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okay everyone, I decided to have another contest. Im not sure how often I will be having them, but probably atleast once every two weeks, or whenever I feel like it. This has got to be my 7th or 8th contest
I've lost 4friends in the last year and a half. Each of their deaths effected me in a drastic way. I now deal with, the pain of them being gone, anxiety, depression,etc. With that said, here are the choices:
Choices:
1. Tell me about the love of your life dying, if they arent dead, pretend they are. Show me emotion, make me hurt for you, and cry with you.
2. I remember Jessie's funeral like it happen yestarday, step by step I could tell you everything. Take me back to your friends funeral, tell me how emotional it was, how it happen, what they looked like, how you were feeling, etc.
3. Your friend died a while ago, maybe a year or two, three at the most. How do you feel? Tell me how much you miss them, and how you wish they were here. Give me emotion please.
4. Your friend isnt dead yet, but is on a path with no hope. You think eventually you will lose that person. Write them a poem, and show them how much you care, and how much you need them.
Rules:
1. The person you are writing about has to be a teenager, or atleast under the age of 23years old, and older then the age of 12.
2. Do not swear a lot, you can have some words here and there, but dont make your poem crowded with them.
3. In the authors comment, state the # you picked, whether the story in the poem is true or not, and also 'Missing My Teen Angel' so I now you've read it all.
4. Please try to comment on one other entry and also one of my poems. Its not a have to do so, but it would be nice
5. If you dont follow every rule, your poem will not win I will be giving no reminders this time
6. No more then 2entries per person. Only one prewrite allowed, try to add a fresh poem with your prewrite too
Okay, now go write. If you have any questions, please IM me.
okay everyone, I decided to have another contest. Im not sure how often I will be having them, but probably atleast once every two weeks, or whenever I feel like it. This has got to be my 7th or 8th contest I've lost 4friends in the last year and a half. Each of their deaths effected me in a drastic way. I now deal with, the pain of them being gone, anxiety, depression,etc. With that said, here are the choices:
Choices:
1. Tell me about the love of your life dying, if they arent dead, pretend they are. Show me emotion, make me hurt for you, and cry with you.
2. I remember Jessie's funeral like it happen yestarday, step by step I could tell you everything. Take me back to your friends funeral, tell me how emotional it was, how it happen, what they looked like, how you were feeling, etc.
3. Your friend died a while ago, maybe a year or two, three at the most. How do you feel? Tell me how much you miss them, and how you wish they were here. Give me emotion please.
4. Your friend isnt dead yet, but is on a path with no hope. You think eventually you will lose that person. Write them a poem, and show them how much you care, and how much you need them.
Rules:
1. The person you are writing about has to be a teenager, or atleast under the age of 23years old, and older then the age of 12.
2. Do not swear a lot, you can have some words here and there, but dont make your poem crowded with them.
3. In the authors comment, state the # you picked, whether the story in the poem is true or not, and also 'Missing My Teen Angel' so I now you've read it all.
4. Please try to comment on one other entry and also one of my poems. Its not a have to do so, but it would be nice
5. If you dont follow every rule, your poem will not win I will be giving no reminders this time
6. No more then 2entries per person. Only one prewrite allowed, try to add a fresh poem with your prewrite too
Okay, now go write. If you have any questions, please IM me.
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 9, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: I knew I wouldn't get many entries for this contest, but its okay because I didnt leave it up for too long. I decided to end it early. Anyways, here are the places
Entries [8]
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No flowers upon the altar, no gushing eulogy
No rousing choral chorus, just a single rose from me.by nobodysees 45 lines, 14 comments, on Jan 5 9:38 PM 2004. In Personal, Other, Angst
Bronze trophy winner
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I wished that you were with me then
to hold me as I cried• Commented on by judge. -
I remember when you was sick,
I remember when things got hard,by Joshuacrisel 54 lines, 1 comment, on Oct 7 8:19 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
I had no more tears to shed
Your memory sits in my mind• Commented on by judge. -
I miss you so much, even though
You're sending me all this love.• Commented on by judge. -
Could this late night phone call be true
That my love has diedby Beyond Broken 49 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 8 6:28 PM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
I walk in my depression
To your santuary... you're grave• Commented on by judge.
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I so wanna enter! sigh But that wouldnt be fair. lol Love ya La
-Jenn- -
Hey Lala could we write about a friend not dying but just leaving and you may never see them again?My friend/ ex b/f is moving to Florida and my last day of seeing him was yesterday i'm not sure if i'll ever see or hear from him again so i've been really depressed and stuff about it cause yeah i really love him so i put my number on a note and on the BAM my friend and me made for him but i doubt he'll be able to call me let alone have the time he'll have new friends and stuff so yeah can we write about losing a friend but like not dying.Thanks hun if not i can pick one of the above.
Hugs.
Mandi -
I hope that maybe by reading the pain and suffering that others feel at the death of a young person you will find a little bit of healing yourself , and at the same time get a glimpse at how every survivor is affected...and that it will help you to educate yourself and your friends that even regardless of how bleak life seems at times...it is still worth living , for there are people who care , even if it does not seem like it. I wish you a lot of success with this contest,
Reenie
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Awwwww!!!! LALA!! Hunny thanks for awarding me with gold. You've just made my day. *Stands up and does the happy dance*
I love you!!! Take care!!
~Cherie -
Thanks so much for the silver, I didn't realise the contest has been judged until I got a congrats IM! THanks a million, I really appreciate it!
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