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Cloudless Consciousness

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Cloudless Consciousness

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Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 5, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 333, Silver: 222, Bronze: 222
  • Final notes:
    merci beaucoup for sharing your soul's sensibility and wisdom with me ... I am very touched by the beauty and maturity of your entries ...
    thank you from my heart,

    maa

Contest Winners

  1. Translucence
    Orbs claw at the figment lighthouses calling from their vaporous siren mirages
    by penman 33 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 4 5:17 AM 2007. In Other
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. Ten Thousand Cicadas - silver
    Hum, strum of wrung Sages
    waiting to molt their childhood play
    by CarolDesjarlais 32 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 4 8:37 AM 2007. In Friendship, Society, Nature
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. So clear
    Light reflecting thoughts
    by Lavender Butterfly 28 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 4 4:45 AM 2007. In Spiritual, Personal, Thoughts, Life
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]

Entries [12]

1 - 12 of 12
  • R.I.P.
    by islekine 14 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 4 2:23 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The Bulb
    Slowly slowly I start to grow reaching for the light, A little bulb full of life but the earth is cold and hard,
    by Suss8 8 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 4 2:36 AM 2007. In Nature, Hope, Life
    • Commented on by judge.
  • reflections
    Rather to bear the weight
    of all that may come, for
    by Peteskid 30 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 4 8:16 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Reflection
    Staring downward inward through the back of sockets feeling the pull of the eye
    by Star Shine 8 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 4 8:30 AM 2007. In Spiritual
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Cloudless
    by Shenton 15 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 4 5:11 AM 2007
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments


  • MargaretG
    September 4, 2007
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    "Blue skies smilin' at me
    Nothin' but blue skies do I see
    Bluebirds singin' a song
    Nothin' but bluebirds all day long" (Willie Nelson)

    I hope to return with a poem!


  • Malabu
    September 4, 2007
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    LOL...though this is closed

    i read on of my faves...I could not even come close to spilling words so grand...haha...HI Maa fo ya
    Mal


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    September 5, 2007
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    Thank you so much for honoring this poem to my pen friend. Congratulations to all.


  • penman gold member
    September 5, 2007
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    Thank you very much for the gold. And for having such a wonderful contest. Congratualtions to all the winners.