I've been writing poetry for over 30 years, off and on (mostly off) and at best, my style is inconsistant. I am not schooled in the classical styles of poetry, but I do what I can. I also write song lyrics and short stories, and articles for select publications. I hope to have a few of my pieces published if I can find a willing publication. I love old cars (pre-smog) and like to keep them running. I love music, coins of the world, and I collect record albums. Again, my style is inconsistant. I change as befits the poem-subject, and also just over time.
I know there are more than a few veterans on this site, and obviously they write poetry, also. Since poetry should include passion (usually), and also since war is a passionate subject, it should be written about and read, and readers should feel free to offer comments, good and bad, just like any other work. The way I see it, if you don't want others tostate their opinion, don't put it out there. That said, please feel free to critique my work as I will yours. Thank you.
I know there are more than a few veterans on this site, and obviously they write poetry, also. Since poetry should include passion (usually), and also since war is a passionate subject, it should be written about and read, and readers should feel free to offer comments, good and bad, just like any other work. The way I see it, if you don't want others tostate their opinion, don't put it out there. That said, please feel free to critique my work as I will yours. Thank you.
- Last seen on Dec 14 1:19 AM 2003. Member since August 23, 2001.
- I'm a jade dragon poet for 230 comments.
- I am a guy (US of A)
- When I'm not writing, I'm a Tradesman/Craftsman.
- Visit my homepage at Poets2000.com
- I have 230 comments, 2 addlines, 58 poems
My Poetry
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I travel down a stony path--I'm careful where I walk.
So many people I may pass, but seldom ever talk.25 lines, 7 comments, March 3, 2003. In Society -
Dear Son,
It's funny that after all these years I should be writing a letter of introduction to you. You likely know more about me than I thi -
A solitary butterfly with red
and gold wings-- flitting from13 lines, 5 comments, September 1, 2002. In Spiritual
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introubleintx on April 18, 2003Well here I am once again saying "where you been?"...LOL! Nice to see you!

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Just4u on February 3, 2003John...was nice seeing you again. Been awhile back since the
Nam poem I believe. Thanks for stopping by and feel free to drop by anytime.
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the lady captain on December 18, 2002Thank you coyote for kind commenting and reading my work,,,
I certainly enjoy reading yours,,,I give reading tutor classes for adults in my home, when they get really good at reading, then i have them read poems that way they can learn to speak and read smoothly,,some of yours have that exact volume,,,hope you don't mind,,,thank you, keep up the good work,,, -
learning to be on November 29, 2002whoah, you are a GOOD poet! no, you are an AWESOME poet! YAY! keep writing MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE! YAY! you rock.
-caitlyn-
learning to be
