Simple contest!
Closes some time today!
No reservation needed!
I couldn't sleep last night. I finally fell asleep
after five in the morning and not but three hours
later did I rise and was unable to fall back to sleep.
So what I want from you is to:
Tell me what keeps you up at night.
What reason do you have for not sleeping?
What keeps you from falling into the dreamscape?
Tell me in NO more than 15 lines!
RULES:
No whining
No bitching
No sore losers
No cry babies
No suicide, self harm, cutting or emo
No dirty pretty
No erotica...sensual is fine
No vulgarity
No cliche'
Poetic devices are your friend...USE THEM!
Be brilliant!
Be metaphoric!
I reserve the right to remove any piece
that does not fit, breaks the rules or
simply stands no chance at winning
without reason or warning.
No comments will be guarenteed
on any entry that maybe removed,
so do not IM me asking why.
All comments will be reserved
until final judging is being made.
Ready...
set...
go!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 25, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: Thank you all for a wonderful contest. You each have penned some wonderful entries. It was a pleasure to have read each one
Congrats to one and all!
until next time...
pen on!
Contest Winners
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Passion swims mounds of restless covers, / swelling night away from touch, / where peace is darker stain of noise, / wheels turning time /• Commented on by judge. [remove]
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 3229024, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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Fears of things beyond control / Hold my eyelids and my soul; / I pray the Lord that He would keep, / But then I keep, and lose my sleep; /• Commented on by judge.
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by lucy sky-diamond 19 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 24 10:02 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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Sleep escapes me not by choice• Commented on by judge.
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Sleepless nights just one torment, / As I lay in bed thinking of you. / Are you hungry, are you scared, / Does gunfire fly by your head? /by pen-inhand 15 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 7:19 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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blah blah blah blah blah lol
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No way could I even begin to tell you what keeps me up in only 15 lines. I sleep like 5 hours for the whole week, lol. Good contest though, should be interesting.
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I can understand that. Sometimes we just can't sum it all up in so few words
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I can relate to this.....I shall return
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~~~WOW~~~ Cannot tell you how coincidental this is...for I too suffer from night terrors, and only slept 2 hours last night....
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Seems many of us have something that keeps up from sleep
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WOW!
I tell ya... I am with ya...
Went to bed at 1130... finally went to sleep at 1230... woke up at 130... back to sleep at 230 or so and now been up since 4... you ask why...
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I've no clue either as to what kept me awake so long
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That's quite a NO list up there
*whispers silently*
you forgot to add the cockroaches and elephant-headed snails
*wanders off*
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LEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-tackles you with HUGE hugs-
I've missed you
-cuddles and huggles her pocket full of sunshine-
How's you doing hunny? -
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Well, A bit tired.
and I miss AP as well
Just another 5 weeks and summer season over here will be over (mostly) so I will have loooooooaaaaads of time then to come around here and stalk everyone (including myself)
almost every time I come here I do some of my duties (which I miss quite a lot too when I'm not able to) so yah
anywho, I just farted and it smells that hard that I can't stay in it
be back in a few minutes or so
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LEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I wonder if he can tell how loved and missed he is
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MHM.
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Need more!
MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!
That is no where near enough for Lee
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you see I DID have more... but then it stretched the page to like 216438362175571X its original size.
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That's because you didn't break the lines manually
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when sending IMs I don't have to, so I forgot that I needed to here.
lol
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hehe....I forget too sometimes
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yay
*is glad it's not just her*
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is that better?
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That's my girl
I think he might get the hint now
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hopefully
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I think he will
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ooooh hunny
you broke the page
lol
anywho, I got customers again and now I have to run for my bus
I'll try to snatch Jovy's laptop and come online tonight, though no promises
love you all soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much
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it's worth breaking the page for you.
mmk, please come back to us soon please. It feels like FOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEVEEEEEEEEEERRRRRR.
Love you too, Lee. Take care.
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She could never break the page with too much love
Hope to see you online later hunny.
Send Jovy my love and kitty too
Love you bunches hunny
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Lee you are such a nut!
I can't wait to have you around here more.
I miss chatting with you
Summer needs to hurry up and end!
I want my Lee back! -
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no. It's too early for summer to end, sorry.
Summer just needs to end for him.
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I want summer to end too.
I am so ready for the kids to go back to school again. At least I'll get a couple of hours of peace that way. -
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*sighs* actually... I'm fine with summer coming to an end quicker than usual this year because I'm excited to go to [insert S-word - it's forbidden in my household].
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forbidden in your house aye?
and why is that?
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Because my mom is a teacher and she likes her summer break, and then my bros don't want to go back to S****l either.
it's been a forbidden word for years during the summer.
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Well yup that is understandable
as to why it would be forbidden
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thanks for contest as I can relate to this subject only too well as it appears several others do too..maybe it's our over active expressive brains tuned to keep going like the everready bunny does.
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just a smile for ya!...GETS
The coke is stirring and I can't sleep
I even tried the thing of counting sheep.
My teeth kept grinding and I can't sit still
by the way, where did you put that rolled dollar bill?
What's that noise outside I hear?
'OH my God, the cops are here ...SSSH!
I can't sleep, "I'm an absolute nervess wreck"
hey, can ya loan me fifty till I get my disability check?
There must be something here that I can sell
to get me through this night of hell.
Another bag might do the trick
I better think of something ____QUICK!
My nose is runnin, my mind is spent
the landlords pissed cause I have'nt paid the rent.
Well another night without sleep
I guess I'll try again, ...counting sheep
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congrats all
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Congratulations to the winners
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