I want poems when you first joined Allpoetry.
Enter as many as your old poems then enter a fresh one.
The normal rules apply:
Do not molest your shift key
i will hunt you down and do crazy kung fu on you.
left aligned
i want metaphors
i want raw emotions
i want imagery
ap name in authors notes
i will gradually add more points
You must enter a new write after you enter your prewrites, put the link in your AN so i know you did.
If i put a poem in finalist it doesnt mean itd stay there ill probably change it a couple times as i reread them.
*picture at top taken by me
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on April 20
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 4 people
- Final notes: Thank you all for entering.
It was extremely hard to judge so many amazing entries.
Contest Winners
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My damp, disgusting insides are like twisted molding clay.
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frogs croak in the twilight, the stars are painted on a celestial canvas,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Entries [417]
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by Irisheyes35 42 lines, 2 comments, on May 23 12:59 AM 2008. In Adult, life, pain, personal, and forbidden love.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'll never the cold January day,
When a man decided to play Godby Irisheyes35 44 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 2 12:32 AM 2008. In My life, Dedication, Loss, Spiritual, Personal, Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Everyday is nothing but, stress.
That's life though.by Irisheyes35 38 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 4 12:15 AM 2008. In Dedication, My life, Hope, Family, Pain, Personal.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When I get the chance to tell her, When I get the chance to sayby Sorrowful Lament 39 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 1 12:17 AM 2008. In love life her other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I’m inching forward- A kiss on your lips . . .by Sorrowful Lament 69 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 1 12:31 AM 2008. In horror macabre blood death bloody killing heartbeat water roses watering can dying• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm backing away, Wind tickling my petals.by Sorrowful Lament 103 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 1 12:32 AM 2008. In horror macabre blood death bloody killing heartbeat yellow roses zombie• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A sheet of paper,
Half filled, laying upon a deserted desk.by Sorrowful Lament 41 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 1 12:26 AM 2008. In environment global warming al gore purged abortion• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A pain . . . Given by love . . .by Sorrowful Lament 12 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 1 12:18 AM 2008. In emo sad love poem poetry• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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desire and passion
beneath the summers rainby dreamweaver08 18 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 3 1:49 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
If i died would you cry for me, would you be heartbroken, or would you simply brush it off
would you cry a thousand tears for me,by dreamweaver08 27 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 10 6:50 PM 2005. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
TORN REFLECTIONS IN A SHATTERED MIRROR
I see you standing there, lookingby dreamweaver08 30 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 18 1:18 PM 2005. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The gurgling brook is passing by, pounding on rocks,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Boris Plotz 42 lines, 20 comments, on Feb 22 8:45 PM 2007. In god.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Boris Plotz 29 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 25 11:26 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I've never seen such golden grass
Or skies so baby-blueby Wolf Run0 17 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 1 8:04 AM• Viewed by judge. -
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by Dragon Flame 20 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 1 1:56 PM. In Personal• Viewed by judge.
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I'm sorry for all the ways that i have hurt you, I'm sorry for not being the person that you wanted me to be,by look for tomorrow 23 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 3 9:40 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Magic floats through the air,
as the couple kisses under the stars• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You seemed so glad
I never knewby Michelleasaurus- Rex 50 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 11 9:41 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A rose in handcuffs.
petals ripped and torn,by hopergroper 3 lines, on Mar 1 12:29 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Insanity is a Ledge,
I think I shall jump.by lunarlunacy 14 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 6 10:31 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm like a telephone, I like to be held,by xpinkxkissesx 4 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 24 12:55 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Darkness, Oh darkness, please fall,
the moon, so silvery, so bright,by xpinkxkissesx 31 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 4 7:10 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
a tear streaks my face and i walk up to were those who were there could see, the audience looking like black specs, i take the folded paper and undo it• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She had solemn brown eyes
and a pretty down-turned mouthby HereComesTheSun 14 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 6 7:53 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
About the sentamentality of the relationship between me and my best friend.by xXBlondeZillaXx 50 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 13 6:06 PM. In best, friends, friend, depression, happiness, madz• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Just-Meghan 14 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 9 9:39 PM 2007. In Music• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Like the leaves falling from a tree
by ladyjae 18 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 22 10:56 AM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
this is another poem that I wrote a long time ago when I was severely depressed. ladyjae• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A journey to the Garden
Where each bud is nipped with rime.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Enter the darkness of night,
a gentle, soothing calm;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Pretty bells, that’s what I see
Soft sweet bells, that’s what I hear.by blood.stained.tears 13 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 30 3:15 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
in the first hours before dawn
we double up the goods and the brimmed up poisonby kedoconnor 33 lines, on Dec 10 1:13 PM 2008. In work• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Circus Tent
I have decided and decided I have• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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So precious she was
so perfect she seemed• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Gentle Jesus meek and good
Crucified on a Cross of woodby Edward R. Lamington 3 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 15 11:58 AM 2007. In Jesus• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
They found her body hanging from the ceiling. Can you see her?by MyLifeOnPaper 8 lines, 5 comments, on May 31 9:09 PM 2008. In pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The love of my life How i miss himby MyLifeOnPaper 15 lines, 1 comment, on May 31 8:05 PM 2008. In Lost Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Waking up so dazed and confused
Not Sure if its from the pills or himby MyLifeOnPaper 47 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 9 11:33 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Once in a frequent while– my new wonted way – a desolate way
With moderations of madness that I no longer have, a constant muse of sweet Mby kissing the lipless 23 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 2 4:54 PM 2007. In Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I withered lasso hangs from a saddle
inside an empty stall of an old barn.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I have felt a black hole in my heart many times.
Sometimes it has been so large that it suckedby Swan song 38 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 1 10:24 AM
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He used to look me in the eye and ask "How do you feel."
I always averted my eyes away and answered '"fine."• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Crystal designs of frost formed on the wind shield
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O blighted lover
Gorged and bloated upon self deceptive liesby malkinpuss 26 lines, 59 comments, on Sep 2 8:18 AM 2004. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"...when death slumbers...
... it dreams of you"• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
in the ashes of November
lie the remnants of the day• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Blood pours through cracks and down on faces,
Wide with wonder and anticipating coming events,by Chaotic peaceofmind 9 lines, on Jan 3 2:49 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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"By gawd I hate them lying theives"
he thought,by malkinpuss 25 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 14 4:05 PM• Viewed by judge. -
Love that flows,
From deep with in me,by The Tmnts Sister 12 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 17 4:59 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
christ almighty!
damn the day....by malkinpuss 27 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 14 4:57 PM• Viewed by judge.
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Comments
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..how old do the poems have to be?
cause my first like 50 poems or so until around june/july were complete crap..and even a few months ago i sucked.. i still do aha.
so ya, basically im wondering how not-old my old PW's can be?
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Maybe at least a year old i just dont want people entering poems that they only wrote like 4 monthes ago and i dont think any of your poems suck enter them and ill check them out.
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mine were all wrote in august, but that is when i joined AP, so is that alright?
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yes that is fine
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I'll see if I can find something to enter. I've only been writing less than two years and I'm not too fond of my oldest poems.
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I still would love if you can enter them I just dont want poems that were only written a couple monthes ago.
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I'm rereading some of my old poems and my style of writing was sooo different. I'll find some to enter but don't be too harsh if you think they're horrible
lol
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When I put in the onlynew one that i have I did not notice that It was compleatly under 20 lines. I am not sure how to get it out of the contest.
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i put that rule there by accident i will remove it
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i haven't been on AP for years. Just about a year or so.. so you won't find any from me older than say April or May of last year. Sorry but can't get any older.
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I just want some of the first poems you put on AP.
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ugh...I can't remember how long ago i wrote some of these. some of them should at least be a year...but i'm not sure. just delete them if they don't fit what you are looking for.
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For some reason I can't enter any of my poems. I don't understand what's going on. I will be back on tomorrow and try again. Michele
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wow. i was looking for a contest to try and win my 20th trophy. then, i found your 20th contest. weird
this looks like fun.
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I only joined in may of 2008. I submitted three poems. Not sure they are what your looking for but they are from my heart.
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Hi I wrote this probably 5 years ago. Hope you like
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I clicked on to the feature but the contest was already closed! Sorry you've wasted your points - I delete my poems when they've been on for a month or so anyway, so you wouldn't have liked my entry, if I had been in time to make one. blah.
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i reopened this contest it will most likely be open til the 9th.
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Merry meet,
I am slightly confused (a state I am usually in) about this rule:
You must enter a new write after you enter your prewrites, put the link in your AN so i know you did.
Exactly where in the AN are we suppose to put it? In the older poems we submitted or a link to the older poems in our new poem? Here is a link to my new poem for your contest.

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Oops, I forgot to add a newer one. Bummer, I think I like my older ones better! My muse has been fighting with me lately, haha.
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I have join this community about two months ago , i am sending all the poems which i have written in these two months . is that ok.
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most of the poems haven't been viewed by the judge, so how is she going to be able to read over 400 poems in just 2 days!?
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I am judging on the weekend so I have plenty of time to read that much I am avid reader I've read 200 books in 2 months i think i can read 400 poems in 2 days.
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Aren't you expecting a little too much when you are asking for the oldest poem one has to offer and asking for metaphors and imagery in it? What you'd get from most people are more recent mature pieces bluffing their way through for the trophy... The one I submit is a poem I wrote at the age of 9. How would you expect that to compete against poems submitted by 20 odd year olds? I mean there has to be a standard evaluating scale...
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oh, I don't envy you, you have a lot of reading to do...! Unless you took the week off, you might have to judge on the first impression of the first skim-over (an important feature of any poem)...
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Instead of making us put our name in author notes why don't use just uncheck the anonymous box so it is not an anonymous contest?
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yesterday I spent atleast a half an hour entering my poems into your contest and I don't see a single one here. Did you delete them all?
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To answer both your questions I do not have an gold account so i cannot uncheck the anonymous box and no i didn't delete any poems from here there are at least 8 pages your poems are most likely on the last page.
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thanks so much for silver & HM

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Thank you so much!!!
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You deserved it you have an amazing way with words.

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