Hey everyone! I want to see some really good poems!! I want to feel your pain, and most of all I WANT TO CRY!!! i am really in the mood for some good poems about relationships, ones that turn out good and some bad! i always like a good love story! if you can get two in one that's great! sad and romantic! wow! okay so rules:
1. no cutting horror stories(unless its about what leads you to become a cutter)
2. no stories, only POEMS!!!(that is my biggest pet peeve)
3. i am leaneant on splelling, as you can see i am am not the best at it either, i just ask that i am able to understand what you mean
4. in comments down at the bottom pleez right "Aaron is a sexy drummer!" o yeah pleez write this so that i noe you actually read the rules
5. comment on other people's work
6. pleez check out some of my poems, i could always use critique and applause
7. have fun!
i dont really have too much to say.....so um...penguins rock....corn tastes good...usher is sexy...o yeah listen to my song:
the world is a circle
but i am a square
doop doop doop
o yeah
doop doop doop
o yeah
good song huh? ok well i um dont really have too much too say so....
GOOD LUCK!!! :coffee: :monkey:
adios!!!
1. no cutting horror stories(unless its about what leads you to become a cutter)
2. no stories, only POEMS!!!(that is my biggest pet peeve)
3. i am leaneant on splelling, as you can see i am am not the best at it either, i just ask that i am able to understand what you mean
4. in comments down at the bottom pleez right "Aaron is a sexy drummer!" o yeah pleez write this so that i noe you actually read the rules
5. comment on other people's work
6. pleez check out some of my poems, i could always use critique and applause
7. have fun!
i dont really have too much to say.....so um...penguins rock....corn tastes good...usher is sexy...o yeah listen to my song:
the world is a circle
but i am a square
doop doop doop
o yeah
doop doop doop
o yeah
good song huh? ok well i um dont really have too much too say so....
GOOD LUCK!!! :coffee: :monkey:
adios!!!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 5, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes:
Entries [41]
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You left me
Thinking I was okby ScooberRaver 8 lines, 5 comments, on Jan 29 12:18 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
The time of cold draws near
My dear• Commented on by judge. -
will you stop the war,
Will you find me before it's too late?• Commented on by judge. -
by OneideJack 38 lines, 2 comments, on May 26 11:07 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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this was written about sumone that I loved and thought that they loved Me but ending up fucking Me over more ways then one• Commented on by judge.
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Kindness loved Hate. Hate loved Kindness. This is what happened to both. Told in Kind's Point of View• Commented on by judge.
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i see your laughing faces
hear your taunting cries• Commented on by judge. -
He was 4 years old today
She sets his cold limp body in the trash• Commented on by judge. -
I saw you crying today
I don't think you noticed• Commented on by judge. -
its creepy i think...i wrote it as the words came to mind.so idk if this will make much sense to youby CraZedAsh07 41 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 31 10:29 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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Blood soaked shirt
Clings to bare fleshby Angel Eyez 41 lines, 10 comments, on Sep 8 11:31 AM 2004. In Beat• Commented on by judge. -
I sit here and cry, tears falling one by one.
You aren't here to help me, to take care of your son.by LaAmyaArlene 36 lines, 12 comments, on Oct 3 7:07 PM 2004. In Sad, Love, Dark
Bronze trophy winner
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Gone from this world without a trace,
Without as much as a footprint remaining,• Commented on by judge. -
A girl
Broke my heartby Mzdimpl3zifyanasty 25 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 10 10:28 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Looking into the mirror,
crying for what I see.• Commented on by judge. -
Time is nothing but time
No verse, only rhyme• Commented on by judge. -
he'll meet you
and sweep you off of your feet• Commented on by judge. -
She told us all
She was okay• Commented on by judge. -
I panicked yesterday
When I couldn’t remember• Commented on by judge. -
i was a weak child
who had no confidenceby korndeath666 36 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 20 9:11 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
i could say he broke my heart
more like shredded it• Commented on by judge. -
this is not anxiousness,
merely a habit of choice.• Commented on by judge. -
I realized today
That I don’t love you.• Commented on by judge. -
what is a hero,
but one who is in the righteous,by Untill It Sleeps 12 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 22 6:34 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
When I was a little girl all I had to do was stare into
your blue eyes to know that I was alright.• Commented on by judge. -
i am the forgotten,
dying here i am rotten.• Commented on by judge. -
Dreams from my past, dreams from my past
Innocent days that could not lastby blondeoverblue 17 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 23 6:03 PM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
The teddy bear you bought me
still sits upon my bed,by leannewales 68 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 23 6:15 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
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Fantasy unlived
Ill-fated reverie• Commented on by judge.
Silver trophy winner
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Ummm.. Did you mean sadest, or saddest? Sadest would have something to do with sadists, who are people who get off on hurting other people. Saddest would have to do with things that are sad.
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hey, so i screwed up, i said i wasnt that good at spelling if you read the rules
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Aaron is a sexy drummer!"
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ha..I have a lot that would fit this category
so i entered them all
hope they are not too lengthy
great contest
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i have one poem im entering in here, love actually! mwahaha. umm... yea... aaron is a sexy drummer??? lmao umm yea... welp, yea.
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yep... i edited the mistakes i caught. hmm... i dont know, i think i got most of them. welp, adios now.
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k, kool
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i read the rules but im not going to say that this aaron of yours is a sexy drummer for a pretty signifigant reason...
im not gay, so sorry, but i did read your rules. -
Aaron is a sexy drummer
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Aaron is a sexy drummer!
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Aaron is a sexy drummer
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Hey nice set of rules. LOL!. Dude. Wicked stuff.. Pick ME Pick ME! lol. just kidding. well im a humerous person so dont pick on me.
well.. here it goes.. *Says it LOUDER than anyone else* "AARON IS A SEXY DRUMMER!"
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lmao at cless' comment, that's hilarious. And I know for a fact Aaron is a sexy drummer because I have a friend named Aaron who's a sexy drummmer too. Isn't that awesome!? lol.. I always know a girl named Erin who's a drummer.. but I won't call her sexy seeing as how I'm also not gay. lol.. that's hilarious. anyway.. I shall leave now..
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ummm Arron is a sexay drummer?!?!?! LMAO I am entering two poems I hope thats okay!
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oh yeaaaaaaaa Arron is a sexy drummer.
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ooo baby aaron is a sexyfied drummer
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"Aaron is a sexy drummer!"
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Aaron is a sexy drummer!... lol... what is that all about???... lol... oh well... its still funny.
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Aaron is a sexy drummer! lol am sure he is! lol
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uh... questionable, just 'cause I had to say
I feel rather feminine saying this, and although it is against my better nature and my sexuality (if Aaron is a guy, if, however he/she is actually a girl, then disregard whatever is said in this comment)............... but I guess that Aaron is a sexy drummer.... Oh God!... I hate saying that too, but that was so... so... so hard for me to do. I think I'm a sexy drummer too :
)))(<---alien smiley)
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Aaron is a sexy drummer... (refer to the other comment posted by Joshuada), I entered two, I hope it is okay.
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"Aaron is a sexy drummer!"
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umm...'Aaron is a sexy drummer' I guess... lol *shrug*
good luck 2 everyone who enters!
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"Aaron is a sexy drummer!"
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Aaron is a sexy drummer!
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Aaron is a god damn sexy drummer.
Decided to put a spin on it
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Aaron is a sexy drummer, OK that was wierd.
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Aaron is a sexy drummer. lol, now that wasnt that hard was it? *cough* jk, lol, gl to everyone in tha contest!
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oops i put aaron is a sexy drummer on my authurs notes...aaron is a sexy drummer
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Well, I did what several other contestants did: I put "Aaron is a sexy drummer" in the Author Comments on the poem I entered.
So, "Aaron is a sexy drummer!"
BonnieQ
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uh when will the jugding be done????
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Aaron is a sesy drumer.. I don' know if I listed this or not already!!!
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Hmm trying not to be rude but when are you gonna post the winners?? I am gonna be outta town for awile and very anxious to see who won
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'Aaron is a sexy drummer'
giggity giggity giggity
oh yeahh
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Manicmuze, deserved to win, but the two other poems that placed were utterly unreadable, blah.
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