alright everyone. it's a one liner contest...(and my first contest ever)
one liners are just one line of writing...sorry about all the confusion. if you want an example, please look at my poems 'i was just thinking and...' or 'do you remember?'
so here are the rules (and there are only a few)
1. one liners ONLY. that doesn't mean short poems.
2. no erotica. i'm 13, i don't need to know
3. no humor. the lines can be about anything else. just no humor
4. three entries per person.
5. just because i don't comment, it doesn't mean i didn't read it. i may not comment on every entry.
first place-400 points
second place-200 points
third place-100 points
(second and third IF i can figure out how to give them lol)
so that's it. enjoy. i want to see something good
<3 fall
one liners are just one line of writing...sorry about all the confusion. if you want an example, please look at my poems 'i was just thinking and...' or 'do you remember?'
so here are the rules (and there are only a few)
1. one liners ONLY. that doesn't mean short poems.
2. no erotica. i'm 13, i don't need to know
3. no humor. the lines can be about anything else. just no humor
4. three entries per person.
5. just because i don't comment, it doesn't mean i didn't read it. i may not comment on every entry.
first place-400 points
second place-200 points
third place-100 points
(second and third IF i can figure out how to give them lol)
so that's it. enjoy. i want to see something good
<3 fall
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 16, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: thank you all SO much for entering. i got an amazing turn-out for this contest. Congratulations to the winners. it was super hard to judge. i've got quite a few honorable mentions...
obedience by flotsam jetsam-i wanted to place you SO bad. it was an awesome one liner. very hard decision...sorry
shoe contemplation by mooollory
why did you die? by my precious
sun fades by devilsson
night by ophelia
request by unamed her lover
right on, elizabeth by MargaretG
the sky has fallen by mysoul
hardest lovers by starlightsonata
stand by spokenfaith
love by kissofpeach
open heart surgery by bridgetjanejone
patience by ack1013
damaged by irisunseen
famous by bangxbang
all beautiful!!
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Little Dancing Fairies Leave Glittering Footsteps Across My Dreams.• Commented on by judge.
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by slowlyhealing 3 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 30 9:41 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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by Mozaic 3 lines, 14 comments, on Oct 30 11:29 AM 2004. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge.
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Prized wings lay pinned under framed glass.• Commented on by judge.
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Screamed words of the individual go unheard.• Commented on by judge.
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Lather, rinse, repeat; Always repeat...by punkgrl8844 1 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 3 3:40 PM 2004. In Humor• Commented on by judge.
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-The evil of man is messured by the intent of his rightiousness
-To dwell on what we want is to starve our minds of what we needby Night Dragon 25 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 18 1:33 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
If everyone falls alseep and the world disappears
Than i would sleep forever with you in my dreamsby livin41dieing41 19 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 4 10:15 PM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
Child of obedience, confusion sits upon your faceby Apocalyptic Scarves 2 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 8 10:38 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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by dedajjaded 3 lines, 9 comments, on Dec 8 10:51 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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by DrawnInBlood 2 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 9 2:55 AM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge.
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You look so trustworthy...• Commented on by judge.
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I'm asking pretty please, with lips as red as cherries on top.by UNamedHerLover 2 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 9 7:22 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Always, one large blossom pushes out with more pomp into beauty resembling a soft silky robe• Commented on by judge.
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I want to remember you and smile, but my tears are too heavy for my lips• Commented on by judge.
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My heart bleeds because this love is untouchableby wohadreambig 2 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 10 3:17 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge.
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Cats can't play with dogs forever, darling, the tiger and wolf are pitted against eachother from the start.-.The end.by dedajjaded 4 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 10 5:40 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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by Kill My Insides 1 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 10 9:04 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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by Kill My Insides 1 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 10 9:20 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Why have segregation when people aren't black or white, only different shades of brown?• Commented on by judge.
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Teenage reality is an expectation of a parents desire to chance a second future.• Commented on by judge.
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Aigles flee their lane: yowes herd thegither• Commented on by judge.
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Experience keepeth a saut scuil, but fuils will learn in nae ither.• Commented on by judge.
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Love is pain, sadness, happiness,joy, and everything that is anything.• Commented on by judge.
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I'll bet if you got AIDS, a scientist would disappoint me, and find a cure minutes after you got diagnosed.by negativeyellow 4 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 12 11:04 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge.
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there is hate in the peoples eyes as they pass through my mind.by gaiascully 2 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 13 6:36 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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i am the queen of low self-esteem, i am the damsel of more then just distress, can you see my anxiety, don't you know i am more then just a mess.by gaiascully 5 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 13 6:43 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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The err of your way is forgiven• Commented on by judge.
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PSYCHOPATHIC HATCHET MEN SPREADING CLOWN LOVE ACROSS SHANGRILA AND ISSUING SPLIT NECKS TO HATERS!by JuggaloGrubb 3 lines, 2 comments, on Dec 14 11:35 AM 2004. In Weird• Commented on by judge.
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Im just a kid and my life is a nightmare.by funniestcracker 4 lines, 5 comments, on Dec 14 12:43 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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Streams of thought within my mind twist and turn through the mesh that is real life.• Commented on by judge.
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by x9Nocturnal9x 2 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 14 1:02 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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by x9Nocturnal9x 2 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 14 1:17 PM 2004. In Nature• Commented on by judge.
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by technicolorgirl 5 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 14 2:19 PM 2004. In Society• Commented on by judge.
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by Baby Dream 3 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 14 3:11 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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"Life is a path that you may or may not choose to follow, but if you stray from the path, you may get lost and suffer"by Baby Dream 4 lines, on Dec 14 3:14 PM 2004. In Society• Commented on by judge.
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by autopsy report 1 lines, 3 comments, on Dec 14 4:02 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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The answers are through the looking glass... but I am blind.by Space Cadet 5 2 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 14 10:07 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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by Hysterical 2 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 14 11:15 PM 2004. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge.
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Love ends so it can start again as the sun sets so it can rise• Commented on by judge.
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by SleepyEyedreams 4 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 15 3:47 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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My love for you is aided by the flames of passion in my hearts hearth.by rightwaytohurt 2 lines, 1 comment, on Dec 15 4:28 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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You, my beautiful lust, shall be the last human I ever see.by rightwaytohurt 2 lines, on Dec 15 4:32 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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As the days go by, I wonder why, why you left me here to die.by rightwaytohurt 2 lines, 4 comments, on Dec 15 4:36 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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hey, I'm intrigued by this contest, and I'd love to enter, but I'm not exactly sure what a one liner is. If you wanted to send me a message, or post it in the contest description that would be great.
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I would like to say that, I love the idea of the contest. And I read all of them and I'm quite impressed. Not just impressed but afraid to enter. Cause mine won't be as good. But I'll try anyways.
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hey I just wanted to let you know, since you said you would give points to second and third if you could figure how to, if you click the help tab at the top of the page ad scroll down a bit, you will see a form for giving points.
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AH! I simply LOVED this contest. I really enjoyed this one line thing here, and thank you. Even if I don't win anything, I'm glad just knowing I learned something new. Thank you for your time and efforts to make this contest so wonderful.
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hey! cool contest! good luck!
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so... how many points is this contest for exactly? i saw 700 and 400... i was just wonderin!
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oh! never mind! i see!
700 points TOTAL! sorry!
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You can go to the help tab and go to the frequently asked questions it will have a small form for giving out points! Once you find that it is quite simple to do! Good Luck to all in the contest!
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Well, I pulled a poem out competition as it was one sentence but not one line, it was called fall morning...steveV
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all i know is i didnt know u could pull a one liner like some of the people did in here i mean wow i really still cant grasp on how some of the writers came up with them i entered not goin to win but jus getting my work out there great contest
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I just wanted to know if you wanted original things or famous oneliners cause I found at least one that is a famous quote but credit wasn't given.
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No humor? Have you the young heart of a Conservative Republican? lol. How sad not to include humor--which can take on many forms and is probably the most facile of forms...Ok I'm done whining.
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hi!
this may sound like a very weird request (and indeed it is) but could i write my one line in french? ill give a traslation in the author comments if its allowed...
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you can definately enter your line in French. you don't need to include a translation, with or without one is fine. i love the lanugage. sorry about getting back to you so late. i hope you can enter in time.
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Ooops!
Sorry, I guess I didnt read the rules properly.
Oh well, thats life, shit happens
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how in the world could you possibly give the gold to an entry that broke THREE of your rules? your rules were:
2. no erotica. i'm 13, i don't need to know
(he had one about masturbation in there)
3. no humor. the lines can be about anything else. just no humor
(he had PLENTY of humorous lines!!!)
4. three entries per person.
he gives you 3 entries... and then... 3 more! and then 2 more! and then 20 more! he goes, oh, well, i know i CAN"T enter these, but here they are anyway! and he wins gold.
help me understand the logic here.
~disapointed and confused in the outcome of this contest,
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I'm sorry, but did i just win this contest? I've been on this site for about one or two weeks, and i'm not sure.
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To be fair, i withdrew my line.
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Congratulations to all the winners! 'fallxintoxme' thanks for holding a great contest! x
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What a HUGE contest this was! I'm very happy to receive honorable mention among so many wonderful entries. Congratulations to the prizewinners!
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