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It shouldn’t hurt to be a kid (2) (CONTEST)

The group UsedandAbused have decided to do 2 contests back to back.
Our aim is to get people who have not been abused aware of the signs and symptoms of abuse. We know people are not stupid and they think they would know if a child was being abused, but would they?  Would you?

THE GROUP PEACECHAIN HAVE DONATED 200 POINTS FOR THIS CONTEST, THEY SUPPORT WHAT WE ARE TRYING TO DO.
saurabh has donated 51 points for this contest.These points plus some others we have will be given to honourable mentions.
cutipie has donated 150 points for this contest, these will be distributed to the person/persons we feel have done the most powerful poem (Not necessarily the winner)

So this is the second of the two contests

Judges

sanity
colormejaded
nicotine

This contest is for those that have been abused.  You have 2 choices, please don’t just choose choice 2, we need to get through to people.

1)We would like to know what sort of person you are, what affect has the abuse had on you, has it made you stronger? Can you trust more? What has it done to your self esteem?  We don’t want ‘it made me cut’ type of poems; we really want to let people know how we feel/felt and why it is important if they suspect a child is being abused to tell someone.

2)What would you say to a child who was being abused? How would you convince them to tell someone, write a poem to an abused child, and convince them to tell someone about the things they are going through. FOR THIS CHOICE, PLEASE DO NOT PUT IT IN THE ABUSE CATEGORY, WE WANT THOSE IT IS AIMED AT TO BE ABLE TO READ IT.

Simple really, we are not going to say have fun because this is not a fun subject, but we are sure it is one that many agree should be faced from time to time. If we can make at least 10 people aware of the signs and symptoms of abuse, it is 10 more children we can save.

We want this to be a poem about you. So this contest is going to be hard to enter, let the reader know what child abuse does to a person, you can make it as graphic as you want, we are trying to get through to people what child abuse does. Please if you are graphic; put it in the appropriate category.

Anyone wishing to join UsedandAbused can apply here allpoetry.com/Application/612686



For those of you who have not been abused there is a contest to help us promote child abuse awareness allpoetry.com/poem/863076

1st 300 points + 100 points
2nd 150 points +  50 points
3rd  75 points +  50 points



This is being judged, your poems are being read and commented on, you will get the results soon, I promise


THIRD PLACE GOES TO ----Run and Tell! by pattyann4500---- So0rry about the mix up

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on October 11, 2004
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    150 points to Daddy, Why Don't You Love Me Anymore? by tothegrave

    50 points to All I ever wanted was to make you proud by SaintMatthew

    Thank you all for being do patient

Entries [16]

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  • but my little brother was too
    young to understand my tears
    by carlspenc1 39 lines, 11 comments, on Oct 23 4:36 PM 2004. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You say I am
    And therefore I was
    by susanne 44 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 24 11:23 AM 2004. In Sad, Personal, Abuse
    • Commented on by judge.
  • ~~ I FOUND THE LITTLE GIRL ~~
    by qnhoneybee 121 lines, 18 comments, on Oct 24 11:57 AM 2004. In Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • FEEL THE PAIN AND HATE.
    by carlspenc1 39 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 24 1:11 PM 2004. In Personal
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • thats the aftershock
    of being abused.
    by carlspenc1 12 lines, 13 comments, on Oct 24 1:47 PM 2004. In Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • He says I am his little Girl
    His special one
    by prettyangeleyes 18 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 3 1:00 PM 2004. In Abuse
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I jolted up in bed, perspiration pouring from my forehead, and I screamed. The trauma from the age of three still with me, seriously needed to be addressed. M
    by pattyann4500 29 lines, 12 comments, on Nov 3 2:32 PM 2004. In Abuse, Other, Personal
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Stop treating me as if I were made of dark steel,
    Not to be broken and never to heal.
    by Lady of Shadows 40 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 3 6:23 PM 2004. In Abuse, Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You should get the picture...
    by MattMan53190 19 lines, 9 comments, on Nov 3 7:24 PM 2004. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You’re the plague of perpetual darkness
    That’s set out to reek havoc
    by FragileDecay 27 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 3 9:21 PM 2004. In Sad, Personal, Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Speak 29 lines, 6 comments, on Nov 3 10:01 PM 2004. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Oh daddy dearest
    Please read me a story telling me of all my failures
    by tothegrave 74 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 4 12:03 AM 2004. In Abuse, Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • You can hit me you can kick me,
    but I will never let you go.
    by confusedlife 53 lines, 1 comment, on Nov 4 5:51 PM 2004. In Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • One stromy day my dad walks in, in anger and fear he shadows in.
    Then he comes back and delivers his strenght he can see our fear but does he care?
    by 15 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 4 10:10 PM 2004. In Abuse
    • Commented on by judge.
  • All I ever wanted was to make you proud
    Just to hear you say it, just to hear the sound
    by SaintMatthew 76 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 4 10:20 PM 2004. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • boogp04
    October 22, 2004
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    ahhhh...I found the contest that I can enter...I will start writing for this soon...I'm excited to get the word out there.....hmmmmmmm...I have ideas already...
    Brandie


  • YerTweetyness
    October 22, 2004
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    Bless your heart for hosting such a meaningful contest!
    I will try and come up with something.... Have a sweet day!!
    YerTweetyness


  • PeaceChain silver member
    October 22, 2004
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    I think this is a great idea I am sure soem from Peace chain too will write for this. you have our support.

  • Apparition
    October 23, 2004
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    A very meaningful contest. I am always glad to see someone address this issue. The affects of child abuse never go away...they mark that person for life...inside..if not outside.

  • Acadia
    October 23, 2004
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    Do you consider rape abuse?
    ~Acadia~


  • tothegrave
    November 4, 2004
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    Very much so, Acadia. I was sexually molested, so I consider that abuse.


  • Elvenfairy
    November 4, 2004
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    finaly, a contest that isn't mearly about songs or movies! It's good to have contests taht are for a good cause.


  • Account Closed198
    November 4, 2004
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    Writer's block..never-the-less....good contest..common but good.
    Edited on Nov 04, 6:19 p.m. because 'i changed my mind >.>'.

  • MattMan53190
    November 5, 2004
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    Great contest

    I've finally gotten a chance to get this off my chest, I've never had anyone I could tell this to so... thank you

  • Lady of Shadows
    November 6, 2004
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    It was an awesome idea for a contest. This is a great way for people to be able to express themselves and open themselves up without fear of ridicule or judgement. It was a wonderful idea, and I support this whole-heartedly. Good luck to all the contestants.


  • Rayray
    November 9, 2004
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    This is a great idea for a contest and look at all the people who entered. Thanx for the contest I enter This Lady' hope you like it.
    Rayray


  • carlspenc1
    November 11, 2004
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    thank you EVERYONE ... to be placed and awarded a little cup is a very nice bonus , however` the cup means nothing to me unless my pain has been used to help stop another child from being abused .
    this contest was hard work for me and re-living the pain and suffering comes at a price ?, I want everyone to continue the fight against abuse and I want everyone to share in my little moment of glory .... by saying well done to themselves for taking the time to enter this contest and for showing they care.

    EACH AND EVERY ONE OF YOU IS A GREAT PERSON

    THANK YOU

    your fellow poet

    CARL

  • tothegrave
    November 11, 2004
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    I didn't get any points, did I? I still only have 19 points, I'M CONFUSED!!! Thanks for giving me points though, really appreciate it and glad you liked it.


  • sanity
    November 12, 2004
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    your points should be with you now

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