All I want is opinions, I want you to tell me if you are for or against the war, and I want you to tell me why, if you are for it, I want to be able to really feel the passion for what you believe, if you are against, I want to feel the anger and the deception and the sadness that you feel, prewrites are allowed but I would prefer something new, spur of the moment, real emotions are shown better that way, that's all, I just want raw emotion, thank you all and good luck!
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 17, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 400
- Final notes: I want to say that there was soo much talent here. What I was looking for was pure emotion, and that is what I based the judging on, I wanted to know what people felt, in the purest way possible, nothing held back, good job to all of you!
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This is a time for hate.
A time to rejoice in death of men.• Commented on by judge. -
by Hersheybars 32 lines, 9 comments, on Jul 11 7:09 PM 2004. In Society• Commented on by judge.
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Sorrow is found in her eyes
An anger, which burns inside• Commented on by judge. -
Wave the flag
Show your pride• Commented on by judge. -
The numbers make
my hopes go number• Commented on by judge. -
Red as blood is the setting sun,
As it sets over damnation.• Commented on by judge. -
(Ah, I think it must be autumn,
9/11 to be precise,• Commented on by judge. -
All the Jews escaped.
Eight of the hijackers are still alive.• Commented on by judge. -
my confusion reigns like tears from a mother• Commented on by judge.
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For Contest 'Bout War...• Commented on by judge.
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by ashes-to-dust 27 lines, on Sep 11 11:07 PM 2004. In Society• Commented on by judge.
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Through the eyes of a child, a world is shaped
With the flight of imagination• Commented on by judge. -
As I look around me,
I see much deceit,• Commented on by judge. -
Am I the only one
who will support our troops at war?• Commented on by judge. -
tytrtrtrtrtrtrtrtrtrtrtrtrtrtrtrxdugby hells punk 27 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 13 7:51 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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I am a U.S. soldier fighting every day,
ready to protect and fight to uphold the American way.by MoonChild55 31 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 14 12:39 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Misguided angels struck them on their beauteous heights,
Then rotting frames collapsed in flames from carious heights.• Commented on by judge. -
In it was war
Rotting all to the coreby Wolf of Night 11 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 15 1:57 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Dead men banging against a dead end
Fabric is to fragile to be sown together• Commented on by judge. -
Oh, Mothers can't
you feel that draft• Commented on by judge.
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I entered my poem, then realized it was kinda old news, and the bill probably wouldn't go anywhere, (thank god!) so you can just read it i guess, but it doesn't really mean anything anymore, cause all I hear is that no body's ever gonna vote for it. which is good. I wrote this when the bill was kinda new and less people knew about it. -
Okay I've got two poems entered. One of which is just basic war the other is my thoughts on this war. So yeah that doesn't mean much but anyway Good luck everyone.
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The poem I wrote that speaks of my opinion on war is already in a contest, but as soon as it comes out, I will enter it here.
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PS my poem is a prewrite, but trust me, the feelings in it are 'frsh'- how could they not be?
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Sweet, I gotz the bronze!!
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