best prewrites

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on July 30, 2008
• Rewards: Gold: 350, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50, Honorable mention: 9 people
• Final notes:
  cool, thanks for all the great entries!!!!
  had a tough time deciding but finally chose
  thank you

Contest Winners

1. Cellophane

   sneaking a surreptitious glance at
   emerald nuances

   by Brit-Girl 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 30 12:06 AM 2008. In Dark, Life, Thoughts, Personal
   Gold trophy winner

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2. the last time.

   by aanika 51 lines, 42 comments, on Jul 22 8:46 PM 2008
   Silver trophy winner

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3. Plato Was A Hippie

   by Age of Rain 47 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 24 8:35 PM 2008
   Bronze trophy winner

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4. Sacred Skin Sessions

   Across my breast, you lay your head and utter sorries too sordid to listen to,

   by xxRainbowDawnxx 33 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 13 6:04 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

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5. vintage confessions.

   by aanika 69 lines, 60 comments, on Jul 25 11:37 PM 2008
   Honorable mention

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6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4427385, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
7. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4457489, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
8. Tabula Rasa

   My soul bleeds into the creamy white abyss
   Screaming into the hollow void, created by sorrow.

   by Immortal Obscurity 31 lines, 75 comments, on Sep 14 1:51 AM 2007. In Dark, Abstract, Pain, Weird
   Honorable mention

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9. Sick

   He is putrid, rancid rain,
   which dwells upon the puddles of my soul,

   by Brit-Girl 9 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 19 8:08 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Life, Dark, Sad, Contemporary, Contest, Romance, Love, Sadness
   Honorable mention

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10. The Melancholy Intoxications

    The wetting
    blurring veils fall

    by SoulfulBubbles 81 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 26 7:45 PM 2008
    Honorable mention

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11. snowstorm

    by barefoot contessa 58 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 15 1:40 PM 2008. In Other, Noguest
    Honorable mention

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Entries [89]

• Terminal Conception

  Filled with so much life
  Take it all out with this knife

  by BlackSwan 10 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 20 4:11 PM 2008. In life, pain, personal

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• Just Breathe My Love

  Take me away, far, far away from this lonely feeling that I have/ For I am drifting aimlessly in a pool of bottled tears and spilled ink

  by BlackSwan 32 lines, 12 comments, on Jun 5 2:41 PM 2008. In hope, life, love, pain, personal, sad, thoughts

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• Forever Gone

  Giving into the pain
  Deafening screams take over

  by ley527 28 lines, 58 comments, on Dec 3 9:01 PM 2007

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• Sunrises Bore Me/ So I Seek Out Sunsets

  Green leaves bloom proudly,
  Blue clouds drift across the sun,

  by Amergin 52 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 24 6:13 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Life, Love, Nature, Pain, Other, Hope

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• The Waife

  He sat at the entrance to the shopping arcade
  His little dog sat by his side

  by judmc 47 lines, 59 comments, on Mar 25 6:10 AM 2008

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• Ice Cream Cafe

  Blue chair,
  Leopard spotted recliner,

  by Amergin 22 lines, 5 comments, on May 7 7:41 PM 2008. In Nature, Other, Thoughts, Freewrite

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• Down the Road

  So many years have I travelled
  but many miles have yet to roam;

  by grannyeri 30 lines, 21 comments, on Mar 2 10:59 PM 2006. In Personal

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• Young Place

  You...
  Shadows triumphant in the unseen

  by alexparrish 25 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 16 1:31 AM 2008. In Personal, Dark, My life

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• Her Sinking Slumber

  She’s sinking slumber, drowning sleep
  In silence she would be herself

  by SoulfulBubbles 33 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 26 8:04 PM 2008. In Sad, Love, Dark, Pain

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• Astral Moments (to be continued, edited)

  Intoxication..
  silken liqueur

  by SoulfulBubbles 16 lines, 7 comments, on Jun 25 8:10 PM 2008

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• I Collect Friends Like Marbles

  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

  by Hulali 2 lines, 18 comments, on Nov 6 10:30 PM 2006. In Personal, Contemporary

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• The Boat Won’t Fly; the Kite Always Sinks

  The masses, you know, they all
  take their boats to the water

  by Hulali 61 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 11 10:00 PM 2008

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• piggyback
  July 30, 2008
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  Wow! You've had a lot of entries here. Congrats to the winners
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  Age of Rain
  July 31, 2008
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  Thank you for the honor of bronze. Congrats to all the winners!

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