hey guys its me again due to a recent donation from a kind user im able to hold another contest.
ok here it is.
all under 13 an under age poets will compete in this competition.
your poems must be deep i am not holding you back though writing poems about death an blood an all that shit thats pointless when your life is perfect will be out of my taste an possibly undermined of its true status
i am changing it to no
let ya'll practice an finally write some new material to get more new things here on the site.
an gather your thoughts an take your time the contest doesnt end for another 2 or so weeks!
reserving is allowed but must have some sort of draft by the 3rd day or you will be disqualified
(if i disqualify you and you come up with an idea after that you may re enter it with the title of the poem an write next to the title "Unfinished" so i wont judge it yet)
i am 13 and i will be a tough judge i wil disqualify those who cannot write to my standards
an no bitching at me...its annoying...
now im not saying no teddie bear poems if its like some sort of intellectually deep an complex poem about one (i have yet to see the day
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hey who edited the above line???
someone wrote "*Schock*"
owell who cares its prob an admin, those sneaky Fuc***s! (kidding)
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so yeah thats it an enter your poems up.
if it doesnt work out i will raise the stakes
no pre writes but you can enter multiple entries.
AGAIN THERE IS NO PROMPT!!!!
and for the younger people (maybe 7-9) i expect you to write like an 11 year old (because 12 is an age where your thoughts feelings an how you write changes drastically.)
myspace.com/omgitzdaniel
peace.
ok here it is.
all under 13 an under age poets will compete in this competition.
your poems must be deep i am not holding you back though writing poems about death an blood an all that shit thats pointless when your life is perfect will be out of my taste an possibly undermined of its true status
i am changing it to no
let ya'll practice an finally write some new material to get more new things here on the site.
an gather your thoughts an take your time the contest doesnt end for another 2 or so weeks!
reserving is allowed but must have some sort of draft by the 3rd day or you will be disqualified
(if i disqualify you and you come up with an idea after that you may re enter it with the title of the poem an write next to the title "Unfinished" so i wont judge it yet)
i am 13 and i will be a tough judge i wil disqualify those who cannot write to my standards
an no bitching at me...its annoying...
now im not saying no teddie bear poems if its like some sort of intellectually deep an complex poem about one (i have yet to see the day
)------------------------
hey who edited the above line???
someone wrote "*Schock*"
owell who cares its prob an admin, those sneaky Fuc***s! (kidding)
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so yeah thats it an enter your poems up.
if it doesnt work out i will raise the stakes
no pre writes but you can enter multiple entries.
AGAIN THERE IS NO PROMPT!!!!
and for the younger people (maybe 7-9) i expect you to write like an 11 year old (because 12 is an age where your thoughts feelings an how you write changes drastically.)
myspace.com/omgitzdaniel
peace.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 14, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Ok finally hopefully this worked ive been trying to judge this contest but it never worked for some reason
here are the winners thank you an good night.
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4593893, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3733858, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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People say I'm insane
With cautious glances they shoot my way• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4486787, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
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A few years ago I wandered off the beaten path
and onto the bunny trailsby SilverWolf 12 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 28 11:50 PM 2008. In Angst, Personal, My life, Depression, Sadness, Pain, Spiritual, Hope• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Adrenaline rushing,
my heart racing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I wish you all the best for your contest ~ there are a lot of youngsters on the site who write really good stuff.
And a note on he teddy bear poems... I once read one on here that was called "Tear Stained Teddy Bear", I liked that one pretty much. Unfortunately I can't remember the author (and their age), so I can't send you a link... I'll search for it when I have more time though...
Annie
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http://allpoetry.com/poem/1668328 was this the one?
I think Deej meant Teddy Bear poems like...stuff that are for little 5-year-olds. Those are annoying.
Or stuff about...unicorns, and rainbows.
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Yep, this one
I know he didn't mean this kind of poem, but since he said "now im not saying no teddie bear poems if its like some sort of intellectually deep an complex poem about one (i have yet to see the day )", I thought I might just mention that poem. Thanks for the link.
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Sure, no prob. But...teddy bear poems are just...um...a good way to get out emotion for little kids (?)
But usually, when one thinks of poetry, they think mature. Scenery, emotion....and the like....
Which is weird.
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hmmm i wanna do this....but not sure if i can come up w/ anything :-? hopefully ill be able to
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u can do prewrites too.
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ok kool and jsyk, my age is set to 15 so it doesnt block out thee curse words lol I'm 13
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wait if this is a contest for younger kids why did you swear a lot?
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a kid can take a swear word...
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..i've seen 7-year-olds cuss at me.
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now theres a limit!!
like if i were to see those 9 year olds on halo 3 xbox live butchering the english language then that'd be to soon... -
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...But yeah. Nine-year-olds are two years older than seven-year-olds.
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haha i saw that there were only two in the contest so i entered my crappy one ^^ lol
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Could we do poems about religion?
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yeh sure
havent seen that subject in any of my contests yet..
its all been sad heartbreak love poems.
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...you've only done like 2-3...
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yes but in this an the last one it was like that.
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Exactly...
I don't get why more people enter your contests rather than mine?!
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A fine idea for a contest Daniel. I wish you well. If you need help, don't be afraid to ask.
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Fwahha! I shall enter again. xD
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GASP! you entered a Prewrite ?
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Pshhhh. > >
I only did write it two days befoore I saw the contest. XP
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well, sorry...
Crap. You think I'm not?!
Shit, HOMEWUURRK!!!
(PS. I don't like eighth grade.)
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I like it, it's the homework half. -curses shaking fist at sky-
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Tchyeah, definitely.
So which highschool are you going to next year?
I'm going to Bravo, if not, the one Adrian goes to (if they have Magnet) or...idk.
I wanna go to marshall though, and help raise their GPA, because I feel sorry for them. -
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I'm going to Marshall. It's like, right across the street, so. xD
And oh, that's very nice. xD
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Because it's all Magnet, and their Magnet is Medical. I'm not even that in to medics anymore!
I wanna become a novelist. What should I do?
My mom says that Bravo is better than Marshall because you don't fine condoms all over the floor... xP
Wooot!!! Josh Hutcherson and Kristin Stewart in Zathura~~
Kristin Stewart + Robert Pattinson Twilight!!!
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lol. Condoms all over the floor. XD
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Novelist. Yeah. But I wanna travel...
Mm. Ok. I suppose. If Argee( and a doctor then I suppose...
But I wanna traveelll!!! Wuaahh!!!
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I wonder how he does it. The rest of us are all stressed.
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He has no life. xD
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Deep, right? Ok.
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Lol. I feel really good about myself. Almost everyone entered prewrites...even Nalyn! (She doesn't usually enter prewrites)
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who posted all these poems?!?!?
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Tons of people...
You've got some strange thing going on. No teddy bear poems, and yet a bunch of kids are like...going in. there are less than 50 kids contests on AP, and you're getting almost every single one of us.
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Dude? Where are you?
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Thank you soo much for the trophies!
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