My name is Haley and this is my second contest. This contest is for all of you out there who have had your heart broken and those who have lost someone they love due to death or breakups. I want to feel the pain you did or do from what happened. These poems do not have to rhyme. There are not many rules but here are a few:
1. NoNe oF tHiS (no sticky caps) it's too hard to read
2. It must be sad
3. You need to comment on at least one poem in the contest
4. Must comment on one of my poems
5. No commenting rudely on someone else's work. You were not always good and commenting rudely will result in disqualification.
6. Up to 2 poems only. More than to will result in disqualification
Good luck in the contest. I will comment on every single poem a.s.a.p. so do not worry if I don't get to yours right away. Again, good luck!
~Haley~ A.K.A. ~EMO~
1. NoNe oF tHiS (no sticky caps) it's too hard to read
2. It must be sad
3. You need to comment on at least one poem in the contest
4. Must comment on one of my poems
5. No commenting rudely on someone else's work. You were not always good and commenting rudely will result in disqualification.
6. Up to 2 poems only. More than to will result in disqualification
Good luck in the contest. I will comment on every single poem a.s.a.p. so do not worry if I don't get to yours right away. Again, good luck!
~Haley~ A.K.A. ~EMO~
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 24, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: This contest was extremely hard to judge. Everyone did such a wonderful job on their poems and it was difficult to choose which one was the best since they were all so good. Good job to all of you. You did amazing!
~EMO~
Entries [23]
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After you left
I wondered• Commented on by judge. -
you are done
it seems• Commented on by judge. -
You give me the rose,
and a golden glow infuses me.• Commented on by judge. -
I'm sorry it was a joke
I'm sorry it was hard to pokeby william of arc 5 lines, 8 comments, on Dec 1 3:45 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
count the leaves on every tree
and the birds that rest thereinby william of arc 8 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 4 9:57 AM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
im sorry things went un noticedi never wanted to lose youi put all the blam on youbut knowing what i do nowit was my fault your• Commented on by judge.
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\You played me,
Like a deck of cards,by Night Lilly 20 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 13 5:03 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
i tremble, turning away
to wipe away my tearsby StarvingEyes 36 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 15 11:09 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
This is about just a dream that will never be realized..it's kind of personal to me..I hope you like it...• Commented on by judge.
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I've never seen that look within your eyes, yet I know what it is
That look of despair that you regret what your fixing to do• Commented on by judge. -
Hearing it’s gentle splatters, the droplets fall forever
And As I look out the window pane I can’t help but think of you• Commented on by judge. -
How could you trusted her more
when you've only met her?• Commented on by judge. -
I pulled out my razor and started to cry
as I put it to my wrist and wanted to dieby winkypinky01 27 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 20 11:39 AM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
How can we?...
When every time I look at you I must look away,by Night Lilly 13 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 20 12:44 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
The sun is shining today,
a warm reminder that life• Commented on by judge. -
The knife,
Such a ceremonial thing it is used for,by LittleLeopardess 22 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 21 12:54 AM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
I think...because Happiness hates me.by Steve James 146 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 22 2:36 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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Doing a tap dance in my dreams,
I reach out for you to take hold of my handby iamyourmom4040 28 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 22 8:30 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I wanted you there with your face nestled into my arm, your hand draped across my chest, our legs intertwined exhaling the sweetest rapture even angles haven'tby Steve James 42 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 23 1:05 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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you were my first love
you took me above• Commented on by judge. -
I close my eyes,and quicksand absorbs me in the blind sight of anguish
Greedy pain,what have I done to you?...I envy what you can not feel• Commented on by judge. -
I apologize for wasting time
It wasn't always me• Commented on by judge.
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Comments
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No comments for this contest, a bit mean no? hehe
anyways good luck to all, and thank you very much for your comments. have a good one!
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cheers for the trophy
Merry Christmas
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No 2nd place winners?
-Karen Sue-
Romans 8:28
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