write me love poems WITHOUT the cliche crap.
i won't comment if i think i have read it a thousand times before by thousands of different people or i will comment and you probably won't like it.
no rhyme.
left align.
simple backgrounds.
readable font color.
i may comment or i may not and that comment (or non comment) will be honest.
i really want this done in a shorter piece, i don't need an epic. be creative.
i won't comment if i think i have read it a thousand times before by thousands of different people or i will comment and you probably won't like it.
no rhyme.
left align.
simple backgrounds.
readable font color.
i may comment or i may not and that comment (or non comment) will be honest.
i really want this done in a shorter piece, i don't need an epic. be creative.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 29, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 200, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes:
Thank you for your entries, for the most part everyone took constructive criticism well.
I have learned it is quite difficult to write about love.
Contest Winners
-
• Commented on by judge. [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4904783, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
-
• Commented on by judge. [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [22]
1 - 22 of 22
-
Closet masochists
staring over the shouldersby Livingemptyspaces 22 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 28 12:38 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Acrostic written for a contest on love poetry
RIGHT! I've rewritten this, so bring on round two!by L3vity 16 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 28 1:11 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
• Commented on by judge.
-
Watch as I turn to ash,
Hold me gently,by Nyhte 28 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 28 2:12 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
moon's glow
shrouds your easy smileby redbarchettadrive 12 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 28 3:36 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
The girl I love dances
in a cage.by arafura 32 lines, 6 comments, on Dec 28 4:00 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. -
Reaching greedy hands
grasped at my stuffing made of straw• Commented on by judge. -
There are hours we do not talk.
I sit in my room pecking poems• Commented on by judge. -
What is love? Philosophers
and poets of the ages• Commented on by judge. -
• Commented on by judge.
-
• Commented on by judge.
-
You saved yourself for greater purposes;• Commented on by judge.
-
something about the way
you spoke• Commented on by judge. -
• Commented on by judge.
Add a comment
Comments
31 - 31 of 31
< previous
1
2
-
are you holding a contest specifically to exclude me
this is discrimination!!! -
-
I am so afraid of the crap I will get for this - and then of course I will have more people pissed off at me for not liking their work.
-
conspiracy
-
-
most definitely.
-
-
-
you're a brave contest judge
-
-
ditto
-
-
Hell I am terrified.
-
-
im terrified for you
-
-
hell, i think this whole thing needs to be deleted.
-
-
one entry already skedaddled lol.
-
-
-
*hums, "What A Feeling"...whoever that's by*
-
-
Runs away quickly. Help me, please.
-
-
LoL!!
I'm sure at least one talented person
will make you happy. -
-
please. i hope.
-
-
I'll pray to Darwin for you.
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
lol. I'm afraid though, really afraid.
-
-
haha you poor thing
-
-
-
i hate you
-
-
No you don't.
-
-
no i don't i love ya
just got back from the bars and felt like te
ing someone limb from limb
fuck me anyways.. lol -
plastic people
damn they are so easy
but so sparce
well kiss my arse
-
-
-
don't fuck with me i swear
-
-
I didn't do it.
-
-
my landlord actually agrees with me
that my smoking alittle marijuanna aint such a bad thing compared to the verbal abuse that she shhoulders on this poor four year old child -
i'm reporting her to child services
like she purported me to the cops
fucking bitch
-
-
-
i'll tear you down and leave me in little pieces
-
anyway... think i'll put the hate aside and write you a love poem darlin' cause i know you deserve it''
-
Congratulations to the winners.
-
I think I've moved up to a silver trophy whore now. lol. Ah, the years have been kind to me
Thanks for the shiney. I love unconventional love poetry, so glad I could whip nine or ten lines out of my ass for ya
-
Thank you so much for the gold - and congratulations to the other winners this was a great contest - and I really enjoyed the inspiration that it kicked out of my muse
Polly -
Thanks hon...and I feel like this is a great victory as you are a tough judge.
Congrats to the winners and thanks to the fine poets who entered.
Love ya!
Adding your comment:
31 - 31 of 31
< previous
1
2
