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Let me see your scars -a poem for the dark side of life

I want to see the darker side of life. Let me see your scars, let me see you bleeding. I want to hear about a love gone wrong, cutting, suicide, depression, anything that has to do with the darker side of life. I want to see your tears.

There are only a few ruled for this contest:
1.) No sticky caps
2.) Pick one of the categories listed below to write about and put the number of the choice in your authors box
3.) Put "Darker Side" in your authors comment saying you read the rules

Choices:
1.) Depression
2.) A love gone wrong
3.) Suicide
4.) Past scars (this can be used in a poetic sense)
5.) cutting/carveing
6.) Pain

*if you happen to have another dark choice then feel free to enter it just tell me what category you might put it in*

First place will recieve 300 points
Second Place will recieve 100 points
Third Place will recieve 50 points
Honorable Mentions will recieve 20 points each


No more then 3 entrys per person, and once again, I want to feel your pain, make me hear your tears.

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on January 10, 2005
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    You all did a great job, thank you for entering my contest and keep writing always! You all have alot of talent. The first place is The Litte Girl by I-am-emo Second place goes to Scars by SerenityNChains And third place is Final Breath by Scorpioskitten

    Honorable mention goes out to Revenge With A twist by mikeman8214 and Naturacide

    You all made this really hard to judge! Great Job to all of you, if i had enough points you would all get some!

Entries [22]

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  • pretend that u dont notice me,
    by Harleqyn 30 lines, 10 comments, on Nov 22 9:34 PM 2003. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The tears welled up inside her, ready to burst at any moment. Her flood of emotions poured over her heart burning pools of hatred in her eyes. The tears
    by Harleqyn 42 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 5 12:04 AM 2004. In Love, Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • A crimson soaked ribbon
    like a yellow yeild sign
    by papercutsagain 19 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 12 2:05 PM 2004. In Sad, Society, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • i count the miles,
    my heart bleeds for you.
    by PoeticGem 12 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 29 4:23 PM 2004. In Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Sh stands alone
    Against the world
    by Vampyric Kitten 16 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 8 12:30 PM 2004. In Personal, Dark, Angst
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Do you think I'm pretty when I smile?
    is my slefish sadness as ugly as it feels?
    by ValentinesDecay 16 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 25 7:13 PM 2004. In Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • divided lips in rivers few,
    meaningless riddles tear at my throat,
    by PoeticGem 24 lines, on Dec 7 11:57 AM 2004. In Love, Dark, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • isee how hurt
    and distought
    by vampire fangs 42 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 11 9:48 PM 2004. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • No longer can I live this life
    So I am going to reach for that knife
    by quackerZ187 17 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 20 8:20 PM 2004. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Sometimes my anger leads to silence
    Becomes hard to endure and grows violent
    by cutcult 41 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 20 8:57 PM 2004. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I look down and my naked body
    What do i see
    by XbrokenangelX 25 lines, on Dec 21 10:32 AM 2004. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I pulled out my razor and started to cry
    as I put it to my wrist and wanted to die
    by winkypinky01 27 lines, on Dec 21 11:31 AM 2004. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • but if you ask me for my reasoning, my quarrel is with you
    i hate every tiny, miniscule thing that you do
    by mikeman821 60 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 21 1:19 PM 2004. In Lyrics, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Bittersweet blood,
    release my pain.
    by a tortured soul 14 lines, on Dec 21 1:30 PM 2004. In Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My scars
    From wounds that cut so deep
    by mango peachie 39 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 21 6:30 PM 2004. In Other, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I can't fucking take any more
    I need this pain to end
    by Kef 45 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 22 11:05 PM 2004. In Sad, Lyrics, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • She doesn't want to feel frozen anymore
    She doesn't want to be ignored
    by angeloftime 34 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 29 6:59 PM 2004. In Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My scars will slowly heal.
    Pale white reminders
    by Shadow-Flame 16 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 2 1:32 AM 2005. In Sad, Society, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Those scars I hate,
    That show my past,
    by Lost and Found 37 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 2 4:11 AM 2005. In Sad, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You treated me like a friend
    but beneath you all had hate
    by SangLune 21 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 2 9:15 PM 2005. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I cried a river for my heart,
    the one you stole and broke.
    by fire sprite 21 lines, 1 comment, on Jan 2 9:26 PM 2005. In Sad, Other, Love
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • Feadra
    December 20, 2004
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    hmm. . . . it says "closed for judging on Jan 03" I'm so thoroughly confused. . . .
    ja ne
    Fea

  • BurnTheCold
    December 20, 2004
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    If you allow pre-writes I will enter , I have one I just wrote yesterday that would be perfec for this.


  • LaAmyaArlene
    December 20, 2004
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    I really wanted to enter this


  • LaAmyaArlene
    December 20, 2004
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    It wont let me though


  • BattleOfBlood
    December 20, 2004
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    to Broken Mya...why wont it let you? And to GothicBlood okay i will allow one prewrite per person, and to the first person who commented that means that this contest will close on Jan 3


  • BattleOfBlood
    December 20, 2004
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    Im having issues with this....


  • BattleOfBlood
    December 20, 2004
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    I fixed it now

  • The Winning Loser
    December 20, 2004
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    anxiousforthewinners

    man...such awesome works i've seen so far in the contest. i'm going to lose. -_- Although, i can't wait which of these'll be the winner. this should prove interesting. sure, i have a while to wait, but as the old old old toonami always said: "good things come to those who wait." ::Shuts up: x.X


  • Kristen Corpse
    December 22, 2004
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    Hmm. Suicide and cutting...seeing a lot of things about that lately. Been doing a lot of that too, cutting that is. I entered what I felt would work but I don't know. Hope you get what you were looking for in this contest. Best of luck. Love always,

    Kristen

  • BattleOfBlood
    December 25, 2004
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    Im sorry i couldnt get to everyone poem to comment but im really busy right now so here is my message to all of you: Thank you for entering my contest and you are all very talented poets and writers!


  • December 27, 2004
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    Is this contest closed? I noticed it might be and I entered.


  • IrrefutableBliss
    January 10, 2005
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    hey i just wanted to say thanks for giving me my first trophey!!! you have made my day!

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