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Another silly love song..but what

Sooo..my life feels like a silly love song. Not only one of hope, but one with anguish thrown in - one of great difficulty. :/ Love comes not without its price. So, basically in this contest, I have a few different options. You can either write about:

1-Giddy love! You know, when you first fall in love and it's pure bliss
2-Forever love. You married couples out there - this is for you. Can be either bliss, reality, or how much it sucks. You pick
3-Scorn. I wanna know how a lover scorned you. BUT - for this option, you must also write of the good times before the bad. Examples:  allpoetry.com/Poem/583132 or allpoetry.com/Poem/564699
4-Love with a soldier. Any branch (though I'm particularly fond of Navy)
5-Puppy dog love. The kind you feel as a child. Yah know, when you pass the note that says, "Will you be my gf? Circle one..yes or no". (Yeah, I'm a huge country fan).
6-I wanna know EXACTLY how it felt for you to fall in love. You can include falling out of love at the end if you prefer.
7-Deciding between lovers
8-Online love - the happiness, troubles, and meeting, etc.

So basically, even if you write of heartbreak, I want the happiness too.

The RULES: dun dun duuuun

1-Erotica is fine! Doesn't really fit, but, eh, I might like it
2-NO PREWRITES!
3-You absolutely must put the number your choosing in your author comments box
4-No cussing. For gosh sake, it doesn't fit the contest
5-No StIcKy CaPs - it's annoying as hell
edit6-Comment on one of my poems This isn't mandatory, buuut, very highly suggested
7-This is THE most important rule. I AM THE JUDGE! I chose WHICHEVER poem I like the best. Hell, I don't care if it breaks every rule, and it about the grass - if I like it, and want it to win, it will be so. No whining - I hold the power. Aight? Good. Lets get at it then!!

Oh - points will be as determined by how many I have at the end of the contest. First defiantly gets 500, I'm guessing 2nd will get around 200-250, and third 75-150. Thanks!
EDIT I'll also promote the winners poem for a week!

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on September 21, 2004
  • Rewards: Gold: 500
  • Final notes:
    This was an incredibly hard contest to judge, seriously. I didn't have enough trophies to hand out, and on top of that it was hard to pick places :/ It was definatly my hardest contest to judge. I WILL award points to EVERYONE, and to the 2nd and 3rd places later tonight, I've just got limited time online right now and have to run! But tonight each of you will get your points

Entries [16]

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  • by surfermike 12 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 7 1:56 AM 2004. In Personal, Nature, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • If only this wasn't a dream
    If only this wasn't a dream
    by Gleto Orica 34 lines, 7 comments, on Sep 8 2:10 PM 2004. In Lyrics, Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Take yourself back
    backwards in time
    by wohadreambig 35 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 11 2:18 PM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The day I saw you I knew that it was true love
    I heard the words forever whispered in the winds,
    by poetry within 49 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 12 11:21 AM 2004. In Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Everything I pass by, everything I find
    Makes you cross my mind.
    by FlirtyLiLBlondi 17 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 14 8:08 PM 2004. In Love, Hope
    • Commented on by judge.
  • He wants to teach me a lesson about myself
    (make me stronger) so
    by LoveyourTummy 31 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 15 12:17 AM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • My own heartbeat and your soft, measured breaths fill my ears,
    and I swear that I can count each beat, each breath, hour,
    by Serenem 76 lines, 9 comments, on Sep 15 4:30 AM 2004. In Personal, Love
    Bronze trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Golden Fairy 27 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 15 7:52 AM 2004. In Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • They say when it's perfect
    It'll sweep you off your feet
    by silywilyblondie 30 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 16 7:25 PM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • They say when it's perfect
    It'll sweep you off your feet
    by silywilyblondie 30 lines, 1 comment, on Sep 16 7:28 PM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • That day I opened my eyes, looked into his and got hypnotized
    unfocused, insecure, confused and...the butterflies, that fluttered with no one word uttered
    by Jessica M Alexander 24 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 16 11:19 PM 2004. In Personal, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • for the judges use it is 2 thanks for telling me what u meant
    by RedneckBaby 15 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 17 2:51 PM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • I want you to show that you really do care
    'Cause I can't imagine life without you there
    by Myuu 73 lines, 3 comments, on Sep 17 5:12 PM 2004. In Love
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Zack you finally said those three words to me and admitted to saying them, now if i could only know if you mean what you said and what you say! I think that you
    by myheartsdesire-4you 24 lines, 2 comments, on Sep 17 6:35 PM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Do nothing but stand and watch you drift away with my
    Flawed and teary eyes
    by SunShineHigh 70 lines, 5 comments, on Sep 17 9:20 PM 2004. In Sad, Love
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.

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  • melphleg gold member
    September 10, 2004
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    I don't think you meant to have 2 of these. This one has entries. The other doesn't yet.


  • wohadreambig
    September 11, 2004
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    hey is it ok if we combine two topics? i think i can come up with a good way to combine option 1 & option 5 just making sure it was ok to combine
    thx bunches
    Janine


  • Runawaytrain
    September 12, 2004
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    Wow, what a fun sounding contest. my experience with love runs along the lines of Jeff Buckey's song: Love is not a victory march, it's a cold and it's a broken hallelujah.


  • cherche -d -ame
    September 12, 2004
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    I hope you get lots of entries , as this sounds like a LOVE-ly contest . You most certainly have given enough choices to pick from , unfortunately i think my muse has deserted me abit at this time , and speaking of time ...I do not have alot of that as of late either Enjoy all the entries though
    Reenie


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 15, 2004
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    You are so funny mendee. I love the way you included rule #7. Good luck judges your entries.

  • the chase
    September 16, 2004
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    since prewrites aren't aloud I thought I'd post one here for you guys to read in your spare time. It's a love song, heehee, with a ghetto humor emo twist. Maybe. I dunno. Check it out --> allpoetry.com/Poem/805563 <--


  • mendee86
    September 19, 2004
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    Yeah, just so you guys know I AM getting to judging this! First I have to make sure I read EVERY entry (made a whoopsy last contest and forgot one - NOT INTENTIONALLY!). So I need to get through them, re-read them, then decide. I'm about to start college, and I've got 2 jobs, but I'm trying guys! Promise it'll be done before next weekend! Not like you have much of a choice but waiting, but I thought I'd be the kind judge and let you in! Thanks for all the great entries!


  • Serenem
    September 21, 2004
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    mendee86, thank you for considering my poem, 'Our Lives' worthy of the Bronze... I am so very honored to have been able to participate in this great contest with all these fine poets. Each one was an interesting and/or lovely read. Thank you so much for hosting it.

    Good wishes in finding your own love to be a wonderful and lasting one...

    My regards,


    Serenem~Melinda
    Edited on Sep 21, 5:26 p.m. because 'typo'.

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