It's new year and I've become a slight bit drunk! not to say I can't comment on some wonderful poems! I want something wonderful... Whatever you have to offer as long as pertains to the rules.
Rules.
*Spell check, it helps
*Label entries correctly
*No more than 100 lines
*Ask if you have problems
Up to 20 entries each.
24 hours open. It's to aid the HUGE contest I'll be holding.
If my comments don't make sense, they are drunken! I will explain if confused.
Love & merry new years
~ Stef ~
Note: I may or may not comment on them all. Honestly, I don't know. All I know is that I'm stressed and upset at the moment, for no real good reason. So I guess I'm an idiot >-<. But anyways, that's not the point. Thanks all for entering your poems in. They will all be read, IF not all commented on.
Loves x Stef x
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 20
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Well done everyone. Sorry too me FOREVER to judge.
Basically I have commented on a fair few, but I WILL carry on commenting on them even after contest closes.
Well done to everyone. xxx
Contest Winners
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Entries [281]
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while the end of life has unwilling took hold of my hand,
Alone, My cries of mercy, fall upon dead ears,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
the mouse,
ran through the house• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Remembering Stained glass• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Clinging to his back,
Sailing above the Earth,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Here are my last words,
Blood soaked confessions of death,by NeverBeTheSame 85 lines, on Sep 30 1:48 AM 2003. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
On the first day,He created light,
Called it day,and called the darkness night,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
life goes on, I must try to survive,
In a new world friendless for a lifetime.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
So many different colors
Oddballs and pairs alike• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lying on white sands I watched the sun kiss
the sea at dusk of day; waves break and sprayby Quill Bill 14 lines, 8 comments, on May 29 6:08 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
If we couldn’t see the stars we’d never believe they shine,
Divine by design? Is love biological poetry or a fable,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
today as i was cleaning
your letters i did find• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i heard him crying late one night and my heart broke so• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Gentle breeze blows hair from eye
Women basking in summer sun.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A painting of death I bought, so I could see my future.
Instead I saw my past.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
shrouded in veils of metal
how am I to penetrate• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"My heart is inside-out" he said.
"I think of nothing but you".by XcPrincessB 18 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 9 8:28 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I love the way you fall at my feet,
Or is it over them, I forgot they're not attached..• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
the only time you call
is when you needby songstress80 36 lines, 19 comments, on Nov 15 6:50 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I lie awake
Thinking of youby songstress80 24 lines, 17 comments, on Dec 20 10:28 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My purpose in life is very simple,
it is to make people smile,by The Tmnts Sister 16 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 20 5:12 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
You've gone somewhere I can not find you,
you've gone beyond the stars.by The Tmnts Sister 17 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 15 5:41 PM 2008. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I decided one day,
To walk through the forest,by The Tmnts Sister 24 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 6 6:36 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm am standing here in front of him,
wondering what to do.by The Tmnts Sister 40 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 22 5:31 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Ghost and Goblins,
Skeletons and ghouls,by The Tmnts Sister 8 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 7 5:56 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
My dog spot can do many tricks,
He can fetch, he can swim,by The Tmnts Sister 8 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 7 5:46 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The leaves on the trees are starting to change,
To welcome the coming fall,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
To you,the earth is at a stand still,
But to me it roams.by The Tmnts Sister 16 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 6 9:18 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Beyond the beauty of my wings
Rages an internal storm• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Ebony masses of curls so soft,
his big brown eyes melt me like a candle,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
not good but i had to try it sounded interesting and trust me definitely it's tough• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Winter wind whistles through the hollow
Here she hangs high above the ground• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It's a beautiful world
that's what they say• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Each day could be the end
Round up all the seeds, and start again• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
See them over there?
Here they come out of nowhere!• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Praying for help
Yet there's no way out, or so it seems.
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Born in a little town,Bethlehem,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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What's the point of searching for happiness
When such a thing doesn't even exsistby traveon100 22 lines, on Oct 8 10:14 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Go ahead; blow it again
You think it’s your best friend• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This country spits disgrace in my face
I never ever thought this will be the place• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What is…?
That foolish Americanby traveon100 47 lines, 16 comments, on Jun 8 1:01 PM 2008. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Every Winter the hills in front of our house was covered with a thick blanket of snow.
Too poor to buy sleds my brother and I stole an old• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There was a place, once spoken about by my Grandpa, A place of wonder and delight,by The Tmnts Sister 9 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 18 8:32 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Observe the soul, The wonderful soul,by The Tmnts Sister 10 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 18 7:54 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Fire, Fire, Fire that burns deep within the soul.by The Tmnts Sister 7 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 17 4:44 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Love that flows,
From deep with in me,by The Tmnts Sister 12 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 17 4:59 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Have you ever noticed
the girl that crosses you• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
He used to sit
at Newland's drug store• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm staring at the ceiling,
where geometrical colorsby Midori-Ayana 27 lines, 15 comments, on Dec 3 3:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
One day I woke up,
and I forgot to pray for you.by Midori-Ayana 25 lines, 11 comments, on Dec 2 5:57 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When I was young there were only three channels
Cricketers used to wear white shirt and flannelsby malcy 62 lines, 2 comments, on Jan 1 7:11 PM. In Childhood memories• Viewed by judge.
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Comments
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-takes title to heart(s)- Lol. -grins-
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... i like them ummm margariter deels ...
... peoms ???? 
yukyukyukyuk heheheh ..........................................................
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You must be drunk, Over 250 entries,
, wow, I think I'll miss out there, I'd have liked to have done a fresh write for you, but hey, 250?
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I hope you get to actually view all the poems before the contest is judged...
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250 entries..
have fun with that
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Wow - gold trophy! Really?
Thank you so much. I am much obliged.
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Thanaks for the HM Stef. Congrats to the other winners.
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Thank you for the HM and congrats to the others!








