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The Pain Before The Healing {Now Open To Prewrites}

I have another contest running and have upset some as in that contest I only wanted the healing side of abuse. To be fair to everyone as I know some are not there yet and really need a place to vent, I am offering this contest.

If you are not in the hurting stage and are on your way to healing here is the link to the contest for you:
http://allpoetry.com/contest/show/2345590

I am in the process of beginning an online support group for domestic violence healing and awareness. Here are the links if you want to check them out.
http://allpoetry.com/group/show/There%20IS%20Life%20After%20The%20Abuse
http://health.groups.yahoo.com/group/iamasurvivor/


What I want for this contest:

1) Your feelings while the abuse was going on or how
you feel now.

2) Punctuation and spell check. If there is not
punctuation I will warn you and if not fixed I will
not read it. I read much better with it there.

3) I know there is so much anger but please try to
keep the language to a minimum.

4) It would be nice {but not mandatory} if you read
at least one other work. I hate to see contests
where the only comment is mine.

5) I more than likely will not d/q but if you don't
want my honest opinion please do not enter. If
you don't use punctuation, you more than likely
not place as I think it is important. Oh! I do
not understand this dirty/pretty thing so if you
use that form please include a translation for
me.


6) Write in any form but please try to keep it under
forty {40} lines.

7) I will read and comment on every poem, no matter
how many I get entered into this contest. Just
give me the time. I believe that if you enter, you
have earned that much.

8) I decided to allow prewrites as some find it
difficult to write about this subject on demand.

9) If you are d/q'd because your write is better
suited to one of the other domestic violence issues
contests I currently am hosting I will send you the
link so you may enter it there.

Thank you for your entries. Viyanna Rosemarie


from the time i posted this tonight til now i have earned more points so raised the amount given the winners. if i see the entries are of quality and of the heart {very important here} i may add more.



ps-please be patient as i read the entries. due to the nature of the contest i am going to read 3 or 4, take a break and write something for me that is focused on the healing as i will stay better focused that way. i do promise that i will read each write. viyanna

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on May 8, 2007
  • Rewards: Gold: 550, Silver: 150, Bronze: 100
  • Final notes:
    i would like to thank everyone for entering this contest. i was disappointed that not all followed the rules. perhaps punctuation is not important to you but it is to me in some of the contests i run. this was one of them.

    future contests i run will be held under Lanterres4Xpressions

    congrats to all of the winners. viyanna rosemarie

Contest Winners

  1. Lying like a broken doll;
    Watch as blood runs down the wall
    by DeadofKnight 29 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 19 9:38 AM 2007. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Abuse
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  2. by PassionsPromise 72 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 22 9:42 PM 2007. In sad, hate, scared, alone
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. [remove]
  3. The restlessness
    Of burning sadness
    by Sable Payton 35 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 20 11:12 AM 2007. In Personal, Pain, Sad, Depression, Longing, Teen issues, Suicide, My own style
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove]

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  • LIve For Today
    April 10, 2007
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    good luck all , I would write a poem but I am in the healing stage and I donot want to go back ,


    • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
      April 10, 2007
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      i have linked the contest for the healing side of life to the contest. if you haven't entered, please feel free to do so. viyanna


  • MyAddictionIsLove
    April 12, 2007
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    how do i add my poem?? u told me to put it here but i dont know how i cant submit pre writes... even though its not


  • animated lies
    April 15, 2007
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    My poem is 74 lines, but they're really short ones (just chopped up) Is that okay?


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    April 16, 2007
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    not sure if i entered the one you wanted me to or not please let me know


  • Elvenfairy
    April 26, 2007
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    another support group taht is on this sight is Abuse victims survivors and all against abuse

    http://allpoetry.com/group/show/abuse%20victims%20and%20survivors%20and%20all%20against%20abuse


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    May 8, 2007
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    Congrats to all winners. This was a hard contest for everyone considering the topic. I feel i had great competition and was impressed by what i have read. Thanks to all of you for sharing these pieces. And Judge, keep your head held high, and look forward, blessings to all may He continue to Heal you.
    Much love
    Victoria


  • DeadofKnight
    May 8, 2007
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    Thank you for the gold. I wrote this to get what healing I could from it. To be honest, not much. Congrats to all the winners. And especially the survivors.

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