Enter as many times as you want:
Prewritten poetry under 30 lines
as long as I
Haven't commented them yet.
And yes, I will comment them all.
Points might increase - depends on how much entries I get and how good they are.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on February 21, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 500, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: PHEW!
congratulations to the winners. Sorry it took a while but I commented on all of the poems
Some managed to enter something I have already commented on before - I kicked them myself
Some couldn't wait until I got to their poem so they've kicked themselves
Some entered poetry with more than 30 lines - and here I mean, come on! learn to count. I haven't kicked you, I haven't said it in my comment but you will probably know who you are.
Thank you all for entering, I hope to see you in my next contest(s)
Leander
Contest Winners
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by Celticmoon 16 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 30 7:19 AM 2008. In Personal, Thoughts
Gold trophy winner
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- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3845089, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3821241, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by Hulali 7 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 16 8:57 PM 2007. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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It was cold
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I could let myself get caught in the tide
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Lights of hell
shining through perfect moss eyesby ShadowsMidnightRose 15 lines, 17 comments, on Feb 6 7:11 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3887595, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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I don't wear a cape
And I can't flyby Mindfullsilence 14 lines, 8 comments, on Feb 5 3:13 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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by Mindfullsilence 3 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 4 8:49 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by Mindfullsilence 3 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 4 8:28 PM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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find a way out, to find a way inby Mindfullsilence 4 lines, 5 comments, on Feb 4 8:18 PM 2008. In Pain, Death, Depression, Escape, Suicide• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I'm less than 600 miles from you
Yet it feels as though you're on the worlds purlieuby Mindfullsilence 18 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 3 2:35 AM 2008. In My life, Longing, Love, Personal, Thoughts, Romance, Dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The pain of feeling something new
The pain of feeling hopeby Mindfullsilence 26 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 10 3:09 PM 2005. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Causing blackness
Causing hatered for the world• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
The feel of fragile velvet
The weightless touch of silk• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Knowing so much
About language and expressionby Mindfullsilence 14 lines, 5 comments, on Nov 21 2:39 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Once in love
Now lost and aloneby Mindfullsilence 27 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 31 3:34 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Lonely and afraid
Sorrow consumingby Mindfullsilence 18 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 17 3:36 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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Moonlight illuminating my aqua eyes
Revealing life as masochistic and amicable• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Alone and in despair
As i lay cracked and bleeding• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Drifting toward relaxing oblivion
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The town crier’s eyes are full of tears Everyone knows just how he feels• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I have been in the closet for 2 days and I have not made a sound. When the children let me out of the closet, I was newborn, forgiving, andby dannyblues 9 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 2 5:37 PM 2008. In quiet anger and anger quieting• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She toss and turns,
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As couples walk hand in hand
On this "special" holiday• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Murder...
Murder...by Hells Bells 47 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 5 11:54 AM 2008• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Safely close to her neck, Silver chain holding it secure.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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you tried to touch a hand
and lift the person high upby transit 41 lines, 11 comments, on Nov 2 11:34 PM 2007. In dedication• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
This tall, linger, skinny man.
Stood in front of his dirty white van.by completely mad 28 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 8 4:19 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
Who is your Master?• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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me thinks you have too many sleepless nights
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how could you guess it
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Lines?
Are you going by the actual count of lines in a poem or what the AP counter list them at? Because the AP counter doesn't match the poems. I have one poem the has like 32 lines and the AP counter says 64 lines. Gary
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I never take the AP counter in account
I only count the lines that actually have text in them 
hope that makes it clearer for you
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OMG!
236 entries and I was awarded gold??????
Now I am truly and completely floored!
I never expected to take gold
Wow Lee!
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I never expected to have three people who are on my favourites in top three actually

Makes me look like a biased judge really
but all deserved
Have fun with it
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I know what you mean but then Lee you are one of the most fair judges I know which is why I enjoy entering. You always give me your honest opinion and often suggestions to better my write. All of them I cherish much as I admire your talent so.
And for the record...
I have learned my use of aliterations from reading your work
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nah, you haven't

You learned the alliteration aaaalll by yourself
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Yeah actually I have lee

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Wow, thanks so much for the silver!
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You're welcome
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Great to see I'm among the top 20 of this contest.

Congrats to the winners!
Annie
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Thank you for entering
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congratulations winners

thanks for putting two of my poems in the finalist's list
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