Please read whole description. Thank you.
What I want for this contest is TWO entries from you all. The entries must be:
-Your BEST prewrite, one you think is your best work - Optionally this write could be a fresh write.
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-Your WORST prewrite , one you think is your worst - This option must be a prewrite.
(I would appreciate no erotica/Highly religious poems)
I can see who enters what so I can compare the entries. I will be judging based on how much your writing has improved and what I think of the poem you submit to be your best.
I reserve the right to close this contest for whatever reason I see fit and to remove any entry that I feel isn't relevant to my contest. I will read all. May no longer have time to comment on all due to internet problems.
Rules:
No bashing other poets
No StICky CaPS or chat speak
Place in your AN which poem is your best and worst (hopefully I'll be able to tell.)
Good luck.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 23
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: 1st, 2nd, 3rd in order, following poems are randomly placed. This was hard to judge for more than one reason, some of you advanced so far and it was really good to see. This was the positive reason it was hard to judge, the negitives were as follows : some of you entered ONE poem which negated yourself a place right away as i specified clearly TWO poems each entry and which two types were needed. secondly, some of you did not follow the rules, as stated - write in your author note which poem is which. The ones who did not do this only have themselves to blame for not placing as I sent multiple reminders about both ! of these negatives.
Thank you all the poeple who entered correctly, followed the rules and won, placed,... majoritvly you all did well. Sorry on my behalf for it taking so long to judge, internet problems.
Contest Winners
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One boy
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by Umi Juvariel 62 lines, 61 comments, on May 22 10:45 PM 2008. In Love, Lonely
Bronze trophy winner
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Caught between tears and smile
eyes wonder up high for understandingby Freestyle Bushido 18 lines, 19 comments, on Jan 25 12:29 AM 2008. In Contemporary• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
How long he stood no one could remember
Only himby shadowraith 24 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 9 12:25 PM. In Nature• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
by lunarlunacy 41 lines, 20 comments, on Jul 20 3:24 PM. In stream of consciousness, Society, Personal, Thoughts, Weird, Adult• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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The shadows fall upon the forest
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Pride:
To thee I succumb to sin,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [123]
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It's really seven inches !
I measured it todayby Rakerman1 22 lines, 28 comments, on Apr 5 9:18 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
this is really rubbish btw!!• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A Horrific Mutilation of Sebadohby Doug Cavers 18 lines, on Jan 10 9:27 PM. In Dark, Pain, Sad, Love, Angst, Depression, Sadness, Longing, Teenage thinking, Loss• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Ruthless, hungry sons of war, murdering our hope and love
Bloody money is not worth the price of the slaughtering of the doveby bookwrm1324 7 lines, 18 comments, on Jan 26 12:08 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Falling down
Down from the skyby bookwrm1324 13 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 9 10:32 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by serenity silvermoon 12 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 11 10:08 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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written on Saturday march 17, 2007by serenity silvermoon 21 lines, 27 comments, on Mar 19 4:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Fields painted in the color of concrete
decorated by lights and sounds of city life,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Every time
I get closeby fake-or-real-smile 20 lines, 5 comments, on May 25 3:31 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She stiffens at the rise of a hand,
at the sounds of hate,by PsychoAnalysis 28 lines, 27 comments, on Feb 15 5:28 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
We all wish for something,
though they never turn out that way,by PsychoAnalysis 15 lines, on Feb 26 9:32 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You live a life outside of reality
Where lying, becomes truth in your mindby xoxmollyjxxx 36 lines, on Jan 7 8:29 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In the eyes of the world
Shall peace be revealedby Rhapsody 61 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 5 2:59 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Outside in the moonlight I will wait for you
Till the end of time will you hold my heartby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 32 lines, 10 comments, on Feb 4 5:32 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Summertime ends with a bittersweet goodbye as fall comes
She sighs, the memories made all but forgotten nowby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 32 lines, on Sep 17 7:12 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You've gone somewhere I can not find you,
you've gone beyond the stars.by The Tmnts Sister 17 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 15 5:41 PM 2008. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A fathers love is big enough,
To go all around.by The Tmnts Sister 12 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 18 8:47 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i see this
slightly harbored resentmentby libel - 15 lines, on Jan 25 6:39 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
U r my sun
My love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i cannot write about things i don't feel.
i try to pen my hate but can't.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
On a snowy day she sits on the sofa
in the guidance office that afternoonby YouWillBeLoved 90 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 26 2:14 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Hope, Life, Love, Sad, My own style, Friendship, Depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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by Salty Hibiscus 13 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 5 12:26 AM. In Contest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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as I sit and a feel this squish
i let myself goby Mr.Natural 13 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 24 3:38 AM 2008. In Humor• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i share your sport
up and downby kedoconnor 42 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 9 3:41 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I DON'T FREAKING KNOW O.K.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Beneath the iceberg it writhed
Born from the mud of former epoch.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I know that
you fire has dulledby The Untamed One 73 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 12 12:16 PM 2008. In Life• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What kind of person can you be
To see everyone around you dieby The Untamed One 33 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 22 3:27 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I did this after watching Columbine video...
that was a powerful and awful event...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Forbidden love / between a crow and a dove / they want to be together / forever / but the differences say / not today / and not tomorrow /by Zannah 25 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 22 11:52 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Oh, Pursuit of Happiness is my best, You're Taking Up Space; My worst.
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great contest
this is something new
i hate my older poems as do everyone lol but saying tht as i re read newer ones they soon lose the appeal lol -
Oh, I'll definitely enter this. I've got tons of poems, it's hard to figure out which I think is my best or my worst, honestly. All my old "junk" needs to be sifted through to find the worst one XD
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This is an excellent contest I think the way you are running it is totaaly awesome!!!!! You are truly brilliant!!!!! Your idea is truly incredible I
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Again with the problem that I can't enter prewrites. T___T Stupid computer.
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IM a mod about it. ^^ or open a ticket.
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burning a hole=worst
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please put that intheir ANs as with all the poems i have already idont think im going to remember that
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HOLY CRAP laura!! i was going to enter this contest but you already have 80-someodd entries! good lord
good luck reading and judging them all!
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rofl go ahead and enter if you want to ^_^ I dont care how many I get i'll still be readin em all =D
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Thats large laura!! Have fun judging

~pri
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The Real me the worst and Labyrinth my best
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There is no point telling me ill forget. Please write it into your author note so i can see when i read the poem. thank you.
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Hello World is probably my worst poem ever, but I think Inches is my best for the time being so yeah. I wrote Hello world in high school... a friend of mine being the muse behind it. She is also the muse for Inches, but I have gotten older sence then too... so I think Its a better way of describing myu feelings.
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I wish I could enter, but I can never, ever choose my 'best'. I have no probs picking my worst though...pretty much all of them lol.
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I think I boo booed by deleting one of my entries...I hit the wrong button and it won't let me fix it. Sorry
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I am stunned. Thank you so much for the honour of the Gold. It means so much to me. There are days I feel like I am growing...learning a bit more about poetry and life...then there are those days when I feel as though my feet have been encased in cement. Thank you for holding this contest. I hope it gives other people the encouragement to keep on keeping on!
Congrats to all the winners.
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You are welcome =) thank you so much for entering =)
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