Show me some lovin! Show me tears!
Make me smile, make me laugh, make me cry!
Options
1. Show me love. Make your poem seem like i wrote it. Make me love this person. Make me smile!
2. Anything funny enough to make me bust up laughing!
3. Make me cry for any reason. but i must have tears!
4. Family poems. Anything that has to do with families.
5. Anything else you want to write about. I dont care but i better like it!
6. Automatic applause if you put monkeys and elephants in it! but its got to go with the poem!
7. 3 top winners automatically are put on my favorites!
rules
1. not required but may help if there is a tie, read one of my poems and if you would like to push it even more write a comment on another entry's poem!
2. no sTiCkY cApS
3. erotica allowed but it better make me horny
4. how ever many poems you want
5. prewrites allowed! but i would also like some newly written ones also
Oh by the way, Tenchi 7786 is going to help me judge because there was so many entered. 94 total so far!!
oh and sorry but The Thornless Rose and Heart Auction are also honorable mentions! sorry!
Make me smile, make me laugh, make me cry!
Options
1. Show me love. Make your poem seem like i wrote it. Make me love this person. Make me smile!
2. Anything funny enough to make me bust up laughing!
3. Make me cry for any reason. but i must have tears!
4. Family poems. Anything that has to do with families.
5. Anything else you want to write about. I dont care but i better like it!
6. Automatic applause if you put monkeys and elephants in it! but its got to go with the poem!
7. 3 top winners automatically are put on my favorites!
rules
1. not required but may help if there is a tie, read one of my poems and if you would like to push it even more write a comment on another entry's poem!
2. no sTiCkY cApS
3. erotica allowed but it better make me horny
4. how ever many poems you want
5. prewrites allowed! but i would also like some newly written ones also
Oh by the way, Tenchi 7786 is going to help me judge because there was so many entered. 94 total so far!!
oh and sorry but The Thornless Rose and Heart Auction are also honorable mentions! sorry!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 23, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: ok here are the winners
Gold) The Truth by alaura mae
Silver) Just Breathe by Punky Poet Gee
Bronze) Deadly Eyes by Dkmagby88
Honorable Mentions
False Reflections by SoulWords
Angel Fell From Heaven by Lander78910
The Night I Died by twistedxfantasy
I'm Sorry by bettyboop24
Nothing by swcaitlin18
Lake of Fire by VictorianMaster
Eyes Deceive by The0ry
everyone had great poems. im sorry i couldnt comment on all but there was so many entries and not enough time. if anyone would like to me to go back and comment on it just tell me and i will. these honorable mentions are in no order. great job everyone!
Entries [40]
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The water stirs,
Lost in thought,• Commented on by judge. -
Bathing a munkey is very difficult,
They are very stubborn, everyone knows,by NeverBeTheSame 17 lines, 6 comments, on Sep 25 1:32 AM 2003. In Humor• Commented on by judge. -
I watch as a butterfly landsand kisses the heart of a peach colored rose.The beauty of this bringsmemories when I waslast in the palace gardby RainbowQueen 70 lines, 19 comments, on Jan 9 3:29 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Disgusted by the fact that you left something beautiful.
A home that was warm and loving,by Allison1212 65 lines, 9 comments, on Jan 26 7:26 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
She turns her back to me as she tells me she is nothing
How can she believe all these lies that she puts in her head• Commented on by judge. -
Everyone complains how everything is so bad
That they don’t have anything to be happy about in their life• Commented on by judge. -
They lit up the roses that night
and let the wind blow the scent• Commented on by judge. -
this mirror
broken to bitsby XxdeadlykissxX 12 lines, 5 comments, on May 30 6:04 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Only in darkness does torment begin,
Only in darkness does torment end.• Commented on by judge. -
cry
cry you little bastard.• Commented on by judge. -
you are a piece of shit
your the scum between my toesby foreverrunning 19 lines, 33 comments, on Aug 10 1:10 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Starring out the window.
Watching• Commented on by judge. -
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You act like you know me
What I'm going to say and doby foreverrunning 31 lines, 16 comments, on Aug 20 6:46 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
The most important job in the circus, I clean up poop,
I take it seriously, I have my own custom made scoop.• Commented on by judge. -
inspired by TBS SLIPKNOT and AFI lyrics....im not sure where it came from...• Commented on by judge.
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by singoncetome 56 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 29 8:22 AM 2004. In Lyrics• Commented on by judge.
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Ahhh...pregnancy weight gain and the post-partum fight to get rid of it (or to at least fit in jeans again)!• Commented on by judge.
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Wanting to sob, but the tears refuse to grace her cheeks.
Every day it's an up hill battle.• Commented on by judge. -
I sit here alone,
Shaking in the absenceby elisabeth0129 17 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 16 10:47 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
I like you...
The words that started it all,• Commented on by judge. -
This melody in my mind
About a person so perfect• Commented on by judge. -
by MysticalMelindy 44 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 20 6:56 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge.
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It breaks my heart,
To see her in so much pain.• Commented on by judge. -
Life of the Liquid
Meeting the crystal parallaxby Real Freedom 37 lines, on Sep 20 10:36 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Silence...blue
I asked• Commented on by judge. -
i lay lifeless, so numb, so cold,
i whispered slowly to tell my story.• Commented on by judge. -
I was looking at candles
in a catalog on line today,• Commented on by judge. -
You say I'm judgemental,
I guess you'll never change your mind,by Unoriginal 24 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 22 11:34 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
An elephant's wail echos
He is playing again• Commented on by judge.
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YES!!!! A contest without so many boundaries!!
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FINALLY AN EASY CONTEST!
i am LOVING the idea for this contest! good luck to everyone!!!! laterz!
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okay everyone because im getting so many entries so quickly it may take me a while to comment on everyones poem but it will be done. i may end it sooner than expected but i will get to everyones poem and if i dont comment on it before it closes (unless i close it early than it may take a couple days) then just im me and tell me and i will get to it as soon as i can!
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Hey, sorry about adding so many i thought i should just get opinions you don't have to judge them all ... well i don't know what i'm saying but sorry for putting so many out, i just want to see what you think of them.. thanks and good luck with your contest, i'm gonna tell other about it... and boy will youhave fun judging... !~JennI~!
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okay so everyone me and my boyfriend just went through a really horrible break up and i found out really really bad things about his past that he lied about so if anyone's got poems about love gone bad or about a lover that lied about something then that would be good!
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i am closing this early because of all the entries. it will be closed tomorrow!!
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Hope you have fun with your contest chocolatemono2! It looks like you have quite a few entries to dig through, but I'm sure you will enjoy it! The most entries I've ever had in one of my contests is 109!
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lol I would enter... but I can't think of any of my poems off the top of my head... good luck judging!
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Hello...I've entered a few poems into your contest...I see some very dear Friends are also entered...Good Luck everyone!!! 
Thanks for great contest ideas!!! Wanda
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Lmao, Excercising - choice: 2.
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A man i've met - Choice: 5 - deep love, look into the true meaning of the words.
A lot of entries, im anxious to look at them, xoxo - Ang -
look everyone ive got so many entries that for now im just going to read them and the rest i am not going to comment on right now. after the contest i will tell you what i thought about it if you still want to know
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ok so this contest is over. the reason The Truth won because it was a wonderfull poem with great repitition and it just fit my life so perfectly with what happened with my ex and i felt it just deserved it!
everyones poems were great I would have had more honorable mentions but i just didnt have enough time! -
HOLY CRAP! I GOT AN HONORABLE MENTION OUTTA ALL THOSE PEOPLE!!!!!!!! *dies* THANKS!
~V.¤§
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I WON!!! 
AHH!!! I LOVE YOU THANKS SO MUCH!!!
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