Tell me about your pain. Tell me about your heartache. Let me know how you felt when you were left behind by someone you love whether in death or not. Or tell me the pain you feel for not havin the one you love.
Ok this is my first contest so the rules will be very simple.
Not to much cussin'
And no erotica.
That's it all my rules simple huh.
ok have fun I will try my hardest to comment on everyone of your poems. Good luck!!!!
Ok this is my first contest so the rules will be very simple.
Not to much cussin'
And no erotica.
That's it all my rules simple huh.
ok have fun I will try my hardest to comment on everyone of your poems. Good luck!!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on June 1, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 100, Bronze: 50
- Final notes: This was so hard to judge! All poems were amazing and each touched a place in my heart. Unfortunatly I can only choose 3 winners. I would have loved to choose you all but I could not. My semifinalists all touched me deeply I felt your pain!!! But my winners are the ones who affected me the most with their WONDERFUL poems. I thank all of you for entering my contest I never expected so many entries!!!!! Thank you again!!! And Congragulations Winners, and I want everyomne to know that you all are winners in my heart!!!
Contest Winners
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I’m standing at the podium / All eyes are glued on me / I’m trying hard to take in air / But it’s getting hard to breathe / They’re all expecting something great / Expecting something perfect / I wonder now if sby BeautifullyBroken17 68 lines, on May 23 7:30 AM 2007. In Pain, Love, Thoughts, Other, Loss, Death
Silver trophy winner
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You never saw me crying / Or sitting there alone. / Listeng to suicide music / You never suspected a thing. / Blood stained clothes / You didn't even ask. / Black clothes and Make-up / You tby Tilted-Misschief 43 lines, 7 comments, on May 21 6:22 AM 2007. In Dark, Life, Love, Pain, Personal, Sad
Bronze trophy winner
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Quietly I sit and listen to the wind pass me by / The rustles of the leaves / The clearness in the sky. / / The emptiness in my heart / The sadness in my eyes / The aching of my mind / Now that wer'e apart.by blondebabe1 58 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 29 11:11 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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I will never forget the days we once had / The days when you were everything to me / My mind used to tell me we'd be together forever / But now I realize that was all a big dream / The feelings I have for youby Figureskater437 18 lines, on May 29 5:05 PM 2007. In Love Lost• Viewed by judge. [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
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What hurts more? / The one who first destroyed it worse then others? / Or losing the ones you truely love? / / Does it matter anymore? / Oby Hells Bells 103 lines, 3 comments, on May 12 12:00 PM 2007. In Pain, Sad, Depression, Lost love, Romance• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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At first glance I am high / At the peak of the highest mountain / Alone in my thoughts and fantasies / Looking down on life as if it's David / And I the mighty Goliath / Nothing can touch me, I am invincible / Butby MartinArroyo 16 lines, on May 28 1:35 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I gave you my heart. / You ripped it apart. / I loved you more than life. / Took everything you threw. / I dodged a few, hit by most. / Yes, I love you. / Love you baby. / Come and take me away. / Lby Darkmoments 21 lines, 2 comments, on May 29 8:34 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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NEVER FELT LIKE THIS BEFORE HEARING THOSE WORDS ECHOING OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN. IF YOU JUST LISTEN _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LET US PRAY
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I had two poems about dreams. I meant to put in Just a dream and put sleepless dream in your contest instead. Could you please delete sleepless dream. Just a dream is the one I meant to enter. Thank you soo much.
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wow
the judge hasn't looked at anything in like 4 days
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i so sorry i hadn't been able to comment on your poetry. i no i have alot of work to do to get coughtup. But i wont be home this weekend so bare with me. I will have comments for all of u soon. -
I am so sorry i haven't been able to comment on ya'lls poems. I no i said I would but I've had a hard time here latley. Sorry but i can't comment on all ya'lls but i WILL read everyone of them and judge fairly.
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erm. this contest was finished yesterday, right?
well, who won?
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ty for commenting...tsk tsk
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sorry
im sorry everone i wish i could've commented on all ya'lls poem but there where so many. It took all i had to read them all and Then judge them!!! I'm sorry 4 not commenting. forgive me.
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