enter any prewrite you'd like -- your favourite, the poem you think needs the most work, something you just wrote for a contest yesterday... as long as it's a prewrite.
there is a catch, though: i will be completely honest when commenting on your piece. do not enter if you cannot take criticism. i may add more points/trophies if i get great entries.
-hiraeth
ps: i am allergic to bad rhyme and whiny "poems" about love, jesus, heartbreak, suicide, or how ~~he duznt luv mi so ill slash mi vi/rg/in wRiStS~~.
there is a catch, though: i will be completely honest when commenting on your piece. do not enter if you cannot take criticism. i may add more points/trophies if i get great entries.
-hiraeth
ps: i am allergic to bad rhyme and whiny "poems" about love, jesus, heartbreak, suicide, or how ~~he duznt luv mi so ill slash mi vi/rg/in wRiStS~~.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 4449929, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
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Sitting, bathed in autumn light,
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everyone is ugly so inadequateby zorko52 18 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 30 1:06 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I want to write words that will tie your mind in knotsby Deformed Duck 53 lines, 10 comments, on Jul 10 11:38 PM 2008. In Contest, My own style, Freewrite, My Personal Escape• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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This is the place where I escape reality, and
This is definitly how I get to paridise.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i feel so held back
i feel so restrictedby Vampirette1901 44 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 25 5:24 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Old destructive emotions
Stirring againby evilangel311 27 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 29 3:44 PM 2008. In Thoughts, Sad, Pain, Dark, Contemporary, Longing, Sadness, Abstract• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
When will I learn thatI'm an addict?
My life would be so much easier without• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
look at me
my brown hair and eyes• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I caught a glimpse of your eyes
trying so subtly to peek down my topby MelodiousDreaming 47 lines, 22 comments, on Sep 9 2:12 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Happiness. Pure bliss. Overwhelmin Joy.
It has always been there,by hotpinkpenguin 28 lines, 21 comments, on Sep 15 9:40 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The sun caresses my head with invigorating warmth
Lightly, it touches like a feather• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Sunsets creep away, hiding
while shadowed by fading graysby LostInTheDream 12 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 16 1:31 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Their mouths were laced with optimistic advice
Though after a few days,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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What is there to live for in life?• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Did I ever tell you how much I love you?Did I ever make you open your eyes?by Dangerousparable 23 lines, on Sep 12 12:52 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Love, Lyrics, calling all lyric writers, musical rhyme• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Thoughts-of-Soloman 30 lines, 39 comments, on Aug 25 11:27 AM 2008. In Dedication, Personal, Love, Contest, Spiritual, Mystical• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I am like a rose caught in the wind My stem bends under the force of it allby x Bright Eyes x 10 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 16 7:04 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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If the sun's rays were threads,
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I'm Finely entwined
In my historyby Natural Disaster 35 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 4 4:43 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Persephone kissed
a siren on her way down,by jocelynclaire 34 lines, 14 comments, on Jun 16 10:18 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Winter’s light veil,
Forming a dirty brick wall.by Trent plus pen 41 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 24 3:00 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I am still here.
Tho you tried your best.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
My conscience sits alone
quiet in the darkby word20dragon 24 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 30 6:16 AM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I saw you last lying helpless,
on the bed of yesterday’s sorrow.by vampireprincess 36 lines, 16 comments, on May 7 9:01 AM 2008. In Contemporary, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
while dancing over my blooming roses
smiling at every instance• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
The end of summer brought the end of life.
His fists leaving a magenta and scarlet patchwork• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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by xwarriorXprincessx 53 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 24 1:03 AM 2008. In Weird, Thoughts, Personal, Life, Love, My own style, Lost in thought• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Enveloped by a gray mist,
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Close your eyes against the reigning night It's okay that you're too weak to fightby WinterEssa 31 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 8 11:59 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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As I sit and stare out the window,
across the yard at the old dog;• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Slowly kill me tonight
So I can finally get some sleepby WhatsErName 46 lines, 19 comments, on Aug 13 5:09 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
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Stand alone... stand strongby snuggles72106 24 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 6 4:24 PM 2008• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Cover me lover,
in petals and bruises.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Cooooooooooooooooooool.
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you should enter
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Still haven't figured out an ending! BAHH
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gee! g'luck with judgin!!! you have so many entries!
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Floored...and delighted. Thank you darling for the marvelous nod and congrats to everyone else!
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