**IN THE PROCESS OF JUDGING!!!**
Ok, so I don't have much time since I've moved in with my boyfriend and we don't have access to the net - but I'm home today doing laundry. So this is what I'm gonna do (this is for the MOD's too..so they don't judge it..that'd make me mad..) I'm going to print off every poem, take them back home with me, judge them there and then come back and do it. So if you don't see me online for a few days it's not because I'm not judging it - it's because I printed them off. But have no fear, the judging WILL be done before the 13th AND there will be a comment on every poem
I get free points for that you know..
Thanks for your patience guys!
Ok guys. So I finally got enough points for another contest and this time I'm going to be completely selfish.
In the past year I've been diagnosed with tendinitis in the back of my head, an STD, mono, depression and an ulcer. I've suffered the loss of a fiancee (no he didn't die, merely left me) and been left by a man in the Navy who "couldn't handle the distance".. So needless to say, I'm not having the best year of my life.
So this is what I want. I want poems for me, yeah, little ole me. They can be:
-Inspirational: give me inspiration, hope to go on. Let me know why my life is worth living.
-Spiritual: this is actually somewhat linked to inspirational - but doesn't have to be. Let me know God is there. I adore God
Just make sure with this option the poem is centered around God AND myself.
-Ego-booster: who doesn't like a good ego boosting? Let me know I'm appreciated.
-Erotica: Heck, a little sex every now and then (even if it's on paper) can make someone feel better. Comeon, I'm 18, I can't help but have raging hormones.
-Anything else you can think of.
Rules:
-No bashing. Well, you can I suppose, but I'm going to DQ you and have my AP mafia come get you.
-No StIcKy CaPs
-No Pre-writes
-No misspellings. I'll correct you once, if you don't fix it you probably won't win. Spell check is there for a reason.
-Try to be original
-Out of common courtesy try to comment on other people in the contests poems. I WILL take that into consideration.
-To give you a sense of how I feel here are the lists of my sad poems you might want to read. Brownie points awarded to those who comment:
http://allpoetry.com/list/3896
and here's the link to some poems for my ex-fiancee:
http://allpoetry.com/list/3895
**The basic thing you need to remember is the poem needs to revolve around myself, or inspiration to myself. If it's erotica, it should be with me. Get it? Got it? Good.**
It can be in any format, what-not/what-not. I don't care if it rhymes, if it doesn't..if it's prose, a story, eh, whatever. I just need something to boost my spirits. The best way to win a battle over the body is with the mind - and my mind isn't in the right state quite yet.
POINTS:
It says 308 for the winner, but most likely it will be 350-400 for gold, 75-125 for silver, and 40-60 for bronze.
Ok, so I don't have much time since I've moved in with my boyfriend and we don't have access to the net - but I'm home today doing laundry. So this is what I'm gonna do (this is for the MOD's too..so they don't judge it..that'd make me mad..) I'm going to print off every poem, take them back home with me, judge them there and then come back and do it. So if you don't see me online for a few days it's not because I'm not judging it - it's because I printed them off. But have no fear, the judging WILL be done before the 13th AND there will be a comment on every poem
I get free points for that you know..
Thanks for your patience guys!Ok guys. So I finally got enough points for another contest and this time I'm going to be completely selfish.
In the past year I've been diagnosed with tendinitis in the back of my head, an STD, mono, depression and an ulcer. I've suffered the loss of a fiancee (no he didn't die, merely left me) and been left by a man in the Navy who "couldn't handle the distance".. So needless to say, I'm not having the best year of my life.
So this is what I want. I want poems for me, yeah, little ole me. They can be:
-Inspirational: give me inspiration, hope to go on. Let me know why my life is worth living.
-Spiritual: this is actually somewhat linked to inspirational - but doesn't have to be. Let me know God is there. I adore God
Just make sure with this option the poem is centered around God AND myself.-Ego-booster: who doesn't like a good ego boosting? Let me know I'm appreciated.
-Erotica: Heck, a little sex every now and then (even if it's on paper) can make someone feel better. Comeon, I'm 18, I can't help but have raging hormones.
-Anything else you can think of.
Rules:
-No bashing. Well, you can I suppose, but I'm going to DQ you and have my AP mafia come get you.
-No StIcKy CaPs
-No Pre-writes
-No misspellings. I'll correct you once, if you don't fix it you probably won't win. Spell check is there for a reason.
-Try to be original
-Out of common courtesy try to comment on other people in the contests poems. I WILL take that into consideration.
-To give you a sense of how I feel here are the lists of my sad poems you might want to read. Brownie points awarded to those who comment:
http://allpoetry.com/list/3896
and here's the link to some poems for my ex-fiancee:
http://allpoetry.com/list/3895
**The basic thing you need to remember is the poem needs to revolve around myself, or inspiration to myself. If it's erotica, it should be with me. Get it? Got it? Good.**
It can be in any format, what-not/what-not. I don't care if it rhymes, if it doesn't..if it's prose, a story, eh, whatever. I just need something to boost my spirits. The best way to win a battle over the body is with the mind - and my mind isn't in the right state quite yet.
POINTS:
It says 308 for the winner, but most likely it will be 350-400 for gold, 75-125 for silver, and 40-60 for bronze.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on December 16, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 308
- Final notes: How does one judge a contest when everyone took the time out of their hectic schedules to write for me? I tell you, it was miserable trying to put places on all of these. They were all spectacular poems - and each deserve the gold. I want to let you all know how much this means to me that you took time out of your busy lives to think of me and try to cheer me up!
As for me - I've been put on Zoloft for anxiety and nausea pills for the stomach aches. I think things are getting better, but I still have my down days and I keep dreaming of my ex (which sucks) but eh..life's like that sometimes right?
Congrats to the winners and I apoligize I couldn't give you all gold trophies. If I somehow missed your entry and didn't comment PLEASE let me go. I'm human therefor I err as wellEntries [11]
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I know your sky maybe gray
You may be sad and kinda blueby unsexypenguin 23 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 24 1:18 AM 2004. In Humor• Commented on by judge. -
With my pen and my paper.
On this paper i write the future.• Commented on by judge. -
~~SPIRITUAL JOURNEY~~• Commented on by judge.
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Everything may seem gloomy for you now
you will come through this, do you know how?• Commented on by judge. -
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little ol' me says you
little ol' me• Commented on by judge. -
I know that I will find you
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by Shaggys Wife 12 lines, 7 comments, on Nov 25 4:00 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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You are a Bright and Beautiful young woman.
Still having the smooth supple skin of youth,• Commented on by judge.
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Sometimes life bogs us down
and causes such great pain
Look up from on the ground
And feel the gentle rain
Let it cleanse your hurt soul
In troubled times we gain
Friends are here to console
And wipe away tear stain
Pray sweet prayers to Heaven
In Jesus' precious name
Just keep your faith strong sweetheart. You and God can overcome all things. Philippians 4:13 I can do ALL things through Christ who strengthens me
Be Blessed!
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i plan to start a mindy support drive and hopefully you will be flooded with so many entries that you will beg all of us to go away. ok, so you will beg us to stay and of course we shall! we all need to make mindy feel better. there are so many categories surely theres something a person can say that will give her encouragement. i am praying for you mindy! i am keeping my fingers crossed for you as well. many of us love you and we think itz a better world with you in it verses the opposite. please get better, luvya, DARK.
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I am sorry that you are having such a hard time as of late. Please know that you are in my prayers and I will keep you in my prayers as you go to the doctor this morning. For your not so pleasant trip I will leave you a poem full of wonderful imagery to take with you! I hope you feel better!
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Yeppers, no probs... as a leukeamia survivor, a sufferer of rhumatoid Arthritis, clinical depression and am on suicide watch for another 12 months (ggrrr) I'll enter a beauty. Nice contest, self indulgence.. love it
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Aww!!! That's terrible..I'm so sorry you have to go through that...I want to write you a poem so bad..but I'm kind of 'brain dead' at the moment..lol...You have my thoughts and prayers...I really hope your spirits get up and you start to feel a little better
*hugs*
twizted bizkit -
I will have to see what I can come up with. Im sur I can come up with something...From AsmileIs4Ever2...
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Oh mendee...I don't know how to comfort you through your hard times, but atleast you are reaching out and wanting to feel better. Some people who are depressed and whatnot, just want to read sad poems, and don't like happy poems. So I'm proud of you
. Get to feeling better. I will definetely come up with something for this contest. And if I don't...I'll still write a poem for you to read. You're in my prayers
~Natasha -
I want to write you a poem, but my mind is blah right now... so I'm hoping it comes back. You are in my prayers though.. And I have a favorite quote, that I keep on my wall and I think it may help: "There's nothing that is going to happen to me that the Lord and I can't handle." That basically sums up God to me. He will always be there in your heart pulling you along.
Tasha -
lets all feel bad for you!!!!...and then write you poems and give you a lot of attention
wow... anybody could name stuff that happened to them in the LAST year, and find about 50-100 that suck big time...give me a break here -
im sorry to hear all that has happened to you i hope you feel and get better it may seem nothing will get better right now but it will good luck and i'll pray everything will work out for you
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goooooooodddddd
the theDARK1 sent me the link to your contest and i'll be thinking up something to help inspire you.I want to ask if you would mind the poem from a pagan point of view? Say.. umm most nature-ish with some spirituality? Yeah...thats the way my muse has been going recently so i hope its ok.
Best Wishes
Tasha
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Saw a post about you and thought I would come bearing gifts!
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Ted E. -
Hi! I've still been thinking about what to write for this contest, so sorry if it's taking too long. I do hope you get well SOON! and I hope you maintain a cheerful disposition despite things. I wish you all the best.
Keep writing
Kannika -
Keep your chin up girly gurl
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i hope you do great on your contest
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Or kiss my butt?
Get a life?
Then don't waste my time.
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Found a link to this page somewhere on this exspansive site and thought I would leave a few lines to say that I hope you garner lots of writes, I hope that they do the job that you are asking of them and that your mood returns to one of happiness. Perhaps I shall even have time to leave a little bit of fantasy within the confines of your contest, but if not I wish you all the best. Until next we meet...................
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life has only just begun for you and i'm sorry it got off to such a rough start.i hope time will permit me to write something,but know you are special and life's blows can't change that.
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Ok, so I don't have much time since I've moved in with my boyfriend and we don't have access to the net - but I'm home today doing laundry. So this is what I'm gonna do (this is for the MOD's too..so they don't judge it..that'd make me mad..) I'm going to print off every poem, take them back home with me, judge them there and then come back and do it. So if you don't see me online for a few days it's not because I'm not judging it - it's because I printed them off. But have no fear, the judging WILL be done before the 13th. Thanks for your patience guys!
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Thanks so much for picking my write for the silver. I was so glad to take the time to try and help you. I know it is not easy to overcome a depression or sadness so it sure helps to have support in a time like that. Also I would like to congratulate the other 2 winners. All I hope now Mindy is that you can start to feel better about your life. If you should ever need an ear I am here. Take care. Hugs
Alexis
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