I don't care about your form.
I don't care about your anything but the feeling.
Now, that said; I want it expressed in a poetic way.
Not just:
I feel blue.
My shoe
Is untied
I think I just died.
You know, I really am sorry for your shoe. But It doesn't belong in my poetry contest, mmkay?
Thanks for dropping by.
Enter up to three.
Only one can be a pre-write.
And I WILL check.
I don't care about your anything but the feeling.
Now, that said; I want it expressed in a poetic way.
Not just:
I feel blue.
My shoe
Is untied
I think I just died.
You know, I really am sorry for your shoe. But It doesn't belong in my poetry contest, mmkay?
Thanks for dropping by.
Enter up to three.
Only one can be a pre-write.
And I WILL check.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 8, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 1000, Silver: 300, Bronze: 200
- Final notes: congrats to all
Contest Winners
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by LaurenLightning--x 49 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 31 5:17 PM 2007. In Angryy Me...
Gold trophy winner
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Mosh. Datta. Dayadhvam. Damyata. / I-Mosh / Under starlight / exists the silent valley / Under Orion / between the wasteland / and Elysium• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Splitting deep / the trunks of you / fire leaps / toward soul's escape / and lemon lollipops / lap about / in playful meander / amber breezby ten thousand cicadas 36 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 31 12:07 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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absolute sweeping
guided by ultrasound;• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 3060166, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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The paint on the walls,
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by all state reject 24 lines, 6 comments, on Jan 31 11:24 PM 2006. In Sad• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A kiss from a rose on a sunset night,
As the clouds dip in to the sea.by anaisnais 25 lines, 17 comments, on Aug 26 5:08 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I dared to believe you \ trusted your liesby Anger Inside 201 28 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 15 12:04 PM 2007. In Lost love, Personal, Sad, Angst• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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this poem is dedicated to my father who is the world to me.by The Black Raven 35 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 13 2:23 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by Glasyalabolas 42 lines, 8 comments, on May 26 7:31 AM 2007. In Personal, Thoughts, Dark, Pain, Angst, My life, My own style, Anger, Hate• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I'M ROLLING MY EYES AT YOU BECAUSE YOU ARE JUST SO DUMB. BUT I LOVE YOU.by Empty Closet 65 lines, on Sep 7 7:19 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Unstoppable tears
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Call my heart Grey / Say I am a loner / think that I'm a stoner / But this I promise you! / You'll never truly know me. / My heart is grey,by Beverlynohime 10 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 22 7:03 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Why do i sit here and think about you day and night. / Why do we sit here and say i love you when we really dont. / Why i sit here in pain, Playin Myself. / Life was not promised to me, / So why is it so hard for me tby MzDimeDivia 24 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 8 8:19 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Hope, Thoughts, Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Steeling myself, I set my gaze
upon the only one with powerby Thrawn Lives 45 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 17 11:16 PM 2007. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I look around At this beautiful placeby God is my reality 18 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 7 9:51 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Graciously, oh so graciously the whale swirls through the iced waters,
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Your boot crushes my throat, / Stepping and grinding till I choke. / You hate the words I spoke, / So here I am with dagger and cloak, / Urban tactics with guerilla poetry, / Slip and stick with the pby Touch of Osiris 31 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 17 2:17 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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your cutting deep into me revealing the worst in meby burdenbytruth 37 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 16 9:05 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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A poem and dreams lost with other losses, and the love that follows suit.by hey incendiary 36 lines, on Sep 7 3:32 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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i woke up this morning i Spent two hours in bedby hey incendiary 18 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 7 3:39 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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She looks through tear stained windows. The tears are her own as she falls deeper into the fold.by LadyFiend19 138 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 14 11:21 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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In a world of darkness
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Desiring passion raised a higher peg,
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boy, the butterflies left an hour ago. there are eagles beating the walls of my stomach.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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"You know, I really am sorry for your shoe. But It doesn't belong in my poetry contest, mmkay?"
lmao. this looks like a good one. -
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Yep, it's going to be interesting reading Danielle's bitchy comments about how many people really will write poetry that poorly. This certainly will be an interesting contest, with a lot of bad entries.
Perhaps you will be awesome and excite Danielle with a good entry?
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Let the barrage of emo, amateur poets using poetry as a placebo begin.
I'm sorry Danielle, you're going to read a lot of baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad poetry.
Or you can throw your hands in the air and either let Amunet judge it for you, or remove enough entries to get four entries and then remove the contest?
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I will definitely enter two fresh writes. Good luck with the contest, and good luck to anyone who enters!
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BOOKMARKED!
And I'll get back to you on that contest. School starts in a couple days and I have to figure out how much of a pain it's going to be. -
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Come back if you hadn't. It's supposed to be open.
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Ha- you're going to be a busy bee with this contest. Thirty-four entries, and it's only been open for three hours?
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XD. Why is this fucking closed? I am a MASOCHIST. I WANT THOUSANDS OF ENTRIES
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Because you drew the entry limit at 60, maybe? ... Try setting it at zero. See if that reopens the contest; you sexy sunshine woman.
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Fixed. Thanks. I'm a blonde underneath all the evil.
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Awesome contest. BOOKMARKED. -
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... You are an outstanding poet; I loved your poem at the top (short, succinct):
I feel blue.
My shoe
Is untied
I think I just died.
I will continue this if I feel justice is paid.
My eye
Just let
A tear
On a fly.
Tye fly
Is drowning
In a cup
I think it's giving a hiccup
The fly
Is dead
And we're both ahead
Looking
Lost and lonely
With no-one else
The fly, (and me)
Are dead:
In the afte-er-life.
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such brilliant talent you have. -_-
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i like this contest, cant wait to see the results....
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ROFLLLLLLLLLL 155 entries. HAHAHAHAHA, are you going to get a cojudge?
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-_- I hope so. You offering? I'm only going to comment on the finalists. Because DAYUMN. I didn't expect such an outcry of...."art"
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Titter. Yes! Everyone has FELLLLLLT poetry. Everyone's writing about slit wrists... I'd wish they'd press harder against their skin.
I'll cojudge, snookie, if you want me to. I'll be a bitch on comments though, just so you know.
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I feel blue.
My shoe
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Shit, you got a lot of damn poems to read here dont you? I suppose I might find one that will fit your criteria. We will see. *bookmarked*
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MHM.
You should.
I want to see how many I can read before I die.
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LMAO
This is one reason why I would not run prewrite contest...169 and still growing...I wonder if I should add to this madness...I think after you read all these poems...a poem of torture will be the felt poem in your very next life...
Mal -
Im in this contest!
I really think I have a good chanch of winning! im hopeing I do it took me forever to think of it as it brought out all of my emotions! If u want to read it its titled Dream of you -
Woes ME!
Oh, woe, woe, woe, my poem has failed.
jk
Thanks for hosting contests man!
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