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Deux.

Prompt #1: Scorpion or
Prompt #2: Jeans
-No dirty pretty.
-Tell me which one of the deux options
you chose in your AUTHOR'S NOTES.
-I will probably comment, but not necessarily. Expect constructive criticism.
I am very blunt.
-Please keep in mind that
don't have to use
'scorpion' or 'jeans' in your poem
unless you really want to.
-Trophies & points may increase.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 27, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 123, Bronze: 123, Honorable mention: 4 people
  • Final notes:
    I'm still unsure about the trophy placements, but meh...HMs are in order.

    Look out for 'Trois' & thank you for entering

    Jessica

Contest Winners

  1. by the atlantic 115 lines, 27 comments, on Aug 23 4:11 PM 2008. In Personal
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by kiwigirljacks 29 lines, 71 comments, on Aug 24 1:31 AM 2008. In Contest, Contemporary, Thoughts, Silver
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. by Auburn Sunrise 27 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 24 3:06 PM 2008. In Abuse, Angst, Contest, Dark, Weird, Adult
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4537380, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  5. by Cerulean Sunrise 10 lines, 17 comments, on Aug 24 11:59 PM 2008. In Contest, Adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. You broke the buttons off
    by Lj- 48 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 23 2:01 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  7. Muscle spasms breathe
    between squinted lines
    by luna-midnight 43 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 23 8:39 PM 2008
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [11]

1 - 11 of 11
  • I swatted the dust off
    The ass of my jeans
    by strangerforeigner 20 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 23 2:48 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Reality left me alone
    to catch my breath
    by Walk-Free 26 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 23 2:53 AM 2008. In Contest, Love
    • Viewed by judge.
  • we thought we could
    unite the world
    by Polaja 20 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 23 7:29 AM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.
  • "These are Jean's jeans, i'll give you a twirl,"
    the girl who wore the Calvin Kleins
    by Barefoot poet 18 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 23 5:31 PM 2008
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Cannonsfire
    August 23, 2008
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    Ewwww I had a big one in my shed in Africa, it bought its bags and was preparing to move in!!!! I swept it out and told it to go buy a condo somewhere else That was a scorpion of course not jeans


    • notorious gold member
      August 23, 2008
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      LMAO gotcha.
      'scorpion' is a cool word, but I wouldn't want to see one anywhere near me!!!

      I LOVE jeans.
      ENTERETH
      Pleaseth?


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 23, 2008
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    Ohhh.. I like both those prompts!!


    • notorious gold member
      August 23, 2008
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      Hell yeah!
      Now all you have to do is write me something you think sucks that I like.
      Or, write something you like too.

      • kiwigirljacks gold member
        August 23, 2008
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        Already started on it But yea.. it sucks so far lol

        • notorious gold member
          August 23, 2008
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          I bet not!! I'm excited as hell!

          • kiwigirljacks gold member
            August 23, 2008
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            It's sooo cliche so far.. I will have to change that

            • notorious gold member
              August 23, 2008
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              Am I allowed even a preview?

              • kiwigirljacks gold member
                August 23, 2008
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                Nope!

                And.. now it's gone *kicks muse*


                • notorious gold member
                  August 23, 2008
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                  You just deleted it all?!!!

                  R.I.P. "What could've been of Jacks' masterpiece"

                  Which prompt did you choose, incidentally?

                  *plays ping-pong with muse*

                  • kiwigirljacks gold member
                    August 23, 2008
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                    I haven't deleted it.. I just lost my train of thought lol

                    "jeans"


                    • notorious gold member
                      August 23, 2008
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                      MSG me what you have so far!!
                      Please? LoL

                      Hehe...jeans.
                      My Gold membership just expired.

                      My page is still html-pimped out...is it gonna go away??

                      • kiwigirljacks gold member
                        August 23, 2008
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                        OK.. but it sucks!!!!

                        Umm.. I dunno.. I don't think your page goes away..


                        • notorious gold member
                          August 23, 2008
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                          LMAO good. Me wanna see!

                          Really? But...don't Gold members get the pimped out pages? (& Silver)

                          They don't get rid of it? That would be swell.

                          Lord, I don't even use the word swell. LMAO


  • sailor ptolema
    August 23, 2008
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    I think I have 10 pairs of jeans. I need more .

    • notorious gold member
      August 23, 2008
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      You can never have enough pairs!!!

      ENTER

      • sailor ptolema
        August 23, 2008
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        truth! I can't think of anything to write

        • notorious gold member
          August 23, 2008
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          God! You never enter my contests.


          • sailor ptolema
            August 23, 2008
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            Maybe if my ability to write things worth reading wasn't so volatile, I'd enter more! lol.


            • notorious gold member
              August 23, 2008
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              That's enough self-deprecating humor from you.
              Don't give me that bullshit!!!

              Honestly, I think your writing ability is equal to Lane's.


              • sailor ptolema
                August 23, 2008
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                ! No, I'm light-years behind her .


                (No self-deprecation was used in this comment)


  • adsaige
    August 25, 2008
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    Jeans...thinking about it.


  • stasis
    August 25, 2008
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    Can we enter more than once? I think I have an idea for both prompts.


    • notorious gold member
      August 25, 2008
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      No, you can't enter more than once.
      I suppose you could 2 separate poems in one entry, but separate them accordingly.


      • stasis
        August 25, 2008
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        Ooooh, okay, I'll do that if I can think of something. I've got an idea for the scorpion one, and a faint idea for jeans... so if I can come up with something in time I'll definitely enter. Thank you for clearing it up!

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    August 27, 2008
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    Thanks so much for the silver for my lil weird write!



  • the atlantic
    August 27, 2008
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    thank you much jess! and congrats to all the winners

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