Hey guys.
I want to get try and discover more awesome poets to read here on AP. So, here's the dealio!
1. Enter your BEST prewrite. The one you're proud of! The one you'd want to put on the fridge. This poem CAN NOT HAVE ALREADY WON A TROPHY. It must be a trophy-less poem
2. I will comment on EVERY SINGLE POEM. I'm only offering Gold and Silver for this contest. For those two winners, I'll comment on 50, (yes i said it) 50 poems of yours!!
Now, hit me it!!!!

Mylee
I want to get try and discover more awesome poets to read here on AP. So, here's the dealio!
1. Enter your BEST prewrite. The one you're proud of! The one you'd want to put on the fridge. This poem CAN NOT HAVE ALREADY WON A TROPHY. It must be a trophy-less poem

2. I will comment on EVERY SINGLE POEM. I'm only offering Gold and Silver for this contest. For those two winners, I'll comment on 50, (yes i said it) 50 poems of yours!!
Now, hit me it!!!!

Mylee
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on May 8
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: I am sorry it took sooo long!
Takes forever to read 462 entries! But it's finally done. I didn't comment for time reasons.
NOW TIME FOR THE RESULTS!
Actually, its an annoymous contest, so idk who won! But, if you won GOLD OR SILVER,
I will comment on 50 of your poems, but it is YOUR responsibilty to message me and tell me your name and such, and if there are any poems in particular you want commented on. From when this contest ends, you have 48 hours to message me. Thank you all for entering!!
xx always,
gypsy
Contest Winners
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Fiery beads burning
through my handsby Lilian of Tilburg 44 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 5 7:01 PM. In Personal, Inspirational
Bronze trophy winner
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Fractured
Fragmentedby Apocalyptic Scarves 37 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 12 8:14 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You sophisticant
You narcisitic cuntby Fibe Kill-DFW Punk- 9 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 20 8:57 PM. In Controversy, Other, Anarchist, Trancendentalist• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He Lived with her a full life for long years,
Shared her bed,food, laughters and tears.by Nermin Nazim 22 lines, 17 comments, on May 6 4:12 AM 2008. In Abuse, Life, Pain, Society, Thoughts, My own style, repeated issue• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don't even bother saying anything
because I know it will never be enoughby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 33 lines, 12 comments, on Mar 26 4:25 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Inspired by the ocean at Cape Cod• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by AutumnsFlame 31 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 21 9:16 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by My Last Breath.x 25 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 15 10:57 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I’m searching,
I’m longing,by Chocolate Chip 74 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 11 7:39 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
feeling a little bit stronger
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We sat up to Larry’s one Saturday night
Rum in hand there was sure to be a fightby JeremyWilliams 38 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 9 9:17 PM 2007. In true story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
So cold I can see my breath
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There is nothing sadder
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Sometimes I can only wonder
is it adversity that kills us• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I see my life as it passes me by,
the memories of the past all tooby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 22 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 26 9:45 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I care not what men have said of past sin,
of aloof indifference or brassyby Ontarah 13 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 26 11:14 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by TheCrimsonPetal 45 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 13 6:21 PM. In Adult• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I loved you forever and a day.
I gave you my heart and you threw it away.by Beautiful Sin- 13 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 20 11:09 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"Last drop of blood dripping"• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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ancient bullfrogs mourn shifting light
lone duck glides across graying pond• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Those eyes, that smile, they had me hooked from day one
A handsome boy with tricks up his sleeve that benefit himby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 19 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 21 8:08 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"Baby feel my heart..."• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A scurry and a scream,
The scarred wring ofby PerfectTonight 19 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 11 3:01 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Prepare for a good old fashioned horror story/poem
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verdure conceals pale eyes
sparking just barely enough so they can pretendby AllThatRemains 35 lines, 16 comments, on Mar 4 5:53 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Based on a true story: MINE.by ImmatureRebel 44 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 10 4:58 PM 2008. In Humor, Life, Sad, deppressing, Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I lay my head down to sleep
My day was long and exhaustingby Improv Machinery 46 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 24 7:35 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What is Life?
Life is a game,by ImmatureRebel 25 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 6 1:35 PM 2008. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I can see in your eyes
I've let you down• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Each stroke of the brittle paintbrush
Is a year longby CentrifugalCorpse 55 lines, on Mar 19 9:17 PM. In Thoughts, Life, Sad, Society, Lost in thought, Friendship• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Live, laugh and love
But never learnby CentrifugalCorpse 22 lines, on Apr 4 4:53 PM. In Thoughts, Life, Other, Society, Lost in thought, Inspirational, Freewrite, Message• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
when we hold hands and
squeeze really tightly I canby The Slant 2 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 9 6:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Inspired by old apple orchards and the love of God for each of us• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Leaves drift in the still water
(yellow with memories of golden afternoons• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sound advice
is not always easily given,by Improv Machinery 16 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 8 12:20 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Across the blackness of a smokeless room
his powerful vocal renditions penetrateby liquidmindforever 33 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 29 12:23 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Sometimes, I look through the cast-offs
hidden in the backby SignifyingNothing 34 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 1 11:15 AM. In Contemporary, Contest, Dark, Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I know people like you and that's not a good thing. Lying their lives away with what they say. They love their lies, live their lives and lby Blue-Rose Beauty 45 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 27 3:17 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A world of hardened glass in myriad colors,
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Please stop crying
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It hurts you know
That feeling deep insideby Jepardy 40 lines, 7 comments, on Apr 4 6:52 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This is the place where once I lived,
Now there sits nothing there.by Jepardy 46 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 6 9:29 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Mimic me, Mimic you
It's my little gameby LadyOfFate 29 lines, on Feb 18 8:22 PM. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My guardian angel and I there stood.
We had conversed, as two friends should.by hieizgirl2000 43 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 26 5:38 PM 2006. In Contemporary, Dark, Fantasy, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
How I love you, though your hateful
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Lies, like a spider web, entangle me.
The spider is through with this game.by hieizgirl2000 26 lines, on Dec 26 4:28 PM 2006. In Contemporary• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don’t think you’ll ever feel for me the way I feel for you.You don’t have a clue.
by hieizgirl2000 34 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 12 2:19 PM 2005. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Find a falling star
and catch it in your hand.by hieizgirl2000 18 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 29 8:50 AM 2006. In Fantasy• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
it doesn't sound like it's about me when you first start reading, but it is. trust me.by Dreaming.of.reality 31 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 9 8:33 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The scent of your saltwater strands
more striking then the sallow sands.by Blue30 23 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 9 12:01 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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so, if i win, does that mean you'll comment on all me poems again? =P
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rofl oh yeah. well then i guess ill re comment in ur case
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WOO! =D
well, i could probably still get away with only a few repeats, ive been bored lately and writing alot. =P
how have you been?????????
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all my poems I consider good have already won trophies, so... ^^'
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haha then write one just fer me
haha.
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I'm having the same problem. xP
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can we enter poems that have not won awards yet, but may get awards before the contest ends?
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I was wondering the same thing. I have a couple of poems that are entered into other still ongoing contests.
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Sure. The point of that rule is that some people have one poem that is just plan good, and enter it over and over and over and over in contests and it keeps winning because its just that good. And i want to give some other people a chance without saying no to certain people. if the contest is pending, enter anyway
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This is interesting...
Makes you think harder about what you've written and also forces you to revisit works that you might not have thought about in a while.
Great thinking!
Hope you find some really satisfying works! -
does getting and "Honorable winner" count?
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This I would also like to know. In no way does an Honorable Mention "win" but it does have a trophy involved.
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Good god! 482 poems!!!! Enlist some help!! Or you will go as batty as me when I am sleep deprived. How the hell are you going to get though those all..... if you do get though those all in less then a week I will be impressed. Hell I will be impressed if you read that many in less then a month. good luck!! You will neeed it!
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*bows to you*
finally someone who understands!! I do about 50 a day or so, but i ALWAYS get a msg from some fruitcake trying to make top commentor of the day and they're all "stop trying to beat me!" and im like wtf seriously? I JUST WANNA JUDGE MY CONTEST! rofl. thanks for the support!
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bbut it's ended already

how can i participate
feeling sad
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