It's new year and I've become a slight bit drunk! not to say I can't comment on some wonderful poems! I want something wonderful... Whatever you have to offer as long as pertains to the rules.
Rules.
*Spell check, it helps
*Label entries correctly
*No more than 100 lines
*Ask if you have problems
Up to 20 entries each.
24 hours open. It's to aid the HUGE contest I'll be holding.
If my comments don't make sense, they are drunken! I will explain if confused.
Love & merry new years
~ Stef ~
Note: I may or may not comment on them all. Honestly, I don't know. All I know is that I'm stressed and upset at the moment, for no real good reason. So I guess I'm an idiot >-<. But anyways, that's not the point. Thanks all for entering your poems in. They will all be read, IF not all commented on.
Loves x Stef x
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 20
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
- Final notes: Well done everyone. Sorry too me FOREVER to judge.
Basically I have commented on a fair few, but I WILL carry on commenting on them even after contest closes.
Well done to everyone. xxx
Contest Winners
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No, I was NOT high.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am looking forward to brighter days,
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Lies falling as rain
dripping and falling onto the ground• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Last night I saw you with another man,
you were wrapped tightly in his embrace.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The worlds rugged beauty is yours molly, all yours,
From the rainy, wet scottish highlands,by Sacred Geometry 26 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 29 6:00 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In the red dawns light,
A dolphin leaps out of,by Sacred Geometry 28 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 29 5:26 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
10 lines excluding space between stanzas.by Greenhorn 15 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 29 7:03 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The clouds are her coffin.
by Greenhorn 26 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 31 4:04 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The other was shortened to fit the requirements of a contest and tweaked a bit.by Greenhorn 55 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 28 11:38 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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12 lines, excluding the spaces between the stanzas.by Greenhorn 17 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 28 11:50 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The corner of Broadway
And West 34thby new born 29 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 5 7:30 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Falling gracefully from your face, tears of bitter diamond taste
Dew drops of sorrow and pain, without a direction no need for a nameby Rhythm Child 16 lines, 43 comments, on Oct 10 5:59 PM 2008. In Abuse, Pain, Personal, Sad, Dark, Life, Love, Sadness, Lost love, noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I dance
To chase away the darkby new born 31 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 29 1:53 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am the indian summer's cray pas composition--
suffused by the white of autumn cherry blossomsby owlish 44 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 25 10:31 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Probably sounds dumb. I'm in a symphony orchestra. Written for Symphony.by owlish 36 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 6 6:52 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I stand in the rain with heavens tears kissing my skin
Tingling, lingeringby Rhythm Child 30 lines, 61 comments, on Dec 9 2:39 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Spiritual, Love, Longing, Dedication, Loss, noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Drown myself in babies tears
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My heart is a mechanical matrix of malice, chemical flushes of hate,
Negate, please? The spawn of an age in between, Satan’s spawby Rhythm Child 24 lines, 40 comments, on Nov 1 11:58 AM 2008. In noguest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by just weak hands 22 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 23 8:21 PM 2008. In Contest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by just weak hands 20 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 1 7:52 PM• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My parents say I'm psycho,
Im not human,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
hum on a quick notice id say tisn't to bad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Grandma sits so sadly,old age taking toll,each day is• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Like the petals of one perfect red rose,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Do you wish that funny smell,
that follows you each day• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lady Euphoria, send your hope my way ...by everyone1 30 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 18 4:48 PM 2008
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Sometimes I cry,
The pain is too much,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
~ Far and beyond the normal,
true originality always remains honest,by everyone1 45 lines, 59 comments, on Jun 11 6:57 AM
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I read your poem from start to the end...
I read it twice and then to a friend...by The Beast 11 lines, on Dec 22 2:12 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
What if, you had another chance...
To actually see something, not just a glance...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by songstress80 32 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 7 5:36 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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She sits there all alone.
Cuts in every direction.by ImMcLovinBabe 6 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 30 4:02 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
She belongs to heaven.
She`s coming over like a bloody suicide.by ImMcLovinBabe 7 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 16 7:39 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Did you know...
I wrote poems about you.?by ImMcLovinBabe 8 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 9 6:36 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Hi, I'm the high school stereotype,
And I'm going to be your guide.by ImMcLovinBabe 29 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 9 6:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Theres a girl
who is secretlyby ImMcLovinBabe 33 lines, on Nov 9 6:27 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Their emotions are in a tangle.
As they walk in the room,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
All my colors have faded away
What was once a vibrent redby ImMcLovinBabe 21 lines, on Nov 9 6:12 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Staring at the mirror
Smiling at herself• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
[x You Make My Heart
Beat Fast And Give Me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
DEATH OF A BROKEN PLANETby robert davidson 46 lines, 47 comments, on Sep 13 8:43 PM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, environment, Nature• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Comments
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-takes title to heart(s)- Lol. -grins-
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... i like them ummm margariter deels ...
... peoms ???? 
yukyukyukyuk heheheh ..........................................................
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You must be drunk, Over 250 entries,
, wow, I think I'll miss out there, I'd have liked to have done a fresh write for you, but hey, 250?
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I hope you get to actually view all the poems before the contest is judged...
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250 entries..
have fun with that
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Wow - gold trophy! Really?
Thank you so much. I am much obliged.
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Thanaks for the HM Stef. Congrats to the other winners.
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Thank you for the HM and congrats to the others!








