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ok here's a little info,
for those who really want to know,
im not the typical guy,
so dont assume me to be the average joe,
im the nocturnal type,
in the night is when i glow,
its taken me years to finally be at ease
with my personality,
i no longer need to put on a show
i call my self da conscious one,
because my eyes are wide open,
the same cant be said for everyone,
yet i keep hopping,
my peers will awake,
and see the damage caused at the earths stake,
i yearn to learn the truth because his-story is fake.

skys the limit for those who reach it for those who conquer the demons inbedded in the spirit bad mind biz-niz man need to relax im conscious of what im saying so man cant hate it copestetic straight not parraletic saw a vission know im on a mission to get it i know where im comming from i know where im going i know what what im talking bout i know what im speaking not a mind reader but i can guess what your thinking the truths hidding out there you need to start seeking



i was born in britain my grandparents are jamacian
so its only fair i call myself jam-inglish
im carrying on tradition like my farther im a commedian
if you was to ask me my favorite coulour id probably say cameleon like everyone else id like to be a millionaire
but im a local celeb already cause i look like
chamillionaire my poetry is varied but close to my heart its one way to get close to me regardless if were seas apart  read them and tell me what you reackon constructive critisism is ok now you know me a bit better look at the poetry section

im not a bad man cause every bad man is dead

im not a hustler cause a hustler misleads your head

im not a smoker cause a smoker see's red

from every dimension of the street it dont make me a fed (police)

 

its a pleasure having a family as tight as mine thats why i rep for my bloodline

two words, u k, united kingdom,birmingham speaking,people listening, forget twisting my word,my voice,my expression,true mission,has vision,like newton,like garvey,so long,ive waited,too be,in the,spot light,to show,what is,what was,what will,inevitablly be,

  • Last seen on Oct 27 4:42 PM. Member since October 31, 2007.
  • I'm a peridot parrot poet for 42 comments.
  • My mood is , and quote is "i talk about reality because thats what im on ".
  • I am a 24 year old man (Great Britain)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm looking for work.
  • I have 42 comments, 1 contest, 81 poems

Poems I'm focused on

  • my thoughts
    black or white asian or albeano there's things we can all learn from there's things we all need to know christian or muslim jewish hindu or sikh we all have mountains to climb before we can reach the peak atheist or religous
    4 lines, December 31, 2007
  • be thankfull and gratefull
    be thankfull for what you have got
    many children around the world are left to rot
    16 lines, 3 comments, November 5, 2007
  • writer block cant hold back what i write inside
    its a mad world confusing consuming
    the very life out of my pen
    42 lines, 1 comment, November 5, 2007. In Thoughts, Hope, Life, Contest
  • every prayer
    god is here following our every foo
    67 lines, 3 comments, November 4, 2007. In Spiritual, Love
  • [ a child torn to pieces ]
    a child torn to pieces
    in the aim of the gun
    53 lines, 7 comments, November 4, 2007
  • soul food
    chicken rice and peas on a Sunday afternoon
    dumplings and potatoes please pass me the spoon
    25 lines, 3 comments, November 4, 2007
  • a slow death
    the taste of the air is bitter with pollution,
    our earth's soil is eroding, yet we haven't a solution,
    16 lines, 2 comments, November 2, 2007
  • Birth
    THERE IS NO LOVE GREATER THAN A MOTHER AND CHILDS
    23 lines, 1 comment, October 31, 2007. In Love

My Poetry

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  • Dont Be a Cop Out
    If there was only one route in life there wouldn’t be no balance
    Its natural that some have to work harder to meet the challenge
    18 lines, August 18
  • Some Men Will Change the Way We Are Seen
    As a child a boy I didn’t understand
    how hard it would be raising a child as a man
    34 lines, August 18
  • More Ways Too Succeed Than 1
    There are many paths to success
    Many ways to succeed
    44 lines, August 18
  • Talking to You Lord
    I WAS A SINNER ONCE BUT NOW I’VE BEEN SAVED
    NOW I HEAR YOUR VOICE AND REJOICE IN YOU LORD
    19 lines, August 18

Guest Book

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  • jo-el on November 5, 2007
    peace cousin and welcome
  • Freak-in-BlackJeans on November 5, 2007
    I'm just dropping by to say I'm glad my comment helped, and I do hope you try that in the future.
    Thank you for adding me, and I hope you enjoy life, and AP.

    Your new friend,
    Naoto
  • JustBreathe on November 4, 2007
    Just stopping by to extend a warm AP welcome to you! I've enjoyed your poems! You have a strong poetic voice, and I look forward to reading much more of your poetry in the future. ....JustBreathe

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