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Dalaney...We Are Claiming Our Right to Say Goodbye

She's gone and none of us knows why but the island girl is missing and there are hearts broken all over AP.

So let's pen our goodbyes, our thoughts and our prayers for Lady Lane, hope she is in a good place where the wind from her ocean blows her hair and sends the bad dreams away.

Say your goodbyes, declare your love for the Lady and her inspiration to us as poets and as friends, just in case she comes peeking to see if we miss her. We want her to know there is always an open door for her and her muse to light our day.

No line limits
No style constraints
Sensual is just fine (in fact Lane would demand it!)

A fond farewell to an Island Girl

you'll come back again
when moths fly in the firelight,
a back porch calls for a rocker,
a brandy and a paper napkin

as the wood cracks
on unused piers,
waves crying with an albatross,
he flies the horizon in solace

I will open my hands
and light will dance on my palms,
laughter will bubble
in a toss of your hair

sharing cigarettes, ice cream
and dreams we have shattered together

idea's and notes to an island
we'll share

set them up Joe...

I'm already there


(Will miss you Lane , Love, C)




(background- JeannieD)

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 28, 2008
  • Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 500, Bronze: 250, Honorable mention: 5 people
  • Final notes:
    Thank you for the wonderful responses to this, it is nice to know Lane is well and doing fine with her new job in NYC and it's also nice that she is back to peek in on us all eery now and then. Thank you all for your beautiful pieces to her. I am sure they all made her smile.

Contest Winners

  1. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4162901, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4137647, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  3. by marc creamore 27 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 15 9:05 PM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts, Sad
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  4. by PerVirtuous 81 lines, 14 comments, on Apr 16 9:14 AM 2008. In Adult
    Honorable mention
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  5. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4151107, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
  6. Error: Unable to find finalist item 4127527, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]

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  • dustookie2
    April 14, 2008
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    I am sorry to hear this Sis....may it be as you say hope the path she walks will bring her peace.Lane was and is an inspiration for many poets who walk these AP halls.


    • Cannonsfire
      April 14, 2008
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      Just like a wisp of a feather on the breeze she has vanished. Without a word to any of us...I hope she comes to look at how many she has touched with her words and her friendship. Love, Chez


  • Matt Holck
    April 14, 2008
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    I just figured
    she took some time off

    • Matt Holck
      April 15, 2008
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      opps
      her page is blank
      shame
      I liked her scenic descriptions


      • Cannonsfire
        April 15, 2008
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        Yeah Matt, she has even disabled her email connection, so none of us can find out why she left in such a hurry. We will all miss her.


        • Matt Holck
          April 15, 2008
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          I did a googled her name but that produced all sorts of different unrelated websites

        • Matt Holck
          April 15, 2008
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          • jcat gold member
            April 15, 2008
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            I went to this website and it does appear to be her....It does have an email address...


            • Pure Thought silver member
              April 15, 2008
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              jcat

              the web site above your comment? The poetry is far to verbose for Lane.


              • Cannonsfire
                April 15, 2008
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                No I think Wbiro's is the correct one..Lane's blog and it seems to be her as it mentions AP...I cannot post the entire link as AP seems to have a new form of blocking sites outside of AP that are accessed too frequently so this is it and you have to add http://
                to the front and .com/ to the end of inkblotsandfinethread.blogspot


              • jcat gold member
                April 16, 2008
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                I didn't really check out the poetry but the picture posted of her on that site sure does look like her last avatar she used on here. Did you see the picture??? Same eyes and forehead and all but who knows could be a HUH factor?

  • ea silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    I went to a couple of her family members' pages and saw that she was listed as "absent" and even "deceased" which made me absolutely ill yesterday.


    • Cannonsfire
      April 15, 2008
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      Yes I don't know what it is all about. Even Ariosto couldn't fill me in and she talks to him about lots of things.

      • ea silver member
        April 15, 2008
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        I saw that she hadn't deleted her contests and thought maybe she was just in the process of changing her page and got called away or something - but when I saw the "announcements" on people's pages, (which seemed premature if it was not known where she was) then I looked at my old contests, and saw that her poems are now gone.


    • daviscth silver member
      April 15, 2008
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      Has anyone asked any of her AP family if they know anything? I'm really upset by this! Lane was my ROCK!!!!!

    • Pure Thought silver member
      April 15, 2008
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      ea

      What family? She has none but Ol Joe. The dead Lane Smith is the actor.

  • daviscth silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE'S GONE???????????

    • Cannonsfire
      April 15, 2008
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      Seems the plot maybe thickening but as to why she left...I have heard nothing!


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 15, 2008
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    Has she passed away???
    I never knew her but just got a message from my dear sister.

    • Matt Holck
      April 15, 2008
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      does the administration know anything?


      • Cannonsfire
        April 15, 2008
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        Matt, I haven't asked the admin or greeters, I guess you can leave of your own free will unless they boot you for something we don't know about?

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 15, 2008
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    It is so very very sad. It seems that she has touched many many people here.


  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 15, 2008
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    This is all new to me! I had no idea she was gone. Have you learned anything new yet?


    • Cannonsfire
      April 15, 2008
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      Trina, have learned some things but none of them make anysense as to where Lane may be.


  • tara wilson gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    bookmarked


  • marc creamore
    April 15, 2008
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    I find this all very, very unsettling . . . had no idea that Lanie was absent . . . I pray that all is well with her and that this absence is just her taking a little break for herself . . .


  • breedluv gold member
    April 15, 2008
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    Might want to allow pre-writes in as well; there are some really poignant ones already written.


  • paulcreates silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    I think I was the last one to speak to Lane three nights ago. We were entering a contest together and she told me she was "hunting and pecking" to type because of the "jammed thumb" that she had to have treated at 2AM the previous night. All I can figure is that the thumb is too painful or cumbersome to type and this is her way of taking a break...AND staying connected with us at the same time....which, I'm sure is massively humorous to her because she has now plenty to read with everyone bemoaning her exit. lol
    Paul


    • Cannonsfire
      April 15, 2008
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      I think it's more than a banged up thumb...to remove her entire page and disconnect her email is a little extreme for a bit of time off...no...I think it is more than that!


      • paulcreates silver member
        April 16, 2008
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        Just for clarification, I can go to Lane's page, it's just that it's empty, not gone. It has the color that she left it in and I can send messages to her, but there are no return messages back.
        Is this what you have experienced Cannonsfire?
        Just making sure I don't have anything showing on her page, more than you do.

  • Pure Thought silver member
    April 15, 2008
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    Chez and Tom

    Thanks for having this.
    Buddy


  • Cannonsfire
    April 15, 2008
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    inkblotsandfinethread.blogspot.com

    Seems to be Dalaney's blog if anyone interested to see what has happened...not much on there but it does give a little insight!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    Bookmarked - I will try to get back to this.


  • Beating gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    Oh I thought I was the only one who noticed!! how silly of me, since I know everybody loves that woman! I can't believe I'll no longer have my daily shot of poetry from her anymore! I'm so sad!


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    April 16, 2008
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    I see that you do not allow pre-writes. But I have already written my goodbye to Dalaney. Another would be superfluous - I can't say more than I already have about my kissin' cousin. Would you consider allowing pre-writes?

  • betrayed02
    April 17, 2008
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    What can I say except I am truely sorry Lane has left AP and deprieved everyone of her wonderful poetry. Coral


  • Randomly Beautiful
    April 17, 2008
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    I went here...

    www.inkblotsandfinethread.blogspot.com

    and I believe it is her. Though it really does not give any clue as to why she would leave without saying goodbye.


    • cricketjeff gold member
      April 19, 2008
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      Lane has contacted a friend on AP to say that she will not be back. She is currently not online much. The inkblotsandfinethread blog is hers it refers to a poem she wrote about her parents. She has not updated it since before she left AP. Many of us hope that she will be back, but it isn't likely to be for quite a while.
      All the best in all you do Lane. You made a difference and are greatly missed.


  • Danny Beatty gold member
    April 21, 2008
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    I went to her author's page ... it is not possible to take out the default info ... that info is gone when you take out the 'hide' and remove the color from her page ... it is simply blank ... that is not possible, so this may be something she has arranged to do somehow beyond what is normally done ...

    the link they have as her blog site is correct, and it has been there for several weeks but she has only made two entries on it ... the comments you can make are not disabled, but subject to her approval .. that means you can still message her by making a comment on the butterfly poem there,,, which, by the way ,,, is one of the best she has ever written, and that is saying a lot !!!!

    I hope she is ok. I hope she finds happiness. If that means she does not post here again, then I encourage her to be happy ...

    Moqui

  • Cinnarry gold member
    April 30, 2008
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    Thanks so much for the gold. The greatest contest ever!

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