"-I don't want to be the one the battles always choose,'cause inside I realize, I'm the one confused-"
-lyrics from:Breaking The Habit by Linkin Park
If you haven't picked this up from the lyrics above,this contest is for people who are downright fed up and depressed.This is for people who want more out of their days but can never get ahold of them.This is for people who are flooding rivers among a society of stagnant waters>This is for fans of "Dead Poets Society" and Linkin Park. This is for the hopeful found hopeless, real winners at a loss, a laughter with tears and for anyone who write out of their hearts...
WELCOME To My Deep Deep Deep Lair in the most unexpected ,rare and deranged thoughts of my mind- now enter your place you have much like this.
WRITE A POEM!!!
URGENT NOTICE!!!!!!:seeing how things in this contest aren't going as expected, i am adding some more options and new prewrites plan: YOU MAY ENTER ONLY ONE, BUT ONE NONETHELESS PREWITE IN ADDITION TO AT LEAST ONE NON-PREWRITE PIECE!!!
thank you
RULES:
1- you must not enter old, groggy prewrites
2- you must have been described above
3- i only accept dug deep poetry-no imposters!
4- comment on at least two of my poems(thanks!)
5- no slang ,sticky-caps or Internet talk
6- no adult themes or erotica ,nothing vulgar or sick
7- be creative, be you
8- make me contemplate your masterpiece(s)
9- put the # of choice you chose in authors comments
10- up to 4 entries allowed
THANK YOU
choices~:
1- a poem inspired by the movie "Dead Poets Society"(I'd like to get lots of these-hint hint
or Linkin Park or U2 or Depeche mode music. Please, nothing against them.(If you haven't seen that outstanding movie, i encourage you to do so ASAP.)
2- write a poem about fighting with your faults,are you learning to accept and live on with them? do they strengthen or weaken you?
3- Paint a picture of your emotions
4- if you are depressed, write about it.what causes it?is there any hope what so ever? (descriptions)
5- write a poem about how you wish someone would cared-what happens?
6- something described in the opening intro.
7- O Captain ,My Captain!- who is your captain, friend or favorite poet,hero and how do the effect, encourage you?
8-break your box, come out of it and break it.don't be held back or discouraged. be yourself.
9- give me something to think about and ponder over and over , take some everyday thing and twist it around into your own little creation!be creative creative creative creative...i think you get the idea
10- fantasy symbolisms- I'm not very acquainted to fantasy poems, so if you are a fantasy fan ,you can enter and surprise me! paint a fantasy scene with your word that portrays/symbolizes an action in the everyday world.(short example : tears of a shunned dragon that symbolize your forgotten self in all your abounding agony and woe!)( you are allowed to use that example but flip it around a bit, don't take it straight from the book)
11- overwhelming!what is more overwhelming that school/work/college-*shudder*- I've you haven't noticed, most of the concepts we do learn usually aren't through school (unless your like me and have to search for things to make school amusing and surprisingly enough find them)write about it, make it clever
****Now,Go and Create!Have a Blast!!! ****
*HONORABLE MENTIONS* include the poets: penumbrapoet, Gleto Orica, jezebeltoxyx, dark oblivion and everyones dead : you will receive points/ applauds soon
-lyrics from:Breaking The Habit by Linkin Park
If you haven't picked this up from the lyrics above,this contest is for people who are downright fed up and depressed.This is for people who want more out of their days but can never get ahold of them.This is for people who are flooding rivers among a society of stagnant waters>This is for fans of "Dead Poets Society" and Linkin Park. This is for the hopeful found hopeless, real winners at a loss, a laughter with tears and for anyone who write out of their hearts...
WELCOME To My Deep Deep Deep Lair in the most unexpected ,rare and deranged thoughts of my mind- now enter your place you have much like this.
WRITE A POEM!!!
URGENT NOTICE!!!!!!:seeing how things in this contest aren't going as expected, i am adding some more options and new prewrites plan: YOU MAY ENTER ONLY ONE, BUT ONE NONETHELESS PREWITE IN ADDITION TO AT LEAST ONE NON-PREWRITE PIECE!!!
thank you RULES:
1- you must not enter old, groggy prewrites
2- you must have been described above
3- i only accept dug deep poetry-no imposters!
4- comment on at least two of my poems(thanks!)
5- no slang ,sticky-caps or Internet talk
6- no adult themes or erotica ,nothing vulgar or sick
7- be creative, be you
8- make me contemplate your masterpiece(s)
9- put the # of choice you chose in authors comments
10- up to 4 entries allowed
THANK YOU
choices~:
1- a poem inspired by the movie "Dead Poets Society"(I'd like to get lots of these-hint hint
or Linkin Park or U2 or Depeche mode music. Please, nothing against them.(If you haven't seen that outstanding movie, i encourage you to do so ASAP.)2- write a poem about fighting with your faults,are you learning to accept and live on with them? do they strengthen or weaken you?
3- Paint a picture of your emotions
4- if you are depressed, write about it.what causes it?is there any hope what so ever? (descriptions)
5- write a poem about how you wish someone would cared-what happens?
6- something described in the opening intro.
7- O Captain ,My Captain!- who is your captain, friend or favorite poet,hero and how do the effect, encourage you?
8-break your box, come out of it and break it.don't be held back or discouraged. be yourself.
9- give me something to think about and ponder over and over , take some everyday thing and twist it around into your own little creation!be creative creative creative creative...i think you get the idea
10- fantasy symbolisms- I'm not very acquainted to fantasy poems, so if you are a fantasy fan ,you can enter and surprise me! paint a fantasy scene with your word that portrays/symbolizes an action in the everyday world.(short example : tears of a shunned dragon that symbolize your forgotten self in all your abounding agony and woe!)( you are allowed to use that example but flip it around a bit, don't take it straight from the book)
11- overwhelming!what is more overwhelming that school/work/college-*shudder*- I've you haven't noticed, most of the concepts we do learn usually aren't through school (unless your like me and have to search for things to make school amusing and surprisingly enough find them)write about it, make it clever
****Now,Go and Create!Have a Blast!!!
*****HONORABLE MENTIONS* include the poets: penumbrapoet, Gleto Orica, jezebeltoxyx, dark oblivion and everyones dead : you will receive points/ applauds soon
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on November 14, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 330
- Final notes: Everyone did an excellent job it was so hard to choose! Here are the winners though, sorry for the delays . Honorable mentions will be posted up over the week ( there are many!) Thanks and everyone keep up your marvoulus writing and NEVER GIVE UP!
GodBlessU all,
~sunrise777~
Entries [26]
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In the dark my life flashes before my eyes
everything known has come untiedby XsweetpeaX26 18 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 13 9:18 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
so as i cry these crimson tears
and blood seeps from my soulby XsweetpeaX26 52 lines, 4 comments, on Jul 19 3:58 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Lines of empty
Fill the pageby PenguinsRUs 6 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 16 8:28 AM 2004. In Weird• Commented on by judge. -
Deep and dark alone and cold
Striving to surviveby XsweetpeaX26 19 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 2 11:55 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
I look inside the mirror and tears come to my eyes,
I'm tired of feeling jaded, tired of all these lies.• Commented on by judge. -
I wish I knew how you felt but you don't say a word,
Inside I know you're angry over something so absurd.• Commented on by judge. -
The Leopard king
of the jungle• Commented on by judge. -
Am I the only person with these things in mind?
(probably not)by DefinitiveFreak 20 lines, 6 comments, on Oct 23 8:27 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
by malkinpuss 46 lines, 8 comments, on Oct 27 9:25 AM 2004. In Humor• Commented on by judge.
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I'm picturing and open flower with a shotgun placed beside it
Something so beautiful with a knife resting in its pocketby Bruised Violet 29 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 27 10:22 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
My idealistic confession
To get you to understandby GirlUnderGlass 28 lines, 2 comments, on Oct 28 12:00 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
The black
Depression• Commented on by judge. -
Mama said "child don't be like me"
Do the opposite and you'll turn out fine,• Commented on by judge. -
baced on a linkin park song somewhere i belongby darien20000 9 lines, 4 comments, on Nov 5 7:43 PM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
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What's Happened?
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I walk through the school grounds
Unnoticed by the world• Commented on by judge. -
its worse than my first oneby darien20000 7 lines, 3 comments, on Nov 6 7:47 PM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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Is there somewhere that I belong?
A place where everything doesn't go wrong?by cutelildrea 38 lines, 2 comments, on Nov 10 12:48 PM 2004. In Hope, Collaboration, Angst
Bronze trophy winner
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You changed the background!
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too tired to write something original
if it were prewrites, i would enter
dont let that discourage you though
hope you get tons of entries
will bookmark this one for later
take care,
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I almost forgot I have 2 trophies... guess I might enter if I can come up with something.
{big LP fan
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this isn't the poem, this is a new contest,that's why the background's different
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No, I meant you changed the background. It was brushed metal, and then you changed it. I noticed that when you first put this up.
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intresting...hmm,ok-think you'll enter anything?(o-thanks for the trophy and pts.
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I really hope ypu enjoy my poem. It's really long but its from the heart.
"Why i never walked away. Why i played myself this way. Now i see your testing me pushes me away." Linkin Park Pushing me away..I love LP. -
not fair not fair not fair i only have 1 trophy
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all of my entries were for number 3. ( painting a picture of emotions )
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thanks everyone again for the laod of entries can't wait to read them - -(i feel poular, i woder if that's good, hmm...)
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good idea, for a contest, i entered my poem!! not a pre-write either!!
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When is this going to be Judged? Just curious. It was closed yesterday....what happened?
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Wow! I won! Yippee!!!! Thank you so absolutely much
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I want to say I am thrilled I got gold!!
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