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Give Me Something Sad

Okay, so I want sad poems.
Preferably about love: heartbreak or yearning.
But I'll also accept 'emo' poems.. how you 'want your life to end' kind of stuff.
It all speaks to me. lol.

I just went through a really hard breakup for me a few months ago & am just now bouncing back because things kept happening to bring it up & make it seem worse& i wanted to just give up on everything in life.
So give me something real, passionate, something that people can relate to.



I don't have many rules...

1.please don't use StIcKy CaPs.. it's hard to read.
2.proper grammar for the most part. i can deal with a few words being 'slang'
3.ONE entry per person
4.ENJOYYYY YOURSELF.




i hope you guys do well in my contest & good luck!!
--Also,i will try my best to comment everyone's poem.. if it becomes too overwhelming however, i'll comment them as i see fit. =)


<33.rachel.











sorry it's taking me so long to judge this.
my computer tends not to work right after a while & i don't get on every day because again- my computer sucks.. but i don't have too many more to read. hopefully next time i get on i can read them all in one sitting & finish judging this contest. thanks for cooperating and again- lo siento amigos.
<33.me.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 31, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    so this was a very hard decision. and i'm sorry it took me so long to judge this- my computer is just not up to speed like many peoples' is.
    i want to thank everybody for entering because i really enjoyed reading every single poem that came my way.
    congratulations to the winners!! =)

Contest Winners

  1. Melancholia
    Can you see my tears of black / The ones which burn holes in my skin. / As another night is wasted, alone / The acidic river floods my face
    by Immortal Obscurity 39 lines, 19 comments, on Jun 3 2:05 PM 2007. In Dark, Sad, Anger, Pain, Weird.
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  2. vintage confessions.
    by aanika 69 lines, 60 comments, on Jul 25 11:37 PM 2008
    Silver trophy winner
    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  3. A painful truth, A cried tear. (Story)
    A Story about a girl and a brokenheart.
    by Klayer 10 lines, 11 comments, on Jun 4 12:47 PM 2008. In Personal., Personal, Life, Sad, Pain, Longing, Sadness, Lost love, Dedication
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  4. Crying Myself To Sleep
    Wiping my tears, they only tear more,
    a tear drop, strikes floor.
    by crazyspyker666 30 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 13 1:30 AM 2006. In Dark
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  5. If Only...
    If only I could take each time we shared
    and string them together like a necklace of pearls.
    by Pandorea 39 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 6 3:42 AM 2008. In Sad, Life, Love
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  6. Death comes with open arms
    You talked to me honestly
    I don’t believe you
    by loveaswellashate 64 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 28 6:36 PM 2006. In Sad, Love, Angst
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  7. Early Suicider
    She just wanted to end it all... She just did...
    by sofis-not-dead-yet 58 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 4 6:00 PM 2008. In suicide, love, sad, death, end, tears
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  8. "The One That Hides"
    (how were they to know); (how were they to see)
    by renizzle 31 lines, 11 comments, on May 1 8:26 PM 2007. In Dark, Weird, Misunderstood
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  9. Because You Killed Me
    If you only knew what is was you've done to me
    If you could only see the pain inside my head
    by blackrosesteph 50 lines, 13 comments, on Jun 26 1:41 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Sad, Pain, Personal
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  10. Sky.
    Stars shivered in the endless blackness of sky / Night washed over us / In hues of ebon dusk. / I loved him. / And maybe, sometimes, he lo
    by sora. 15 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 29 4:35 AM 2007. In Love, Thoughts
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  11. Broken heart
    My love, My heart, My man.
    We were in love, so grand and so new.
    by Charee 29 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 5 12:47 PM 2008. In Sad, Hope, Pain, Life
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  12. Your Words Are Bullets
    In case you didn’t notice, I’m way past broken
    My tears, they fall, for words unspoken
    by she still smiles x 16 lines, 24 comments, on Mar 23 9:18 PM 2008. In Pain, Personal, Thoughts, Love, Life, Angst
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
  13. Empty[he always was]
    by WishMeAway--x 39 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 13 10:58 AM 2008
    • Viewed by judge. [remove]

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  • demoninfluenced
    August 5, 2008
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    I too have had a hard breakup pretty recently. Two years, and then she leaves. Anyways, good luck with the contest and I will join!


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    August 31, 2008
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    thank you so much for the gold congrats to all the winners


  • Pandorea
    August 31, 2008
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    thanks for the HM