It's new year and I've become a slight bit drunk! not to say I can't comment on some wonderful poems! I want something wonderful... Whatever you have to offer as long as pertains to the rules.
Rules.
*Spell check, it helps
*Label entries correctly
*No more than 100 lines
*Ask if you have problems
Up to 20 entries each.
24 hours open. It's to aid the HUGE contest I'll be holding.
If my comments don't make sense, they are drunken! I will explain if confused.
Love & merry new years
~ Stef ~
Note: I may or may not comment on them all. Honestly, I don't know. All I know is that I'm stressed and upset at the moment, for no real good reason. So I guess I'm an idiot >-<. But anyways, that's not the point. Thanks all for entering your poems in. They will all be read, IF not all commented on.
Loves x Stef x
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 20
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Well done everyone. Sorry too me FOREVER to judge.
Basically I have commented on a fair few, but I WILL carry on commenting on them even after contest closes.
Well done to everyone. xxx
Contest Winners
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [278]
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The kitchen knife becomes inviting, as Chelsea's life is not worth fighting.
The scars run up and down her wrist, as life crumbles she hides a bloody fist.by heavenbird 30 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 1 12:16 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by And Hyetal 53 lines, 16 comments, on Dec 20 10:12 PM 2008. In city• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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"When's Daddy coming home? Mama, are we really alone?"
"Daddy'll be home soon my sweet angel, Allie baby, don't cry."by heavenbird 40 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 1 12:13 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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What was old, now is new;
A promise unaffected by what we do.by heavenbird 41 lines, 46 comments, on Dec 1 12:12 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by lowercase prelude 18 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 11 6:47 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Metaphoric lies serve no purpose;
...neither do your taffeta imperfections or silk betrayals.by heavenbird 8 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 25 10:33 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Autumn moons, tear-shed eyes;
Setting suns, and disintegrated lies.by heavenbird 8 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 22 11:40 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Add my heart to yours
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Angels of fallen desire
demons in eternal fire• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Pattering down the hallway to the room below
she watches as the snow flits by the window• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My flesh hangs from the hope that use to be
no more strength in realityby Maili Knephthan 23 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 9 5:26 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Being with you gets me in a way that I never thought it would
Reckless, careless, crying out in much pain to this worldby Maili Knephthan 15 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 6 7:35 PM 2008. In Contest, Acrostic, Title, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Do you see the little one standing over there?
The one with the ragged dress and greasy hair,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Scales polished by the desert sand,
this glossy blue dragon takes a standby Maili Knephthan 25 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 30 3:21 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Chaotic churning deep with in the soul
fear holding you within its fearsome grip• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Holding the little silver blade,
between my finger and thumb,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Screams echoes through the air
this is not the dragon's lair• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
sing me a song that lasts through the winters night,
of snowballs, sunshine, and snowie fights,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Take me with you when you leave this world
I am but a motal that wishes to be with my love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
your sweet arms held me dear
in your embrace there is no fear• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
In the dark of night he watches this beauty,
this semitry of motion, her muscles move• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Longing for the forbidden kiss
Over the forgotten veil• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Taken to the silken sheets
Running from the worlds cheatsby Maili Knephthan 6 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 19 10:55 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I think of Beth the pastor's daughter
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by Kiss the girl--x 20 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 30 10:39 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Kiss the girl--x 27 lines, on Dec 30 8:05 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Kiss the girl--x 26 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 29 5:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Kiss the girl--x 16 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 26 9:35 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Kiss the girl--x 15 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 20 12:48 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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For Sarah, a friend who was raped & murdered. May the angels fly you safely home,Sarah.by songstress80 25 lines, 60 comments, on Dec 26 6:51 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I’m destroying humanity
Burning through the pages of the soul's diary
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by Kiss the girl--x 18 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 18 3:34 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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How easily the dial turns to show divergent flowers
Even from a slight wind it seems the design changes.• Commented on by judge. -
by Kiss the girl--x 35 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 3 8:56 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by edens-envy 12 lines, 10 comments, on Dec 1 12:18 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The heavens shudder and cry
with each exhalation of breath as I try• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by Kiss the girl--x 33 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 20 3:00 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The Class was made from pure hearted individuals
with the same thought in mind,by Butterfly24 42 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 20 9:41 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Here I am-
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Snowflakes are latticework upon my roof.
Ice weeps from the limbs of trees.by edens-envy 34 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 10 7:38 PM 2008. In Sad, Personal, Thoughts, Friendship, Death• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I miss you.
with anyone elseby jayyniecakes. 37 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 31 2:21 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Go ahead. Why don't you?
go on and tear me down
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goodbye to you
my almost loverby songstress80 25 lines, 21 comments, on Nov 26 10:39 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I pray for inspiration
Guide me and let me find my wayby songstress80 26 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 7 12:27 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the truth i dont want to tell.
if you know all my secrets?by jayyniecakes. 31 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 29 12:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Thunders clash in my inner eye
Lightnings flash against velvet sky.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Somewhere in the azure night
Lies this girl without a plight
by Slicks78 36 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 1 12:32 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I want to ride you, with my ride
Will you bang on my snare drum?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm slowly dying, through my down turned eyes
Weeping tears, humming lost lullabies• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The rain clouds are so thick, you could touch them
And the sky is choking me, with it's grey sarrow• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The part of you
that trusted othersby jayyniecakes. 26 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 31 2:47 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
the time when
hearts beat slowly,by jayyniecakes. 15 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 31 7:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I'm not gonna let you keep them from me.
I deserve better than that.by jayyniecakes. 15 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 31 2:41 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The way you look at her,
the way your eyes light up.by jayyniecakes. 12 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 31 2:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
i love the feeling when tears stop,
pain numbs.by jayyniecakes. 14 lines, 7 comments, on Dec 30 12:42 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I am every mountain
every peak and every sky.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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who shall pull out the sword in the stone
this heart of mine turned bitter, coldby songstress80 32 lines, 24 comments, on Nov 16 8:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Like a lost tear on the pillow
Like crying, the lonesome weeping willow• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She sits at her vanity table
Blind, old, and worn.by songstress80 28 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 11 12:13 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Splashing water,
hits my dress,by Miss Chievous 14 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 17 4:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
by bodine510 6 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 31 9:52 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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-takes title to heart(s)- Lol. -grins-
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... i like them ummm margariter deels ... ... peoms ???? 
yukyukyukyuk heheheh ..........................................................
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You must be drunk, Over 250 entries,, wow, I think I'll miss out there, I'd have liked to have done a fresh write for you, but hey, 250?
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I hope you get to actually view all the poems before the contest is judged...
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250 entries..
have fun with that
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Wow - gold trophy! Really?
Thank you so much. I am much obliged.
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Thanaks for the HM Stef. Congrats to the other winners.
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Thank you for the HM and congrats to the others!
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