
[*] Your parents expect a lot from you
[*] You really try to follow the rules, but it’s hard for you
[*]You’re a bit of a trouble maker
[] You’re the youngest in your family or in the last 2(in my real siblings i am the oldest)
[] You have a lot of sisters (3 or more)(in my house it's all brothers!!)
[*]you collect something(books,stickers,and poems!!))
[*]You (have)/had long, hair
[*] You have/(had) a pet fish
[*] You’re extremely curious
[] You believe everything people tell you/you’re a bit gullible
TOTAL: 7



Snow White:
[*] You know that you’re beautiful( i can be if i try... well my boyfriend` says i am beautiful no matter what)
[] Sometimes it seems like your mom is jealous of you
[*] You’ve almost been killed(if i wasn't in foster care i think I'd be dead b/c i would have been beaten to death)(TRUE STORY for dragon24)
[*]You have at least seven good friends
[] You’ve had food poisoning
[*] You have/(had) short hair
[*] You get along with almost everyone
[*] All of your friends are different
[*] You love to have a good time
[*] You’re happier when you’re out of the house than in
TOTAL: 8



Mulan:
[*] You can be a tomboy sometimes.
[*] People wish you could be a bit more girly
[*]You’ve pretended to be someone you’re not
[*] You’ve had a physical fight with someone
[*] You (have)/had considered running away from home
[*] Your parents try to plan your life out
[*] a lot of your friends are boys
[*] You sometimes find yourself in bad situations
[*] You love your family so much that you’d do anything to protect them
TOTAL: 9



Aurora:
[*] You (live)/have lived with someone other than your parents(foster parents)
[*] You almost died at a very young age(my dad would beet me but somehow my mom sometimes mannaged to stop it)
[*] You are gentle, loving, and/or thoughtful(most of the time)
[*]You have a decent singing voice(or so I'm told by my friends)
[*] You like to sleep in late on the weekends
[*]You spend most of your time outside [try to]
[*] You’re adopted(i was adopted in 2003 and i was 12)
[*] You’re very romantic
[] Pink is one of your favorite colors(hll no!!!! purple is!!!!)
TOTAL: 8



Pocahontas:
[*] You love to walk around and explore big cities
[*] You are more spiritual than religious
[] You’ve been in an interracial relationship
[*] One of your family members is dead (mum, dad, sister, brother, grandma, grandpa)
[*] Your parents are very protective of you
[*] Someone you know has been in war
[*]You love nature
[] You have/had black hair
[*] You would love to move somewhere exotic and beautiful
[*] You’re very adventurous
TOTAL: 8

~*~THE ORDER OF THE PRINCESS TYPE I AM~*~...
And the amount of questions that applied for each one!

1. ~*~ Mulan ~*~ 9/9 I AM Mulan!!!!!!!!
2. ~*~ Snow White ~*~ 8/10
3. ~*~ Pocahontas ~*~ 8/10
4. ~*~ Aurora ~*~ 8/9
5. ~*~ Belle ~*~ 7/10
6. ~*~ Ariel ~*~ 7/10
7. ~*~ Jasmine ~*~ 7/10
8. ~*~ Cinderella~*~7/10


~*~'Gold Wrapping Paper'~*~

I received this from a friend who had a choice to make. It said that I had a choice to make too.

I've chosen. Now it's your turn to choose.


The story goes that some time ago a mother punished her five year old daughter for wasting a roll of expensive gold wrapping paper. Money was tight and she became even more upset when the child used the gold paper to decorate a box to put under the Christmas tree.

Nevertheless, the little girl brought the gift box to her mother the next morning and then said,
'This is for you, Momma.

The mother was embarrassed by her earlier over reaction, but her anger flared again when she opened
the box and found it was empty. She spoke to her daughter in a harsh manner.

'Don't you know, young lady, when you give someone a present there's supposed to be something
inside the package?'

She had tears in her eyes and said, 'Oh, Momma, it's not empty! I blew kisses into it until it was full.

The mother was crushed. She fell on her knees and put her arms around her little girl, and she begged her forgiveness for her thoughtless anger.

An accident took the life of the child only a short time later, and it is told that the mother kept that gold
box by her bed for all the years of her life.

Whenever she was discouraged or
faced difficult problems she would open the box
and take out an imaginary kiss and remember the love of the child who had put it there.

In a very real sense, each of us, as human beings, have been given a Golden box filled with unconditional love and kisses from our children, family, friends and GOD. There is no more precious possession anyone could hold.


You now have two choices:
1. Repost this so others can read it or,
2. Ignore it and act like it didn't touch your heart.
As you can see, I took choice No. 1.



AMAZING HALL OF PICTURES

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HOMOPHOBIA IS WRONG

I am the girl kicked out of her home because
I confided in my mother that I am a lesbian.

I am the prostitute working the streets
because nobody will hire a transsexual woman.

I am the sister who holds her gay brother
tight through the painful, tear-filled nights.

We are the parents who buried our daughter
long before her time.

I am the man who died alone in the
hospital because they would not let my
partner of twenty-seven years into the room.

I am the foster child who wakes up with
nightmares of being taken away from the
two fathers who are the only loving family
I have ever had. I wish they could adopt me.

I am one of the lucky ones, I guess.
I survived the attack that left me in a coma
for three weeks, and in another year I will
probably be able to walk again.

I am not one of the lucky ones. I killed
myself just weeks before graduating high school.
It was simply too much to bear.

We are the couple who had the realtor hang
up on us when she found out we wanted to
rent a one-bedroom for two men.

I am the person who never knows which bathroom
I should use if I want to avoid getting the
management called on me.

I am the mother who is not allowed to even
visit the children I bore, nursed, and raised.
The court says I am an unfit mother because
I now live with another woman.

I am the domestic-violence survivor who found
the support system grow suddenly cold and distant
when they found out my abusive partner is also a woman.

I am the domestic-violence survivor who has
no support system to turn to because I am male.

I am the father who has never hugged
his son because I grew up afraid to show
affection to other men.

I am the home-economics teacher who always
wanted to teach gym until someone told me
that only lesbians do that.

I am the man who died when the paramedics
stopped treating me as soon as they realized
I was transsexual.

I am the person who feels guilty because
I think I could be a much better person if I
didn't have to always deal with society hating me.

I am the man who stopped attending church,
not because I don't believe, but because
they closed their doors to my kind.

I am the person who has to hide what
this world needs most, love .

REPOST THIS ON YOUR AUTHOR PAGE
IF YOU BELIEVE HOMOPHOBIA IS WRONG

I have many friends on AP. they are: (in random order)

1.Bluesphere
2.Climax
3.Heavenly Angel
4.Kevin
5.JeannieD Hunter
6.NoodlesAndEvilCats
7.XxScarlet DovexX
8.AXloversXdebt
9.bones7
10.dukesuperstar
11.miley24
12.night-delirium


my friend Climax does s lot of pics. I love them! Why don't you check out his site and feed his vanity(you'll see what I mean:-)