Put your hatred and tears into words, basically I need you to show me just how much you hate the way people/things make you feel.
Mix up some hatred, envy and hurt and you got some depression... put that into actual words and you have a good poem for this contest...
Enter as many poems as you want, I'm allowing pre-writes so I am expecting alot of poems.
Mix up some hatred, envy and hurt and you got some depression... put that into actual words and you have a good poem for this contest...
Enter as many poems as you want, I'm allowing pre-writes so I am expecting alot of poems.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 30, 2007
- Rewards: Gold: 300, Silver: 50, Bronze: 30
- Final notes: This was a hard contest to judge... It was filled with emo-esque poems and love poems which is the opposite of what I asked for... so after much trawling through poems (alot of them were good, even if off topic) I have found some good little poems which fit what I wanted.
Congratulations to the winners, you truly deserved it.
Contest Winners
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Recaptured rapture wreaks its
havok for today,• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2281133, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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by Edna Sweetlove 21 lines, 23 comments, on Aug 3 11:57 AM 2005. In Adult humour, Satire, Dreams, Fantasy, Dogs, Sonnets
Bronze trophy winner
• Commented on by judge. Prewrite [remove] - Error: Unable to find finalist item 2403015, it seems to have been deleted :( [remove]
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You will never forget my face
It will be the last you see• Viewed by judge. Prewrite [remove]
Gold trophy winner
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23/12-20/1 = Capricorn: A happy life. All you could ever want. Until the last hour.
21/1-19/2 = Aquarius: A long, slow death. A broken hearby Shiro Okami 12 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 9 3:49 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
When no one is watching we scream.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Security has been breached.
Systems are down,by hypnorocker 19 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 20 6:43 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. -
Blood all around me
Body on he floorby PhycoGoblin 39 lines, on Feb 5 6:29 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
As Im walking down the street
I step with my feetby Pjohnson 35 lines, on Mar 20 6:24 PM 2007• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I'm still that trapped little girl
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You cannot make me die.• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Behind a mask she hides
Solemn with abyss deep eyesby Autumns Soul 12 lines, on Apr 26 3:04 PM 2006. In Other• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
A china doll sat staring
Head cocked gently to the side• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
every breath that you take
is poison in my veinsby loveyouhate 22 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 10 9:30 PM 2006• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
and the floor pulls you down
embracing you with unforgiving arms• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
I can't help but believe
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It's sharper than a knife,
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Demon in the nite, devil in the nite,
fiend in the nite...killer on sight...by Dante DrakenSire 15 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 10 9:28 PM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Demon in the flow
that's all it can beby Dante DrakenSire 29 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 16 10:26 PM 2007. In Personal, Society, Thoughts, Hope• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Demons hear my cry
send thy enemy to meby Dante DrakenSire 3 lines, 8 comments, on Mar 6 9:11 PM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Devils sprinting in the nite
splitting and slitting throats in each of their sights• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Welcome to the darkness, breath in the air,
welcome to the darkness, welcome to my layer...by Dante DrakenSire 11 lines, 11 comments, on Mar 14 7:27 PM 2007. In Dark• Viewed by judge. Prewrite -
Living in grief, dying in relief , living in hell...
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HATE ME ! KILL ME!! IAM AN AUTUMN LEAFby Purush 15 lines, on Mar 20 11:32 PM 2007• Viewed by judge.
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You've no idea what you took from me
on an April afternoon four years ago...• Viewed by judge. Prewrite
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Important Notice!
I am now going through entered poems... there are alot to get through, I have briefly glanced at some already. Please do not mistake this for cheating...
I haven't had alot of time as of late and am therefor now sorting through poems and commenting where neccessary, all poems are now being re-read and if they will be relooked at they are being put in for finalists... my finalists list is actually my favourites list at the moment.
Don't worry, everyone will have an equal chance.
I feel I have to post this notice from a complaint I had when sorting my last contest.
Thankyou all for the great entrys
I look forward to reading 
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I just want to make this clear, I have asked for entries about hatred, envy and pain... i.e "I hate you so much, i despise you, i wish i had what you have though, but i still hate you so much i wanna kill you"
However instead of seeing sick imagery of ripping people apart I am seeing love poems from emo's and kids. I'm finding the rare mature love poem however still, alot of love poems. I want to make clear, it's ok to start with love, but it's about HATRED.
I've spent a couple of hours tonight going through, reading, commenting and adding to my favourites (I stopped putting up finalists due to complaints) and I have found that after a while a couple of entrys have gotten repetative, however there are some good poets in here and are being overlooked.
The rest of the poems will be read and judged soon, however I am aware of new entries still being submitted and thought I would post this notice. Thankyou -
WHO WON!?!
so who won? -
Please bare with me on this... I lost my internet access and couldn't log onto my allpoetry account on a public computer, however ALL entries HAVE been viewed by me, however have not been commented... I will be reviewing all entrys before judging, however I jotted down some favourites which have been entered as finalists.
The contest will be ended soon, I appologise for the wait.
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Oh My Goodness thanks for the Silver!
I mean it's nice getting one when you're in a contest with twenty other poems but when it's like 168 others?! How did I manage that?! Thank you so very much, never happened to me before... Or not at least that I can remember! Thank you once again and well done to the other winners! 
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