Darkness, Let Me See Your Darkness

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on July 21, 2007
• Rewards: Gold: 400, Silver: 200, Bronze: 100, Honorable mention: 5 people
• Final notes:
  Thank you all for the great entries, apologies for the late judgement, and really, you were all great thanks a bunch.

Contest Winners

1. The Devil's Company

   Cremate my laughter and sew my lips shut
   Pictures I saved burn the person you cut

   by sunkissed07 23 lines, 9 comments, on Oct 8 1:31 PM 2006. In Personal, Dark
   Gold trophy winner

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
2. Error: Unable to find finalist item 3075136, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
3. Error: Unable to find finalist item 2211432, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
4. Drip

   It is long, but most of it is repetitive for a really good reason.

   by The Cube 252 lines, 55 comments, on Jun 10 4:47 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Dark, Other, Pain, Weird
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
5. mother dear

   with knife in one hand / and gun in the other / this is where you've / lead me to mother. / don't say you want things / to be alright..i'd / sooner slice my throat / than believe you twice. / slowly i bring th

   by tillyde 14 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 15 2:22 PM 2007
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
6. Razorblade Kisses

   by JulietteArielle 38 lines, 41 comments, on Apr 16 5:16 PM 2007. In Emo, Personal., Depressed, Pain, cutting
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
7. The last sunset

   The blood red sky, / Morphs slowly to black, / The sun is leaving, / And not coming back, / How could this happen, / How could this be, / No more bright days, / Ahead of me, / The innocent have gone,

   by astrum 17 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 16 10:45 AM 2007. In Dark
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
8. Scream

   Scream, / Thats all you can do / Scream, / Becasue no one can hear you / Scream, / Your in so much pain / Scream, / You have nothing else to gain / Scream, / Your going to die / Scream, / God Damn you

   by Drummerfreak909 17 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 19 9:09 AM 2007
   Honorable mention

   • Commented on by judge. [remove]
9. Dark Awakening

   I can see your veins pulsating with your fear / And down your cheek, another hopeless tear / What was left of you before I came to your sid

   by DancingShadowCorpse 29 lines, on Jun 27 11:24 AM 2007. In Pain, Dark, Hate

   • Viewed by judge. [remove]
10. Glass Prison

    A broken promise
    No surprise

    by Improv Machinery 21 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 25 5:57 PM 2006. In Angst, Abuse

    • Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]

Entries [79]

• Already dead

  by Easy Way Out 52 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 19 7:35 AM 2005. In Sad, Personal, Dark

  • Viewed by judge. Prewrite
• There, It's Done

  Ugly, stupid, foolish girl! / Look at what you've done! / Your mother's crying, / did you notice? / This is all your fault! / My dear, my dear, / press harder. Harder! / You must pay for your own sins, /

  by The Fallen Phoenix 22 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 27 4:17 PM 2007. In Angst, Dark, Sad, Personal, Pain

  • Viewed by judge.

Comments

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  Tragyk
  June 15, 2007
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  hey i have a poem that is more than 50 lines but i thought it would be good for this so i entered it
  
  everything I had is gone
• umpa lumpa
  June 15, 2007
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  how do i put that in authors box where is it at
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  Rainy Days
  June 21, 2007
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  I wrote something that I liked alot, but it turned out to be 93 lines. Oh well... I might enter something else.
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  Tragyk
  June 25, 2007
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  everything I had is gone
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  ventus11
  June 27, 2007
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  wheres the auther box?

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