This is my 17th contest; I can't believe that the number just keeps getting higher and higher each time. I want your deepest and most spiritual poems. I want you to free yourselves and get me lost into your world. I want to be able to feel what you are writing about from within.
The Rules
1) No StIcKy TaPs
2) Stick to the topic or get DQ'ed
3) Keep the background where it's readable or I'll ask you to edit
4) Please don't send me crap
5) Have Fun!!
I'm looking forward to seeing all of your entries....
What are you waiting for????
Get Writing!!!
The Rules
1) No StIcKy TaPs
2) Stick to the topic or get DQ'ed
3) Keep the background where it's readable or I'll ask you to edit
4) Please don't send me crap
5) Have Fun!!
I'm looking forward to seeing all of your entries....
What are you waiting for????
Get Writing!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 2
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Honorable mention: 2 people
- Final notes: Congrats too all
Contest Winners
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I am a fading flower / planted here by God to add / beauty and joy to those around me. / A poetic creation swaying / in the verbal breezes• Commented on by judge. [remove]
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This is the true and only power of all
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As winter's now upon us-
the sadness that we feel intensifies.• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
A vastless sea of white lies befor me
All at once I am submurged in thought• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
If someone had foreseen what would happen to me.You would have not allowed them to breathe.by Lady Nightshade 55 lines, 10 comments, on Jan 5 7:20 AM 2007. In Lyrics• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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There is an energy beyond the starswhere brilliant beauty seeksthe slightest hope for long lost souls<p class• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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“Christmas’s mourning”
I stand and watch pillar without end• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
dont let the shed of blood
control the out look of life itselfby Aligirl1155 85 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 12 10:32 PM 2006. In Dark• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] -
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by BloodStainedTear 3 lines, on Apr 13 7:28 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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So you stared down on me... / Now all you can do is frown on me. / You exist, but I've lost respect. / I'm your loneliest defect. / I'm your tiniest insect. / I'm your permanant reject! / So you watchedby XChrisUnknownX 48 lines, 6 comments, on May 19 6:52 PM 2007. In Religiously Contradictive, Feelings, Pain, Thoughts, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
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Gold trophy winner
Silver trophy winner
Bronze trophy winner
Honorable mention
Entries [182]
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a well practiced laugh to fool your friends
but inside you feel like its the endby XsweetpeaX26 11 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 5 10:13 PM 2006. In Angst• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
True friends stand by each other
Through thick and thinby Abyssal Wolf 19 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 4 10:44 PM 2005. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
i look at the trees; they are quite tall. / i look at the grass; it is quite green. / / i look at the mountains; they are quite large. / i look at the valleys; they are quite deep. / / i look at the sky; it is q• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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There are trees all around me / In front and in back of me / They completely surround me / I’m lost in a different world / I run as fast as I can / Joy coursing through my veins / I fall flat on my back / Gby just-a-lonely-girl 30 lines, on May 16 5:30 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Immortal rememberance- Remember me
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Lost in yesterday as an unwanted phase
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by travis34dietC 17 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 7 8:53 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Do you remember the day we watched the sunrise? / You smiled at me as you looked deep within my eyes. / We sat on that bench for what seemed forever, / Promising eachother we loved one another. / Your mum smiled at meby CazzieJade 37 lines, 4 comments, on May 18 11:08 PM 2007. In Love, Teen, Angst, Romance, Cute, Sad, Personal, Pain• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Contemporary Free verseby -Ink Artist- 27 lines, 19 comments, on Dec 3 4:08 PM 2006. In Contemporary Free verse, Spiritual, Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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this one, this time, i can feel it; it's different / this one, this time, i know it; it's happening / / this one, this time, it is true and it is real / this one, this time, afire and flaming / / this one, this• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Illuminating is his everlasting light unto our paths.
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We were friends / Once / Best Friends / I thought / / You left for / Popularity / / I never told you how much / I missed you / / Never said how much / I hated you / For leaving me without a wordby travis34dietC 18 lines, 4 comments, on May 10 7:01 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A High Priestess of power
Pretty as a picture• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
red in my soul / blood stains on the edges of my heart / fires flaming from the dragon of my dreams• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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There is a fire deep inside me that burns for true love to come and set it free.
There is a raging fire with in my soul that will heat eveby DeathtoloveShade 3 lines, on Mar 29 7:51 AM 2007. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
"Will You?"
He asked me• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Structure; Rictameter
2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2, syllables and the beginning and ending line...identical• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Glory days at the lake / When the garden grows / where the river ends / the flowers bloom / the trees are green / where we swam as kids / pby Morgan222 45 lines, 3 comments, on May 15 3:37 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Lie me down forever / Lie me down to sleep / Lie me down to scream and cry / Lie me down to weep / / Stand me up to run away / Stand me up to die / Stand me up to be myself / Stand me up to lie / / Now l• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Hear them over canyons wide,
I'm standing on the other side.by madgirlslovesong 29 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 22 12:31 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Your death is a long and dreamless sleep / and like a blade you stained... / The lives you left: can you hear them weep? / our happy moments are dby Anne Marie 36 lines, 6 comments, on May 25 3:04 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I feel the fire / the blaze the burn / the numbness that never dies / I feel the skin / the slice the sin / on the inside my soul it crys / &nby Glendolien Adanya 20 lines, 2 comments, on May 9 1:15 PM 2007. In weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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my regrets / i regret nothing / for my whole life i was me / i should not hide / i should not speek / for i am me / and only i can be / i love me fully / so why should i lie / i have nothing to hide / m• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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by travis34dietC 24 lines, 16 comments, on Apr 8 9:42 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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It isn't so bad once I
Overcome my initial fear• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As I walk into the woodlands, / Through the path within the woods, / The cool breeze through the trees, / Refreshing the nerves, soothing the senses; / The sensational fresh air throughout, / The cr• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Keep them in mothballs / In your moth-infested ancient wardrobe / Your winter dresses in summer / And those out-of-date ideas of an idiot. / Who said we are hollow men? / Our insides are crammed with manyby karabi 98 lines, 5 comments, on May 26 11:00 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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I breathe in deep the morning mist,
And I know that it comes from you.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Is this really / Real, / or just a fantasy... / A long dream waiting to become / a reality. / I don't want to wake up, / don't want to find• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Meeting God is almost certain,
If there is no peace ,it’ll be curtain.by wholehearted1heme 24 lines, on Jul 3 7:55 AM 2006. In Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
And let’s face it this was never what you planned,
not even what you sort of wanted,by HowardsDaughter 64 lines, 20 comments, on Aug 25 5:25 PM 2006. In Personal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm hurt thinking of you, / A pain so sweet, / Bleeding forever. / Screaming so loud, / no one can hear. / Cutting so deep, / I can barely feel. / Lost in numbness, / and my reflection,by p0etictragedy xx 12 lines, on May 26 11:40 AM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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Seeing a innocent child smile
In their gentle tender little way• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I would never keep you here / I would never make you stay / I would never keep you from your path / Or make you choose another way. / / I do not wish to hinder you / I want you to be your best / I would never bby Jai Guru Deva 34 lines, 10 comments, on May 11 1:06 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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You stole the hearts and the hands of the poor / but they can still hear the shouts and the slams of your doors / and theres poison in coke cans and tounges turning sour / 'cause they all walk away when force comes to n• Viewed by judge.
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/ Amant De Moi / / Before, / Love was just another word. / It never really meant a thing, / Until you entered my life. / / You /by rjy13 50 lines, 3 comments, on May 9 8:09 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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How can the lack of something be a true nonexistence if it has a definition?
A boundary.by mysticlabyrinth 83 lines, 4 comments, on May 10 7:51 PM 2007. In Philosophy, Thoughts, Spiritual, Life, Nature, Weird• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
then everything went back to normal• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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So this is my static reality
Just a sea of plastic smilesby vindicatingkiss 12 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 28 8:10 AM 2007. In Thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Memories torture my soul
Presenting themselves when• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
This jump will truly end my life.
My little sister walks in,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I silently walk down the empty hallway / As I wonder what I hope to find / There's no one there; it's only me / It's freezing but I do not mind / The voices are calling, luring me out / Leading me to my horriblby XsecretxloverX 65 lines, 1 comment, on May 21 8:32 PM 2007. In abuse, life, other, pain, sad, thoughts• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Each night I go to bed
Diving into dreams of you.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
a bridge broken in the middle / what can I do? / cant go back / stuck in the middle / lost / confused / scared to lose / do I've the powerby yassmin 28 lines, 1 comment, on May 13 3:38 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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for years
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KATRINA doNT READ THIS• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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I am a fallen angel once I saw glory now all I know is disgrace. I have lost the passion and the strong fighter I use to be inside of me. Iby DeathtoloveShade 35 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 29 7:28 AM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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“HELP” she cried / She fells hate / and sees pain. / she cant stand tall much longer. / Some ones got to help, / she sees a rope , / hanging from the ceiling . / She looks to her arms and sees cuts and bruises,• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Your soul is empty.
brby xXAngelBabyXx 12 lines, 13 comments, on Nov 24 10:20 AM 2006. In Love, Personal, Hope, My own style, Personal., Emo• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
something i came up with.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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And peace remains there...somewhere• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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when all was lost; you hovered, a beautiful bird perched on my arm
a connection was madeby Looking 32 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 16 12:27 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Laid back and calm is what I am / Tense and distant I can become / Dark is what I keep from turning / Always looking for the brighter side / I try not to judge / Though I'm the toughest judge on myself / The• Viewed by judge.
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All these fancy words and fake plastic pearls
Are becoming too high school for meby Hello Love Goodbye 36 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 15 5:52 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Now that as I sit and think / I realize I love you but... / At the same time I see you deserve / someone new, / someone better / A girlfrie• Viewed by judge.
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In a dream your soul is free / Even if darkness covers you / A personnification of how your life will be / Your future that makes / Your destiny that takes / Your present that wakes, in you a conciesness of your pasby LordSam 14 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 30 12:23 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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My Yellow Star / I have been shunned for many years, / Because I am different, / I have been forced to wear a yellow star, / so that all th• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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The wind and rain seem to be dancing
Two lovers who can only meet in the sadist of circumstancesby Random Angel 40 lines, 7 comments, on May 31 5:34 PM 2006. In Love• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
“HELP” she cried / by Morgan Pierce / She fells hate / and sees pain. / she cant stand tall much longer. / Some ones got to help, / she sees a rope , / hanging from the ceiling . / She looks to her arms anby Morgan222 39 lines, 3 comments, on May 10 8:36 PM 2007. In Thoughts, Abuse, Death, Lost in thought, Freewrite• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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A muffled thought, seemingly abstruse, / frivolous and vagrant, has pierced / my complacency and coiled like a nooseby Raazi 21 lines, 13 comments, on May 16 8:30 AM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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So you think you have a soul, / Then where is it? / What's it's color? / It's shape, the taste, the odor? / Is it male or female? / Can you touch it? / Do you even know what a soul is? /• Viewed by judge.
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Righteous!
I love this idea! Trixie you never fail to amaze! -
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what do you mean by multipule writes?
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Multipule writes means that you can enter more than one poem in the contest as many as you would like to enter is fine with me. Plus you can rise your chances of winning the contest. Thank you for asking and best of luck in the contest.
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Of coarse it does
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How many entries max?
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As many as you wish and as many as it takes to rise your chances of winning the contest is fine with me. Thank you for asking though and I'll glad that you did.
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the first part is a pem the other 2 parts are more of stories but they are good please read them and tell me what you think i haven't entered many contest and this is a new experience for me, i think of it more as a test for myself to see if i have what it takes
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I love that album!
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Thank You!!
I'm so sorry for the delay in commenting
Have not been online as much and just realized this contest closed~
I'm so Honored and Appreciative for the Trophy
Made my day!!
Thank You for Hosting~
Wonderful contest to feel inspired!!
Congratulations to all who placed
Thanks again!!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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