Hola..this is my 11th Contest, pretty much all of my contest are the same though, but oh well...
Choices:
1. My family is constantly on my back, they always find a reason for me to stay in the house. Especially my mom. My friends are my life, and the only thing keeping me here right now, and they are trying to take them away. Pretend you're me, and tell them how unfair it is.
2. Write about being misunderstood. About how no one could possibly ever understand you. Describe your feelings, show me emotion. Lonliness, why they dont understand you, what it is that they dont understand.
3. Write about one, or more of the following topics...Cutting, Pills, Death, Anxiety, Eating Disorders. Give me pain.
4. Heartache...Im heart broken, and the only thing holding me together is my friends right now. I want to just give up all together. Im to the point I dont care what happens to me anymore. Write a poem about being heart broken, and how you feel. I dont want. 'Oh I went out with so and so for a week, Im going to die. ' Try being inlove, and with someone for 9months, and them leaving you forever to be a preist(something that hard, thats whats happening to me).
5. Write about having a best friend...tell me how much they mean to you, and what you would ever do if they died. If your friend did die, tell me about it.
6. Make me cry, give me a sad poem that will make tears come out of my eyes. Make it about beauty, make it sad and beautiful.
Rules:
1. No sticky caps, not too much swearing, no erotica.
2. 2enteries per person One Prewrite..but if you enter a prewrite, you MUST enter an original too.
3. Tell me in detail if your poem is true or not, and explain to me what the poem means(even if its obvious)
4. Pit 'Dont wonna break your heart, nor hurt you more then those people already have' in your author comments.
5. Try to comment on one other persons poem, and one of mine, you don't have to, but it'd be nice
Im not sure how many points 2nd and 3rd will get, depends on how much I earn by next Monday or Tues.
Choices:
1. My family is constantly on my back, they always find a reason for me to stay in the house. Especially my mom. My friends are my life, and the only thing keeping me here right now, and they are trying to take them away. Pretend you're me, and tell them how unfair it is.
2. Write about being misunderstood. About how no one could possibly ever understand you. Describe your feelings, show me emotion. Lonliness, why they dont understand you, what it is that they dont understand.
3. Write about one, or more of the following topics...Cutting, Pills, Death, Anxiety, Eating Disorders. Give me pain.
4. Heartache...Im heart broken, and the only thing holding me together is my friends right now. I want to just give up all together. Im to the point I dont care what happens to me anymore. Write a poem about being heart broken, and how you feel. I dont want. 'Oh I went out with so and so for a week, Im going to die. ' Try being inlove, and with someone for 9months, and them leaving you forever to be a preist(something that hard, thats whats happening to me).
5. Write about having a best friend...tell me how much they mean to you, and what you would ever do if they died. If your friend did die, tell me about it.
6. Make me cry, give me a sad poem that will make tears come out of my eyes. Make it about beauty, make it sad and beautiful.
Rules:
1. No sticky caps, not too much swearing, no erotica.
2. 2enteries per person One Prewrite..but if you enter a prewrite, you MUST enter an original too.
3. Tell me in detail if your poem is true or not, and explain to me what the poem means(even if its obvious)
4. Pit 'Dont wonna break your heart, nor hurt you more then those people already have' in your author comments.
5. Try to comment on one other persons poem, and one of mine, you don't have to, but it'd be nice
Im not sure how many points 2nd and 3rd will get, depends on how much I earn by next Monday or Tues.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 27, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Honorable Mentions
I Wanna Be With You
by Crazy Cole9
The Vine of My Endeavor
by shastadaisey123
You'll Never Understand
by bleeding1408
And both poems by LeanderEntries [19]
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Some days I experience feelings feelings I don't even understand
Days when love, hatred, and sadness is mixed into oneby crazymanbones 37 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 5 10:13 AM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
my heart beats
my and are swelled and so are my feet• Commented on by judge. -
Lost to me… Lost to we. The sunset was ours, even for just a glimpse. The time was well spent and efforts exhausted. There’s no going back to candy apple beby OneideJack 47 lines, 6 comments, on May 26 11:28 PM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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this is just bout a girl with a bad life n ...well its my life n my issues im soz if this harms ne1 cause they mite have it much worst but dis 4 ME is worst• Commented on by judge.
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this is my favorite so just read it okay. you'll learn something.• Commented on by judge.
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Was it something I said? Is it because I asked if you love me, or because I need you so?
Was it something I did? Is it because my only desire was to holdby OneideJack 38 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 8 2:01 AM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
A poem by ASHLEY GIBSON!!!by Shanny Snyder 39 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 15 12:10 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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And for an instant everything turned green
The wavy italics• Commented on by judge. -
About my broken heart...• Commented on by judge.
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As I pick myself up off the floor
And stagger through the door• Commented on by judge. -
'Dont wonna break your heart, nor hurt you more then those people already have'• Commented on by judge.
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what have i done too you?
for you to go behind my back and spread lies• Commented on by judge. -
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You'll never understand my pain
Or what I have been put through• Commented on by judge. -
on these walls are faces made of paper
pretty picture people with features of secretsby isopanisad 52 lines, 5 comments, on Oct 24 2:56 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Better to have never loved
Than forfeited your soul• Commented on by judge. -
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So I guess I'll never stop
I'll just keep on cutting• Commented on by judge.
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awesome contest lala, Love you! I might enter sometime..
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I'm definitely entering Sis, I always enter or at least try to enter your contest and this one I am confident that I will at least eneter one poem in your contest I hope you're okay, I'm worried about you
---Sara
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Hello hun
I'm going to try my best to come up with a poem to enter this contest
But I'm still stuck with that other one I'm writing though... I have like, lots of ideas to put in it, but I just can't find away to make it decent
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Haha...okay hun
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hey la!
great contest here
hope you find what you are looking for!
funny how heartache occurs on the outside
and it finds its way in
take care, la
with hugs and lots of love,
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the background is great, by the way
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I entered my prewrite. This poem was written while at work, so not much time could be spent on it.
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Wow I was reading the choices and I can relate to every single one of them... I would enter but every time I try to express one of these it all comes out in a jumble.
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well i hope i got it im kinda confused on the poems lol like the prewrites if its wrong ill change it neways good luck judging.
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DARN!!!! I'm not in this contest yet!!!! PPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! wait a while before closing
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a great contest and thank you for being so kind...
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Silver trophy winner
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