Enter anything you would like I just want to comment on as many poems as possible. You will get a comment that is very indepth as well. The more the better enter everything you got for all I care BUT The only rule is it must be something I have never commented on before!! Thats not hard huh. Other than that absolutly anything welcome here!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 11
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: WOW I diffinatly made the 2000 mark and I got a Gold membership for judging this lol. I really loved all the poem that were entered. An amazing job everyone!
Contest Winners
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Fly free my little butterfly
With wings of blue and greenby Little Miss Mental 46 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 17 11:47 AM. In Personal, Nature, Hope
Bronze trophy winner
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Entries [251]
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She uttered my name with enthusiasm and eloquence;
each syllable smacked against her lips, spreading a ripple across her faceby xxRainbowDawnxx 16 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 16 8:20 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Looking at me with your swollen red eyes,
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'Yes...' She thought, as she strode forward with a graceful lope..• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by im dead - go away 2 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 29 7:39 PM. In Other• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Long? Yes. But well worth reading.
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Life can be a scary place
When there's distrust in every face• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Looking at you struggling out of love's decay,
what more can i say?by Ti Amo Te Quiero 21 lines, 12 comments, on Nov 19 10:04 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by My Last Breath.x 24 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 28 12:12 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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lol this was for snolan• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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that at the end of days
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by lillypilly 27 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 22 3:15 AM. In personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by My Last Breath.x 34 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 17 11:14 AM. In NaPoMoWriting Group 2• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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O Green and Gusty Gale!
by Tranquillis-P.T.R. 97 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 23 7:01 PM. In Nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Every second I feel that weak in the knees, teary eyed, I could cry if you didn't kiss me• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"I love her"
He said, and we were done.by xxFallen Dreamsxx 42 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 19 2:05 PM. In pain, broken hearts, betrayal, agony• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by My Last Breath.x 30 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 12 8:52 PM. In NaPoMoWriting Group 2• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Why would I ask these questions
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Feeling. It’s indescribable. Unfathomable, even. Yet we all endeavor to tell of it. My heart has been annihilated in increments. When the final blow came, I recoiled, appalled. It was a concussion of pain, and heartache. I am• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I dropped a tear in the ocean for you,
and i won't stop loving you until i get it back.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The silence of a pounding heart
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Some people are brought together
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Doors slam, chains rattle.
You win the war, you lose the battle.by Erin200 23 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 10 12:46 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In the tropics of my emotions
where sunlit hues played havoc• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The colours have all faded
beneath a darkened day• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When broken dreams discordantly play
like a merry-go-round in the head• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
A feeling like love
Lasts forever• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
All the love in the world
Love overflows meby JeremyWilliams 2 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 14 8:20 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Her Eyes her smile i love them
Her weirdness her laugh i love them• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Shelly lynn turner is a special gal,
She camps at forevergreen• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The blade beckons me.
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Step from the shower room,
Settle upon the bed, my heart pounding to the beat of a different chorus• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by My Last Breath.x 43 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 18 6:40 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If I had the power
To change anything I wanted to,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Colors, colors, colors
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L oveliest friend anyone could have
U nder the bright blue skyby xxFallen Dreamsxx 11 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 2 9:57 AM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The world's full of apathy, but I don't care
as life itself is bitter sweet and pretty ugly,by xxRainbowDawnxx 25 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 20 5:52 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When you’re feeling down,
No one is around• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
just turn me to stoneby SoxxDisastrous 15 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 14 4:27 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Those who abuse power sit from a lofty precipice,
a high overreaching cliff in the darkness...• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want to spend the endings of my days
And the beginning of all my nights• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Worries of homework after school,
The teachers are talking in monotone words,by xxFallen Dreamsxx 34 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 3 7:41 AM. In nature• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Dig out the crayon box
Pull out some paper• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The world is crashing down around us
You're all that's on my mind• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
So cold I can see my breath
But at least I know I'm still breathing• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She knows it doesn't hide in the smoke of cigarettes and drugs
She knows there's not enough pills to coax it out of hiding• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
There's scars on my arms
And a crack in my heart• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by xxFallen Dreamsxx 97 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 9 8:27 AM. In i hate you• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I hope you understand
It wasn’t part of a plan• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'll catch for him, so he can fly,
All the way up to the sky.
And then it's time to say good-bye.by Erin200 24 lines, 9 comments, on May 11 12:39 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by InfiniteCaitlin 37 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 18 8:24 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Shunned by society
Branded as a nobody• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want to tell you something
I need to get it off my chest• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Come-hither and bind his tired hands of lore,
to see the teachings of such a pure mind;by awannabepoet 17 lines, 9 comments, on May 1 8:32 PM. In Thoughts, Contest, Contemporary, Other, Abstract, Message• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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as far as I know you have never commented on my poems but how do I know for sure?
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I was thinking the same thing trekkergirl... people change their names so often on this site and some have so many names that it is hard to know who has and has not commented on your stuff anymore. My guess is that if the name which is hosting is not listed on the poem then we are safe... but then I am only assuming that... lol
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Maybe I'll put my poem in here from your last contest, which you never commented on!
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HAHAHA IM ENTERING ALLLL MY POEMS
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OMG!
This contest just BLEW UP! I am sure you will reach that limit !!!!
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