*Yep...don't expect me to be commenting for a little while. I assure you all, I will comment on all of your works. However, at the moment, I am swapped by finals. I shall be a senior soon. So...^_^ Be patient with me. I WILL be commenting soon, though.
I know it is taking forever, just bear with me. There was something I have to do first.
**My bad, y'all. I submitted the contest without telling it when the close date was. Wow. Sorry. ^_^
***Two more weeks for those who didn't get the chance to enter. I have a few days off from work coming up and that's when I'll be commenting on all your wonderful poetry! Thank you for entering, everyone.
All I request from you is that you give me your best and, please, none of the following.
- NoNe Of ThIs No MaTtEr HoW cOoL yOu ThInK iT iS! It's really hard to read, kids.
- No Homosexual Bashing. It's just not nice.
- No Saying How Stupid Someone Else's Religion Is.
- N0n3 0f 7415 31743r. I severely dislike it.
- Have fun and give me your best. This is just round one. Not many points will be distributed but I WILL be commenting.
Good Luck Everyone!! ^_^
**there will be more points/ honorable mentions believe me. I just have yet to earn the points for them.
***15 winners will go on to the next round. ^_^
I know it is taking forever, just bear with me. There was something I have to do first.
**My bad, y'all. I submitted the contest without telling it when the close date was. Wow. Sorry. ^_^
***Two more weeks for those who didn't get the chance to enter. I have a few days off from work coming up and that's when I'll be commenting on all your wonderful poetry! Thank you for entering, everyone.
All I request from you is that you give me your best and, please, none of the following.
- NoNe Of ThIs No MaTtEr HoW cOoL yOu ThInK iT iS! It's really hard to read, kids.
- No Homosexual Bashing. It's just not nice.
- No Saying How Stupid Someone Else's Religion Is.
- N0n3 0f 7415 31743r. I severely dislike it.
- Have fun and give me your best. This is just round one. Not many points will be distributed but I WILL be commenting.
Good Luck Everyone!! ^_^
**there will be more points/ honorable mentions believe me. I just have yet to earn the points for them.
***15 winners will go on to the next round. ^_^
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on January 26, 2008
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 10, Bronze: 10, Honorable mention: 12 people
- Final notes: Congrats to all
Contest Winners
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by HeavenScent4U 36 lines, 43 comments, on Aug 26 5:54 PM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Sad
Gold trophy winner
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Kiss me like calligraphy. / Soft and delicate, / Perfection in long swooping lines. / Write me a word, / Then a sentence, / Then a novel. / Crisp ink forming into the paper / and melting pagby mangledDawn 23 lines, 20 comments, on Jun 21 11:01 PM 2007. In Fantasy, Love, Other, Personal
Bronze trophy winner
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we watched you leave as
pieces of our hearts went with youby grannyeri 85 lines, 551 comments, on Apr 10 9:38 AM 2007. In Pain, Personal, Sad, Life, Teen issues, Teenage thinking, Family
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by RIP Whoever 8 lines, 3 comments, on May 10 9:15 AM 2007. In Nature, Love, Picture Inpsired, Quote Inspired Honorable mention
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by -Ink Artist- 34 lines, 19 comments, on Apr 6 10:34 AM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Dark, Life, Thoughts, Marriage, Contemporary Honorable mention
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Evil lives in the skin / As the pen burns / Ink into the grain / Of the paper / Words filter through the mind / Passed down to the hand / Iby The Cube 38 lines, 9 comments, on May 20 6:10 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Dark, Other, Spiritual, Abstract, Weird, Inspirational Honorable mention
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Today I got the postcard you sent in the mail, / the one with the zebras standing in tall, lank grass / and the unsympathetic, saffron sunby redradical 22 lines, 35 comments, on May 24 1:03 PM 2007. In Personal, Love, Hope, Lost love, Longing, Pain, Sadness Honorable mention
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A poet could be anybody,
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Walking the halls
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There's someone special in my life She's beautiful, smart, and can take away strife• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Reading Robert Dessaix / I muse on how well / men tell stories / hands to the wheel / eyes on the main / narrative drag / or metaphysical drift / they can see a life / (their own life, even)by WendyK 77 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 30 6:57 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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The rain / It's the greatest thing that nature ever created / For some, it helps them go to sleep / For others it hides the tears that theyby Deijinn 29 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 11 3:14 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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all is lost and i don't care too much it was fun while the thoughts lastedby Skitzie 70 lines, on Aug 22 1:59 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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What Do I Do when heby GettingPlayed09 6 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 22 2:03 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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being grounded sux!!!!• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Being brought back from the dead, I could tell what you said.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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My dearest One,
I've known you for years,by Wrozes Thorne 38 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 4 4:07 PM 2007. In Love, Personal, Thoughts, Contest, My own style• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
I hate you all of you, you made my life bad
you thought you could take my innoncence, left a little girl sadby trace3grls 24 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 5 7:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Hauntings of a broken past She looks in the mirror, wonderingby Feebie 45 lines, on Aug 22 4:26 AM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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The other night I was thinking of you,
And how someday I would have you.by AutomaticAtaxia 48 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 16 9:31 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
was just writing check it outby babygurrl12 21 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 17 11:25 PM 2006. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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You said i love you / but that was me saying it not you / You said you didn't want it to be through / I said it not you / You said that I put you through pain / You put me through pain / You said I drove you insanby God is my reality 20 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 26 4:07 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Pain, Sad, Personal, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I feel so lonely None seems to careby harryboy 12 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 20 9:53 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Downstairs, I can hear you, / You shout and you scream, / While I sit patiently, / I wait and I daydream, / I think of a time, / When nobody fought, / When there was no aggression, / Which is now just a thought.by xSweetDreamsx 43 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 28 11:10 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She sat in the spotlight with an umbrella in hand,
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Even if it hurts...by xXEndless-PainXx 23 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 1 11:20 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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a broken wing / can you help me fly? / trying to find myself / isnt easy / i need your love / to show me the way / to the light / help me stop / the animal withinby lunagirl15 37 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 21 8:41 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If you never talk to me again, I don't know what I would do.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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If you never talk to me again, I don't know what I would do.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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They were scared and even though they wouldn’t admit it, this little girl scared them more than anything ever did before.by xbyebyebeauty 4 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 2 12:35 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Blood red is my tunic as I
Lie in the trenchby nansie 12 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 29 2:00 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
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this is what We've become- but that's not what you're seeing is it?by Soten-Jaganshi 34 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 22 12:40 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I hold it all inside Not letting you see the real meby hidden-scars1977 76 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 14 7:32 PM 2007. In Sad• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sheltered by nothing she sits alone,
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Beautiful eyed young man, hides behind a wall,
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I know, daddy, I love you/ And I know, daddy, you love me too/by HugsForEveryone 22 lines, 13 comments, on Sep 1 11:29 PM 2007. In Personal, Sad, Thoughts, Life, Love, Sadness, Dedication, Freewrite• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Close your eyes against the reigning night It's okay that you're too weak to fightby WinterEssa 31 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 8 11:59 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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this life you're leading
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You dont know what you mean to me, You're always in my heart,by xTomorrowx 33 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 1 5:21 AM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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An unmarked grave
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The stars twinkled brightly / And I dont mean the stars in the skys / But only the stars / In his bright hazel eyes / I gaze into them deepby Megan Awesome 13 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 26 11:05 PM 2007. In Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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She welcomes a mystery romance / She welcomes this love dance / No clue what his name is / But she has already fallen in love with him / Doby LadyOfFate 8 lines, 21 comments, on Jul 21 10:22 AM 2007. In Nature, Society, Weird, Lost love, Life, Loss, Romance, Dark, Love• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Sudden times have now risen, Never gone nor unforgotten,by XendlessloveX 33 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 31 9:01 AM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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I told you I wouldn't hurt you / I'm truly sorry that I did / And love is always worth it / Even if it tears you up inside / I didn't do anby reaper of chaos 28 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 26 12:34 PM 2007. In Life, Love, Angst, Depression, Pain• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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by in-the-twilight 29 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 23 4:38 PM 2007• Commented on by judge.
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I walk around in circles, Wondering what will happen next• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The world full of lights, Cities are always busy,• Viewed by judge.
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Every feeling I had for you / Every tear I cried for you / Every word I said to you / And lie to me was all you could do. / Every kiss you gave to me / Every time your arms found me / Every time you promise• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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When I first met my friend Jaiden / we started off kind of rocky / I was a little mellow / he was a bit cocky / But this was a friendship /by tarrat0421 33 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 6 9:21 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Shun me, hit me, i`ll still love you so. I never want to let you go.by Dashed Hopes1992 6 lines, 14 comments, on Sep 26 5:01 PM 2007. In Random poem• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Everyday on time I saw your smile, it put a sparkle in my life. On my darkest nights I looked to the stars that twinkled by the moon, wonde• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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Winter’s dark / Cold embrace / Horse stands still / Frozen grace / Wolves howl / Birds call / Frozen night’s in / Winter’s hall / Wings widespread / The horses soar / High above the / Frozenby AaliyahSparrow 50 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 16 1:36 AM 2007. In Contemporary, Dark, Fantasy, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad, Thoughts• Commented on by judge. Prewrite
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pools of black liquid dripping across the paper
running in flourishes and scrollsby katie-jo 5 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 2 7:43 PM 2007• Commented on by judge. Prewrite -
In a summerian haze I search for another day / I walk away from my nightmares / Nothing left behind / Well nothing except a tortured mind /• Commented on by judge.
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A road less traveled / Beckons footsteps from the masses / People from all walks of life / Every race / All the classes / Taking a route over the bridge / Taking first stride / All at once / But not togetherby Improv Machinery 20 lines, on Jun 23 9:51 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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sounds fun! I am SO entering!!!
thanks for making the fun and exciting contest!
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Thank you so much. I can't WAIT to read it. Good luck!
~Raine~
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wow... there are a LOT of entries
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Yes, there are. Don't let that stop you from entering, though. ^_^ I look forward to each and every entry.
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heyy umm what should I do when i enter a pre-written poem? It won't submit for me or something.
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Damn you have a popular contest... but I love round contests so I'll totally give it a try! Meg
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i dont get what kind of poems we are supposed to enter
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What type of writes are you looking for?
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How many rounds are you planning on having?
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how come these poem say "commented on by judge" yet there are no comments on mine or five others I checked?
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Wow out of over 200 entries, thanks for the gold
Congrats to the winners. be well and be blessed
you mentioned rounds, how, when and where will round 2 begin?
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Thanks for the honorable mention it means the world too me Congrats to all the winners
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Thanks for the honourable mention, much appreciated.
Congratulations to the other winners, this was a great contest.
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Thanks for the HM award. Congrates to all the other winners.
All the best,
~T.S~
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