my second contest! yayy i have so much fun with these
DARK POETRY NO CLICHE SHIT! I'M SICK OF THE "MY HEART IS SHREDDED, YOU DON'T SEE ME FOR ME....i write enough of that junk!! give me something insanely dark as in crazy love! or whatever. if you write cliche stuff, it better blow my mind away.
RULES:
-no sticky caps...they seem pointless...
-no erotica
-don't over due punctuation. the words mean the most in these poems.
-no poems longer than 100 lines. That's my limit.
-NO VAMPIRES. sry, but they just don't appeal to me. i have no interest reading about them.
I will add more points and rewards and stuff as i go on.
IF YOU ARE A FINALIST, YOU CAN BE TAKEN OFF BECAUSE I CHANGE MY MIND VERYYY EASILY.
ENTER AS MANY AS YOU WANT!!!!!! JUST MAKE IT WORTH MY TIME.
I WILL COMMENT IF I LIKE IT. sorry to those who don't get commented...
++++++I FORGOT!!! PLEASE DON'T BE CLICHE. YOU BROKE MY HEART, I CUT MYSELF...ETC. YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! MAKE IT DIFFERENT!! DON'T BE SO LITERAL!&& please don't use the word depressed or depression. it simply ruins the metaphoric or symbolic meaning of the piece. (if you do, it's more likely you won't be a finalist..)
ps. i love gore & beautiful imagery&&& some dirty pretty.
thanks, i look forward to your entries
DARK POETRY NO CLICHE SHIT! I'M SICK OF THE "MY HEART IS SHREDDED, YOU DON'T SEE ME FOR ME....i write enough of that junk!! give me something insanely dark as in crazy love! or whatever. if you write cliche stuff, it better blow my mind away.
RULES:
-no sticky caps...they seem pointless...
-no erotica
-don't over due punctuation. the words mean the most in these poems.
-no poems longer than 100 lines. That's my limit.
-NO VAMPIRES. sry, but they just don't appeal to me. i have no interest reading about them.
I will add more points and rewards and stuff as i go on.
IF YOU ARE A FINALIST, YOU CAN BE TAKEN OFF BECAUSE I CHANGE MY MIND VERYYY EASILY.
ENTER AS MANY AS YOU WANT!!!!!! JUST MAKE IT WORTH MY TIME.
I WILL COMMENT IF I LIKE IT. sorry to those who don't get commented...
++++++I FORGOT!!! PLEASE DON'T BE CLICHE. YOU BROKE MY HEART, I CUT MYSELF...ETC. YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! MAKE IT DIFFERENT!! DON'T BE SO LITERAL!&& please don't use the word depressed or depression. it simply ruins the metaphoric or symbolic meaning of the piece. (if you do, it's more likely you won't be a finalist..)
ps. i love gore & beautiful imagery&&& some dirty pretty.
thanks, i look forward to your entries
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 20, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 35, Bronze: 10, Honorable mention: 3 people
- Final notes: thank you for all the entries!! i had like 40 finalists and finally cut it down 7!! again, i thought everyone's entry was terrific! thanks for entering my contest, good job to all the winners, and hope to see you guys enter the new upcoming ones i'm going to make!
thanks again!
-thelovesongwriter
Contest Winners
- Error: Unable to find finalist item 2105288, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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A show for the squeamish, let’s make them all sickby Death of the Author 13 lines, 65 comments, on Nov 14 1:22 PM 2006. In Dark, Angst
Honorable mention
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I know the words are not enough. / What else can I say(?), / To cope without a voice (or you), / Is like waiting to praise you speak, / And to feel you freely slip away, / Is like waiting my time to pay. / I• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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when I die look down but dont cry.When I pass out shake but dont shout.When you see my wrist bleeding,remember it was love I was needing.When my heart stops it's beat,think of the angel I didn't meet.When you pull the knife o• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
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I quickly run under the table
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by DancingShadowCorpse 45 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 25 10:56 AM 2007. In Erotica, Dark, Fantasy, Longing• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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that which the goblet of bitterness hath poured out
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I can smell his scent
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Turning quickly to deal with the intruder still there
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by Honesty Abounds 79 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 12 1:14 PM 2003. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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, But Now, I Will No Longer Hurt You......Love Always, Me / As an instrument of country music,
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And I scream and scream as you're touch slowly kills me off
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While death lurks
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A battle of the mind and body. the mind pressuring to commit suicide.by hopes of sorrow 21 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 2 3:15 PM 2007. In Dark, Life, Longing, Escape, Teenage thinking, Teen issues, Depression• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I couldn’t sleep last night / my mother’s pale face / was buried in the paint on the west wall, / through the window on the other side of the room, / no wait, even farther, across the parking lot / of the apartmenby Amberlee Carter 40 lines, on Jun 15 11:01 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Hi,I entered my prewrite "headbanger" but it won't appear,I tried again and the system message popped up to say it was entered,kinda curious as I can't see it,anyhow if you find it hope you like it!
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Thanks for the silver trophy and for the points. Congratulations to the other winner's as well.
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