I want poems when you first joined Allpoetry.
Enter as many as your old poems then enter a fresh one.
The normal rules apply:
Do not molest your shift key
i will hunt you down and do crazy kung fu on you.
left aligned
i want metaphors
i want raw emotions
i want imagery
ap name in authors notes
i will gradually add more points
You must enter a new write after you enter your prewrites, put the link in your AN so i know you did.
If i put a poem in finalist it doesnt mean itd stay there ill probably change it a couple times as i reread them.
*picture at top taken by me
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 20
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering.
It was extremely hard to judge so many amazing entries.
Contest Winners
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My damp, disgusting insides are like twisted molding clay.
The store-bought kind that never dries, or cracks and rots away.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A circle of light
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frogs croak in the twilight, the stars are painted on a celestial canvas,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [417]
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have you ever seen your friend breakdown?
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All the colors of the rainbow are incorporated in one subtle white boll.
Though it stands in a field with so many more, something about it is special, a small kind of special.by theVIP 5 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 7 10:10 AM. In nature, personal, other, hope, weird, spiritual, thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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by Bedroom Eyes 35 lines, 108 comments, on Aug 19 6:14 PM 2007. In Spiritual, Sensual, Thoughts, Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She runs away from everything she had
Run baby run here comes your hateful dadby sucks2beyou712 52 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 21 9:22 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"Mommy, mommy" this I cry
"Is this the way you want me to die?by sucks2beyou712 27 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 14 8:01 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I did this after watching Columbine video...
that was a powerful and awful event...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
hello world i great you like a new summers dayby DaughterxXxofxXxNyx 20 lines, on Dec 24 11:37 AM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My sister asked my father
How do you knowby jimek 57 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 14 4:04 PM 2008. In Life Story• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I went to check the mail
At the top of the hill• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What can I say that's not cliche?
Maybe there's a way to make pureeby Blue30 44 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 6 8:58 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
OPTION My favorite hobbie is watching movies and this is my favorite, I love The Shining!• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Subconscious desires comfort,
thoughts create shredded pieces of truth,by Blue30 35 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 12 4:24 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Precise, perfect, proper purity.
Exquisite epitome of exactness.by Blue30 13 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 1 3:47 PM• Viewed by judge. -
Prison ia hell on earth,
Never predicting this place at your birth,by caos-cordura 13 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 11 2:37 AM 2008. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My life is like a roller coaster,
It has its up and downs,by caos-cordura 4 lines, on Oct 24 9:21 AM 2008. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I needed you
when we was falling financially,by caos-cordura 36 lines, 12 comments, on Jul 20 11:40 PM 2008. In Contest, Life, Human Nature, Personal, Thoughts, My life, Anger, Family, Teen• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
you can't win, because you can't fight it,by caos-cordura 5 lines, on Jun 18 1:17 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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my life seems so full of pain the outside world drowned in rainby caos-cordura 11 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 9 12:35 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I open my eyes and the abyss swirls around them
Burning with the salty tang of the seaby ShannonLea 24 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 18 7:42 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The little town, the country town
Full of dusty roads, and old homesby ShannonLea 15 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 2 9:53 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Love song for the confused
Broken, bleeding, and the bruised• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The simple cradle, holding
amongst other things, a trail of ropeby manwithshoesforhands 27 lines, 2 comments, on May 19 2:42 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I bleed onto paper
When I cry, the story writes itselfby Simp 21 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 8 11:24 PM 2007. In Teenage thinking• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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I am invisible, no matter what I do
I need not say a word, it's unheardby Simp 56 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 17 8:58 AM 2006. In Teenage Thinking• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I don't think you're understanding the seriousness of the words I'm saying
I don't think you're understanding how hard it's getting to say• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I have fallen for you, this I know
So don’t take a part, steal my show• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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The End.
I took from life what life gave to me.
All to the darkness, nothing to the sun...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Crystal moon-light, Casting down sugar-tasting iridescent diamonds…• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Not a sound comes out of my mouth
Just those silent raindrops
by TaintedLoveSong 20 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 7 6:12 PM 2008. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I site here
Imagining your body next to mine• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Winding paths fill the space Twists and turns, so many to face• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It's more of a lyric song-poemby Moses.Reid 56 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 12 9:18 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It's more of a lyric song-poemby Moses.Reid 49 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 11 10:56 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Open the bedroom window,
To a beautiful vista,by Moses.Reid 11 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 26 9:40 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What do you think?1• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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With her dirty deeds, she's dug her self deep,
Every night with another man she sleeps,by Miss Behavior 39 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 24 4:24 PM 2008. In Dark, Pain, Depression, Teen issues• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Velvet darkness falls on satin sheets
she rolls carefully away from his heatby darc347 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 6 9:52 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"I didn't take my Meds today".
He bragsby laurel 25 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 24 10:51 AM 2008. In Angst, Thoughts, Society, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Freewrite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
book ends
two dogs sleepby Draig aine 2 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 1 9:19 AM. In NaPoMo• Viewed by judge. -
mirror mirror on the wall
did you watch and see me fallby nitelite 11 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 28 8:49 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Television, intimate depression.. from you I learned many a lession, my companion, my best friend comforted me til the end.
by Blue30 14 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 19 2:36 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Diligently she held
the {hoops} close• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
about my hill--
where the moon shoneby kedoconnor 66 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 24 8:21 PM. In youth• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There's an old joke - um... two elderly women are at a Catskill mountain resort, and one of 'em says, "Boy, the food at this place is really terrible." The other one says, "Yeah, I know; and such small portions."• Viewed by judge.
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Cheese wizz ya ever eat the stuff its good on crackers but more than a few is gross
and what about tang fake ass orange breakfast drink that shit is gross tooby Mr.Natural 8 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 5 7:35 PM 2008. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Succumb to yourself, my friendby Kia Tenshi 18 lines, on Dec 13 7:16 PM 2007. In dark, pain, sad, depressing, personal, thoughts, life, emotional, weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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He knew I was there,
And still walked by.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Then that cute little look,
What is she thinking?by lilblueeyesmine1978 78 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 29 2:17 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The models these days make me sick,
All tiny and thin, they look like a stick.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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..how old do the poems have to be?
cause my first like 50 poems or so until around june/july were complete crap..and even a few months ago i sucked.. i still do aha.
so ya, basically im wondering how not-old my old PW's can be?
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Maybe at least a year old i just dont want people entering poems that they only wrote like 4 monthes ago and i dont think any of your poems suck enter them and ill check them out.
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mine were all wrote in august, but that is when i joined AP, so is that alright?
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yes that is fine
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I'll see if I can find something to enter. I've only been writing less than two years and I'm not too fond of my oldest poems.
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I still would love if you can enter them I just dont want poems that were only written a couple monthes ago.
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I'm rereading some of my old poems and my style of writing was sooo different. I'll find some to enter but don't be too harsh if you think they're horrible
lol
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When I put in the onlynew one that i have I did not notice that It was compleatly under 20 lines. I am not sure how to get it out of the contest.
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i put that rule there by accident i will remove it
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i haven't been on AP for years. Just about a year or so.. so you won't find any from me older than say April or May of last year. Sorry but can't get any older.
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I just want some of the first poems you put on AP.
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ugh...I can't remember how long ago i wrote some of these. some of them should at least be a year...but i'm not sure. just delete them if they don't fit what you are looking for.
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For some reason I can't enter any of my poems. I don't understand what's going on. I will be back on tomorrow and try again. Michele
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wow. i was looking for a contest to try and win my 20th trophy. then, i found your 20th contest. weird
this looks like fun.
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I only joined in may of 2008. I submitted three poems. Not sure they are what your looking for but they are from my heart.
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Hi I wrote this probably 5 years ago. Hope you like
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I clicked on to the feature but the contest was already closed! Sorry you've wasted your points - I delete my poems when they've been on for a month or so anyway, so you wouldn't have liked my entry, if I had been in time to make one. blah.
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i reopened this contest it will most likely be open til the 9th.
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Merry meet,
I am slightly confused (a state I am usually in) about this rule:
You must enter a new write after you enter your prewrites, put the link in your AN so i know you did.
Exactly where in the AN are we suppose to put it? In the older poems we submitted or a link to the older poems in our new poem? Here is a link to my new poem for your contest.

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Oops, I forgot to add a newer one. Bummer, I think I like my older ones better! My muse has been fighting with me lately, haha.
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I have join this community about two months ago , i am sending all the poems which i have written in these two months . is that ok.
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most of the poems haven't been viewed by the judge, so how is she going to be able to read over 400 poems in just 2 days!?
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I am judging on the weekend so I have plenty of time to read that much I am avid reader I've read 200 books in 2 months i think i can read 400 poems in 2 days.
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Aren't you expecting a little too much when you are asking for the oldest poem one has to offer and asking for metaphors and imagery in it? What you'd get from most people are more recent mature pieces bluffing their way through for the trophy... The one I submit is a poem I wrote at the age of 9. How would you expect that to compete against poems submitted by 20 odd year olds? I mean there has to be a standard evaluating scale...
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oh, I don't envy you, you have a lot of reading to do...! Unless you took the week off, you might have to judge on the first impression of the first skim-over (an important feature of any poem)...
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Instead of making us put our name in author notes why don't use just uncheck the anonymous box so it is not an anonymous contest?
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yesterday I spent atleast a half an hour entering my poems into your contest and I don't see a single one here. Did you delete them all?
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To answer both your questions I do not have an gold account so i cannot uncheck the anonymous box and no i didn't delete any poems from here there are at least 8 pages your poems are most likely on the last page.
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thanks so much for silver & HM

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Thank you so much!!!
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You deserved it you have an amazing way with words.

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