Welcome
Ok so as the title says, enter new poetry, old poetry, all poetry, i will leave my honest comment and not any sugar coated "great" when i don't think so, but i will be nice, please try to refrain from entering poems with bad grammar and spelling because i will point it out. its one of my pet peeves of mine.Enter as many times as you like. 1 or 40 I don't mind.
Rules:
if erotic or adult content label as seen fit
No glorifying rape,cutting, abuse ect
if you want me to critique tell me in your AN
Have fun!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 13, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 600, Silver: 400, Bronze: 200, Honorable mention: 10 people
- Final notes: Thanks for entering and congrats to all
Contest Winners
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I faded like an umbrella;
your misty downpour devouring• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Sonnet LXX
Longevity My Mistress Pt i• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
Well I skip from eve to eve as I wend my way,
Going from home to work or just off for the day.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 4423803, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [338]
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Shadows light the gloom Of the room within my mind• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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And the light shines Upon my fractured face• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Won't you take me to the Mardi Gras?
where the people dance and play.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
licking lilies, droplets of serenities tiny foot steps, dancing the evergreen• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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All kids are scared of monsters:
monsters under the bed,by Charles Johnson 33 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 29 10:14 PM 2008. In abuse, pain, suffering, child abuse, monsters• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am a sickroom diva cough, cough, cough, cough, cough• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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let the words in my heart,
play out a song• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
the strings of the puppetby Darkwell 44 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 23 8:34 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm a slug, I sleep all day,
at night I come out to play!
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Please read while in the darkness of your own nightmares so as to do the poem justice• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'm dead and awake--alive and asleep
I need current events to keep me on my feet.by desert places 44 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 1 2:07 PM 2007. In Society• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A Y-incision
Then opened up• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When Bubba was just a little boy his momma walked him to school.
To her education was important, but to Bubba it wasn't cool.by Charles Johnson 37 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 1 1:59 PM 2008. In hero, love, life, giving, commitment, caring, family, school, community• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Lovely as Joaquin (Phoenix that is with the lazy left side of your face--remnants of a heat stroke), twice as beautiful...
You're breath pby tongue of steel 11 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 24 10:39 PM 2008. In Love, Romance, My chihuahua Rose• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
It’s so easy to go through life One of many, so insignificant.by after-silence 30 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 2 11:14 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Alone in this world I travel from dawn till setting sun.
Never knowing where my work will take me, or when my journey's done.by Charles Johnson 11 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 14 3:04 PM 2008. In dark, life, fantasy, sad, pain, love, death, grim reaper, destiny• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'll tell you a tale of our own Devil's Island• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Also inspired by the drug-induced people (family and friends) I was cohabitating withby desert places 23 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 14 7:28 PM 2008. In The War with Ourselves• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Be alone, just for one moment:
Be alone with the music in your heart.by after-silence 50 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 15 1:52 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Morphine drip
Walking through cold hallways• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
blood
black in the moonlightby Darkwell 31 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 15 3:20 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
From on top of the world I stand,
to see the destruction made by man.by lowercase prelude 19 lines, 14 comments, on Jul 23 12:16 AM 2008. In Contest• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Aldebaran glows angry red, / As Taurus rises from the seas, / A jeweled eye set in his head, / That brightly shines by Hyades.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I melt when I look at you.
Do you even know I'm here?by Charles Johnson 31 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 12 6:00 AM 2008. In forbidden love, love, life, hope, sad, pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The softness of your touch
Your voiceless murmurby demoninfluenced 21 lines, 3 comments, on May 20 11:16 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I breathe in thick air,
its stale edges scratch against my tongueby MelodiousDreaming 36 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 13 7:41 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your kisses leave scars on my paling lips My deathly darling, and oh, how I hate youby chasingwhiterabbits 14 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 15 2:57 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Asleep
This is how I am.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
tell me your name, you pretty girl over there,by Philleebee8 6 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 27 11:16 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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you made up your mind,
i don't think its best,by Philleebee8 22 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 26 9:33 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by dstreetpoet 37 lines, on Aug 16 12:40 AM 2008. In Life, Society, Tall Tales Of The Old West, Thoughts, Lyrics• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Covered Bridge it stands in the distanceby wohadreambig 53 lines, 1 comment, on May 9 8:51 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Tick tock
It's two o'clock• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The candle has gone out, My dream's deceived by fate,by abeautifuldisaster 37 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 25 8:21 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Clenching to the ardent chains of fire
as the throbbing agony in her eyes evoked,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The little devil of your creation Is vindictively seeking retaliation• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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We step to dance in time,
always forward and never behiend.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by dstreetpoet 48 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 17 7:10 PM 2008. In (Lyrical), Life, Spiritual, Nature, Tales of the Sea• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My hands move effortlessly, though i don't know what i'm writing.by candela696 24 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 23 8:06 PM 2008. In Dark, Life, Pain, Spiritual, Weird, My own style, Lost in thought, Emo, Freewrite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Her beauty moves my soul,
Takes my breath away,by Philleebee8 14 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 11 5:29 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This stunning false grin,
Hiding my secrets within.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Dim lit stars and saddened smiles,
Sun burnt hearts and heavy times,by Ebbing.X.Discreetly 18 lines, 17 comments, on Aug 16 7:04 PM 2008. In Dark, Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Angst, Life, Solitude, Loneliness• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Just like the things
That force you to did deeperby thearmsofsorrow 35 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 16 9:04 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
by trekkergirl 27 lines, 15 comments, on Aug 14 4:30 AM 2008. In Angst, Contest, Love, Sad, Loss of love, Depressed, Goodbyes, Longing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Slower than the sun's decision
into a watery orange colored East.by AudreyEvans 24 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 7 5:24 PM 2008. In Sexual Sensum, Love, Beauty, Happiness, Joy, Life, Meeting, Relationships, Ne• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Papers filled with empty, meaningless scribbles sit in front of the teen.
She’s waited so long for a chance, through music, to sayby after-silence 4 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 5 2:11 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Beneath your feet I'll steady you,
the memories I'll save here.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
There was a time some years ago when our friendship was still new,by Angierie 29 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 27 6:09 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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god still rules shame i will enter this i dont have to use my mind
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yay ^^ hehe we always need rules
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You said i could enter 40 times and i probley wont follow the rules so just DQ me fast and quick :]
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its ok, just dont say things like "i love to rape" in your poems, and label your stuff properly lol but i dont think you have any erotica so your safe
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well dont be to sure
I do have one erotica poem :] or two but its not like yeah. its only a tad bit erotica. :] "i love rape" Omg. Not yeah been raped didnt like it. :] so i think i am good :]
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hahaha yayyy =) i'm fo sho entering. woot.
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LOL 172 entries? You're gonna have a busy weekend.
Entering an old one if you don't mind, just cos it didn't get many reads when i first did it. 
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lol oh yeah, but i need to get over 33 comments anyway so why not
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funfunufun
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Fault in listing
I have posted 3 poems none of which have appeared on the contest list -
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are you just looking on the first page on the contest entries, theres more then one page
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Lost Vampyre
Thank you for putting me straight.How are you able to read and comment on so many poems you should be awarded a gold trophy at least.Best Wishes and my deepest sympathy George -
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thanks hun, ill get round it, 50 poems or so a day should do it, and then ill be set, and if it comes round to it, ill get one of my friends to help me judge
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well holy shit....295+ entries!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOO
lol i think i should just go enter everything i've got and make this contest have 400+entries
oh yeah lol
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Well just so you know, I was only able to enter once. It didn't let me enter anymore. Just FYI.
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hmm thats weird other people have entered lots of times,
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Woah.
You have a lot of entries,
so I'll just add one, haha. :]
Good luck judging and if you need help with it,
I'd be glad to help :]
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thanks huni
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No problem :]
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I thought I had a hard time with 50 entries!
You're gonna have fun judging this
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lol all my contests[ i have 4 going] apart from one have over 50 entries lol
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Oh no!!
Far out
That'd be so hard to judge!
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this will be so hard to judge! I'm glad that yur doin it. I do want you to critique, but I've got a pre-written poem: I'll Always Remember.
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wow...500+ entries..'m gonna feel bad if i enter just 1 poem lol
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Oh my lordy!
Girl do you have your work cut out for you here! My goodness...well you should get commentator of the day at least hey...lol. Phew, not gonna be an easy task...good luck, think you'll need it
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Whoa O.O Thanks for the 3 HM's
Congrats to the winners, all in all
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Thank you for Hosting Bri
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Thank you so much for the honor of Gold...congrat's to all.
Love,
mystic
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