that's right another contest from me and i'm still wanting emotion
so give me what you got, i prefer more painful or sad, but what ever you want as long as it has emotion
i except all happy, sad, erotic,cutting, rape,death, love, heartbreak ect...
as long as i can feel what you feel or see what you see through your words!!
lyrics are cool 2!
PW's are allowed
up to 2 writes per person
you can type how ever you like
as long as i can read it (not good at reading text)
good luck
i'll try to comment all but this is an unlimited entry so
i can only promise that i'll try to comment
thanx guys
have fun
so give me what you got, i prefer more painful or sad, but what ever you want as long as it has emotion
i except all happy, sad, erotic,cutting, rape,death, love, heartbreak ect...
as long as i can feel what you feel or see what you see through your words!!
lyrics are cool 2!
PW's are allowed
up to 2 writes per person
you can type how ever you like
as long as i can read it (not good at reading text)
good luck
i'll try to comment all but this is an unlimited entry so
i can only promise that i'll try to comment
thanx guys
have fun
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 29
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: ok you guys i've finished, i'm really sorry i didn't get around to commenting everyones entry. this was by far one of the hardest i've had to judge, i know i said i wanted everything
but in the end i preferred the painful, darker ones becuz of whats going on in my life at this time. if i could you would all be getting gold, but i did my best.
you should check out the winners, i think they're really good, and touched me personally. thanx everyone!
~violent glass~
Contest Winners
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She comes home from school
With tears built in her eyesby XxRazorxXCuts 23 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 20 2:07 PM 2008. In Suicide, cutting, sad, dark, depression
Honorable mention
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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When I was ten we drank rum
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but i keep thinking
about saying............good-bye
by addicted-flaw 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 20 2:50 PM. In Sad, Pain, My life, Suicide, Self, Depression, Weird• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
she was an angel, he told me,
i gave him a puzzled look,by allygirl87 48 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 20 10:38 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Why oh why am I so depressed
I'm in the place I love the bestby kotaverse 18 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 24 1:35 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by jayyniecakes. 51 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 22 6:12 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"I'm done with this relationship" Those were your final wordsby XxRazorxXCuts 23 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 25 8:53 PM 2008. In suicide, cutting, lost love, love, depression, sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Losing air
Grasping throatby Bleedlikeme1 8 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 23 2:28 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Watching everyone else smile,
but not being able to yourself.by jayyniecakes. 16 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 11 12:38 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I walk to your car,
by blood.stained.tears 58 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 24 5:49 PM• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I walked into your bedroom and found you that day
You were entangled in ribbons of crimson and didn't get up from where you lay• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Never ending, a river, rich, black, and lusting, soars away.
Mouth a gaping, it's cries out to the world lead blind fools astray.by there-goes-my-heart 33 lines, 20 comments, on Jan 24 7:26 PM. In Niftylicious, Personal, Lyrics, Love, Life, Thoughts, Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Under a surge of destruction and defeat,
Watching my limbs fall apart from me,by there-goes-my-heart 26 lines, on Sep 19 8:50 PM 2008. In Pain, Spiritual, Thoughts, Sad, Life, Niftylicious• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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I search for the courage I know that I lack
You've taken a part of me that I can't get back• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She falls to
the ground andby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 59 lines, 11 comments, on Jan 4 2:18 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The person you
love the mostby XxLoverOfDarknessxX 42 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 18 3:54 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It's the taste of vomit that really gets you.
Not the thick stench of perfume.by Just Paper 23 lines, on Jan 25 8:08 PM• Viewed by judge. -
On a snowy day she sits on the sofa
in the guidance office that afternoonby YouWillBeLoved 90 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 26 2:14 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Hope, Life, Love, Sad, My own style, Friendship, Depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
She met me in the very middle.
I took a step forward, in order to talk more clearly,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
when time chooses to throw down
the truth better be rubbed bloody raw from your backbone• Viewed by judge.
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they are well done! all winner
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