*Hello*
How's everybody feelin?? */hehe/*
Umm this is my 6th contest I believe And I am in a hatred mood...
options:
1.) HATING SOCIETY!
2.) HATING DAD, MOM, Siblings, etc...
3.) HAVING A FRIEND BACK STAB YOU and how you reacted.
4.) Being so mad at someone that you just want to kill them...
5.) terrorism
6.) Being dumped, or doing the dumping. Etc... tell me your feelings, whether you were hurt, angry, sad, heart broken, etc...
7.)Being abused..Raped....etc...
Rules:
1.) SWEARING IS FINE
2.) Not too too particular about spelling and grammar and stuff..Cuz I struggle with it allot myself
3.) Only up to 4 entries per person as is my rule!
4.)Don't out it under adult or abuse cuz I can't read it.
5.)let me feel your pain and anger the more emotion the more likely you are to win sorry that's the way I like to read poetry.
6.) Could you maybe comment on two of my poems.
7.) for every prewrite comment on at least one other persons work. and even if it wasn't a rule it's still nice.
So ya that's about it. Ummm have fun.... *show me your emotion!!!*
First place: 300 points and a nice shiny trophy..
second: A nice silver trophy to display
Third: a lovely bronze trophy to show off.
*Sorry I am a little short on points so there might be some honorable mentions, and maybe some applauds and maybe some points for second and third. I'll get back to you on that.*
Toodles, Danielle
*p.s I probably won't be commenting on any until the contest is over!*
How's everybody feelin?? */hehe/*
Umm this is my 6th contest I believe And I am in a hatred mood...
options:
1.) HATING SOCIETY!
2.) HATING DAD, MOM, Siblings, etc...
3.) HAVING A FRIEND BACK STAB YOU and how you reacted.
4.) Being so mad at someone that you just want to kill them...
5.) terrorism
6.) Being dumped, or doing the dumping. Etc... tell me your feelings, whether you were hurt, angry, sad, heart broken, etc...
7.)Being abused..Raped....etc...
Rules:
1.) SWEARING IS FINE
2.) Not too too particular about spelling and grammar and stuff..Cuz I struggle with it allot myself
3.) Only up to 4 entries per person as is my rule!
4.)Don't out it under adult or abuse cuz I can't read it.
5.)let me feel your pain and anger the more emotion the more likely you are to win
sorry that's the way I like to read poetry.6.) Could you maybe comment on two of my poems.
7.) for every prewrite comment on at least one other persons work. and even if it wasn't a rule it's still nice.
So ya that's about it. Ummm have fun.... *show me your emotion!!!*
First place: 300 points and a nice shiny trophy..
second: A nice silver trophy to display
Third: a lovely bronze trophy to show off.
*Sorry I am a little short on points so there might be some honorable mentions, and maybe some applauds and maybe some points for second and third. I'll get back to you on that.*
Toodles, Danielle
*p.s I probably won't be commenting on any until the contest is over!*
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on October 12, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: Hey everybody,
God I wish I could have gave so many people trophies as always but I digress for I can't! I loved the emotion put into these poems!
It's beautiful!
Hate is beautiful!
Thank you for yet another amazing contest.
Sorry if I didn't comment I read them all.
I just ran out of time.
There were alot of entries if anyone noticed!
it's insane!
but thank you none the least!
You are all amazing!
Love yahs
Toodles, DanielleEntries [45]
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So much hate that words can't tell
I've screamed every word from shit to hellby UnevenSmiles 12 lines, 21 comments, on Jun 6 9:37 PM 2003. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
a message to be carefull in life.• Commented on by judge.
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Bleed
Can you feel how I bleed• Commented on by judge. -
You mean the world to me
And guess what?by Aislinn-Marie 45 lines, 25 comments, on Jan 18 7:46 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
Once again I’ll avoid the cold, cruel stare
I race you up the stairsby Riversideblues 16 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 10 9:56 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Everyone will witness your beautiful death
there will be no tears when u take your final breathby Silent Cries 35 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 17 8:18 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
im sure this has been felt before• Commented on by judge.
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Shut me out with your eyes
I mean nothing now• Commented on by judge. -
girl, you think you got me good
but hon, if you only knew...• Commented on by judge. -
there's this guy at my school
its not his fault butby wishfulldreamer 22 lines, 5 comments, on May 19 8:46 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
by Naughtygrlred 20 lines, 9 comments, on May 20 10:46 PM 2004. In Weird• Commented on by judge.
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Eyes of those who have injured me embroider the seams of my brain with hate
Hollow sockets with golden slits peering at me through deceiving blue eyesby n0 regrets 44 lines, 15 comments, on Jun 8 1:55 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
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You "Wish" I were happy-
I Wish you were dead.• Commented on by judge. -
You were my voice of hate
Come sleep in my closet of decayby n0 regrets 19 lines, 6 comments, on Jul 15 8:48 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Bitterness is all I taste when I see you,
Your flaming red face is sour to me,• Commented on by judge. -
Every word that you say
makes my blood boil,• Commented on by judge. -
I’m going to sit here and cut my literary wrists for youby Victoria Pearse 77 lines, 11 comments, on Aug 3 8:28 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
by xDarkMindx 26 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 20 7:44 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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You are the monster under my bed.
You are the ghost that's in my shed.by passionatepoet 18 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 5 8:10 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Because of you, I can not breath at night.
Because of you, my dreams are unbearable.by passionatepoet 8 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 11 10:58 PM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
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everyone would know that with you
everything leads to heartbrake• Commented on by judge. -
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You make me sick.
Letting that nasty bitch swing on your dick.by SimplyKayla 20 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 27 2:05 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
Next time your being served.. look closer at the one serving you... Sometimes the smile is fake.• Commented on by judge.
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Here's to You
Here's to you and this dead endby A Dying Mind 29 lines, 4 comments, on Sep 30 5:43 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
i am a toy
a helplessby MonkeyApplesauce 49 lines, on Oct 3 7:45 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
A moment's uncontrollable lust
matched only by my growing revulsionby xxupsetxandxharmxx 47 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 4 8:31 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
just relax
soon it will be overby Me and Death 26 lines, 4 comments, on Oct 5 12:33 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Dad, I really think you should know this....
You were always there for me• Commented on by judge. -
and now im gone
now im safeby Me and Death 22 lines, 3 comments, on Oct 6 8:28 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
I hate you so
Id wish you would just goby ChaingangAngel 15 lines, 7 comments, on Oct 6 9:01 AM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
Why do you want us all to spout out hate?
Do you believe such feelings to be great?• Commented on by judge.
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I believe that Hate is such a strong word. Truth be told, I hate no one.
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HATE IS A STRONG WORD...I DO HOWEVER HATE MANY. IT'S A VERY SERIOUS DESISES. BUT I WAS SURE WE HAD ALL HAD IT AT SOME TIME OR ANOTHER.
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I also feel that it is a part of the big "cop out", to call a lack of emotional control a disease. Humankind calls so many things a disease when a little thought and self-control would make many of those things almost non-existant.
However, I am sorry that you hate. I would attribute that to your age as well as inexperience, though no insult is meant in that.
Be well! -
You can see how popular hate is by the amount of entries – I suppose that is a sad comment on society – I would hate to judge this contest and am wondering if they will all get read - Albert.
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Hate turned itself in
And ate the man's whole spirit
From the inside out
Just a little haiku that should alert you to take heed!
Hate is a killer and the hater is his/her very own prey!
MUCH LOVE,
Renee
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to join in on this little conversation, I actually doubt most of the people who have entered this contest TRULY hate the person they wrote about. I'd be lying if I said I hated the person in my poem, though I really wish I could.
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Hate is a word
That's all it is
I just dropped in to say
That if it helps to say you hate
Then have it your own way
Some say catharsis can give help
And that may well be true
So it may help to get it out
Not burn inside of you
But stick to writing down your hate
Don't act upon it pray
For what you give, you may get back
The same with love, they say?
Best Wishes. -
Good contest
I'm sickened and revolted by pseudo-wisdom people are offering here on hate. It doesn't show that you're a groovy, peaceful, right-on kinda guy, it just shows that you have NO sense of humour. Hate can be fun! Embrace it, go on, be a little bit zany! -
damn, i wrote the perfect one for this exactly 5 days ago, and hadnt gotten it posted onto my page till today. ugh. someone should make another hate contest. ive looked all over. cant seem to find one. its called Explicit Content, and i know this contest is over, but i hope you all dont mind if i post it anyway. >.<
EXPLICIT CONTENT
This is a bunch of fucking bullshit
I’m losing my god damn mind, that’s right- I’m PIST
The rage consumes and I am doomed
So fucking screw all of you
This occurrence drives me insane
You know damn right you’ll be in pain
When I shoot you down and slice you up
You name not found in recite because of your corrupt
This bullshit that you give me
You won’t pull yourself out, you’ll pay the fee
With glee, I’ll use my teeth
To gnaw at your flesh
Relief comes and lets go of the grasp
Of these scribbled phrases that I wrote fast
So- quit your shit
And I shall not be so explicit…
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yeah, heh. i was pist off at my webmastering teacher and school principal. i wonder if i would have won somethin for it. ~shrugs~
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HELL YA IT WOULD HAVE WON!
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aw..that suckx. heh.
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