This is a contest made possoble by my friend "lilchoc".
*-->This contest is for stories and poems too how much you hate it
This contest is a tribute to my friend benji cuz he asked me to do something special for him so ya this is for him. and ya lilchoc too cuz i love her she's my friend. she just donated 50 points for our winners tonight so thank her for that to
1.) anything about society
--> steriotypes
--> politics, politions
--> being stuffed in a little box under rules because you are a teen
2.)cutting, friends who have, people you know who have died, or if you do? personnal opinions or experiences
3.)family trouble (for me cuz i going through that kinda stuff)
4.)not being able to tell someone that you love them
5.)worstday of your life
6.) near death experiences
7.)about religions
Okay so now that those are thorough i guess i got some let's say "guidelines" for my contest. I know no one likes tons of rules so there aren't that many.
1.) cursing, swearing is all good
2.) i am not an adult so don't put it under adult or it won't be judged please
3.)only 4 entries a person and for every prewrite you enter you have to comment on 1 other person's poem and i will be checking. And besides you should do that anyway it's really nice
4.)Go thank lilchoc for her last 10 points to make this contest happen!
5.)i don't care about msn language (cuz, mayb, lol...ect) Cuz i use it all the time.
6.) i don't really care if you can't spell worth a hoot so ya just write. it's not how the word looks it's all about the meaning eh? I hate it when people crack down on us less blessed with spelling abilities persons eh?
7.) Final rule:
HAVE FUN AND DON"T OVER THINK...WRITE FROM YOUR HEART!!!
Okay ya well i guess if you got this far, i hope you enter, i will be letting prewrites in cuz i know that people's best work can be prewrites and why would i wanna mess with that. So feel free. And i think in my first contest if you wanna check the number of entries that were prewrites was HUGE!!! everyone does it. so please feel free.
WEll i look forward to your entries...
LOL
Toodles, Danielle *muah*
HAVE FUN!!!
PRIZES:
First place: 300 woppers (ALL MY HARD EARNED POINTS) and a trophy
Second: Trophy and 40
Third: 10 and a Trophy
*-->This contest is for stories and poems too how much you hate it
This contest is a tribute to my friend benji cuz he asked me to do something special for him so ya this is for him. and ya lilchoc too cuz i love her she's my friend. she just donated 50 points for our winners tonight so thank her for that to
1.) anything about society
--> steriotypes
--> politics, politions
--> being stuffed in a little box under rules because you are a teen
2.)cutting, friends who have, people you know who have died, or if you do? personnal opinions or experiences
3.)family trouble (for me cuz i going through that kinda stuff)
4.)not being able to tell someone that you love them
5.)worstday of your life
6.) near death experiences
7.)about religions
Okay so now that those are thorough i guess i got some let's say "guidelines" for my contest. I know no one likes tons of rules so there aren't that many.
1.) cursing, swearing is all good
2.) i am not an adult so don't put it under adult or it won't be judged please
3.)only 4 entries a person and for every prewrite you enter you have to comment on 1 other person's poem and i will be checking. And besides you should do that anyway it's really nice
4.)Go thank lilchoc for her last 10 points to make this contest happen!
5.)i don't care about msn language (cuz, mayb, lol...ect) Cuz i use it all the time.
6.) i don't really care if you can't spell worth a hoot so ya just write. it's not how the word looks it's all about the meaning eh? I hate it when people crack down on us less blessed with spelling abilities persons eh?
7.) Final rule:
HAVE FUN AND DON"T OVER THINK...WRITE FROM YOUR HEART!!!
Okay ya well i guess if you got this far, i hope you enter, i will be letting prewrites in cuz i know that people's best work can be prewrites and why would i wanna mess with that. So feel free. And i think in my first contest if you wanna check the number of entries that were prewrites was HUGE!!! everyone does it. so please feel free.
WEll i look forward to your entries...
LOL
Toodles, Danielle *muah*
HAVE FUN!!!
PRIZES:
First place: 300 woppers (ALL MY HARD EARNED POINTS) and a trophy
Second: Trophy and 40
Third: 10 and a Trophy
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on September 5, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: HEYhey hey peoples, Man i really wish i could give out 207 trophys cuz seriously i counted that's how many entries there were in my contest. It was sooo hard to judge all these.
NO hard feelings to those who didn't win, i really wanted sooo many to win.
But i could only pick 3 winners so congradulations to
Numbhart: Cutter's Pride. For 300 points
Sad chicka: Darkness for second place and 40 points
Imfallingfast: I'm falling fast for third and 10 points
Congradulations to the winners and hope to see and hear from ya'll soon.
~*~Much-love-no-Hate~*~
Toodles, DanielleEntries [99]
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A bigger brother:
i look out for youby mysticcannibal 55 lines, 15 comments, on Nov 21 8:56 PM 2002. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
You are hushed
like a stone• Commented on by judge. -
i called it love it was just pain
death to love its all in vainby -death to love- 20 lines, 18 comments, on Jul 9 12:14 AM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Don’t go… those words never actually escaped my lips
Regrettablyby MollysWall 62 lines, 32 comments, on Aug 26 3:43 PM 2003. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
You all look at me like I'm a freak,
With my blue mascara,• Commented on by judge. -
Welcome,
To our very own,• Commented on by judge. -
Blood slowly dips to the dusty floor
Tears roll down my cold cheeks• Commented on by judge. -
When we're together,
we have so much fun...• Commented on by judge. -
The rain falls down
Like tears in my soulby ImFallingFast 6 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 2 4:33 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Why couldn't she just be true?• Commented on by judge.
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Drops of crimson
dot the floorby Jadeaurora 17 lines, 3 comments, on Jan 15 9:49 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
I can no longer catch my breath
Slipping slowly into deathby -unsavedangel- 28 lines, 2 comments, on Feb 1 4:55 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
I must admit, I never thought I'd see those words comming from you.
I know that you said you cared for me and someday you would love me.by blackhearted 26 lines, on Feb 5 9:16 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
Mommy why?
I saw you standing there.by blackhearted 22 lines, 9 comments, on Feb 5 9:38 PM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
you always look at what's on the outside,
when what really matters is on the inside• Commented on by judge. -
Holding the knife to my arm
dragging it down in my fleshby Jadeaurora 37 lines, 1 comment, on Feb 10 2:24 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
stand out from the crowd
we will be our own generation we just need to learn howby lalalamelodie 45 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 22 1:50 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
by RoseInTheRain 26 lines, 3 comments, on Mar 4 1:52 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge.
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so much screaming
hearts are fleeting• Commented on by judge. -
The power exhausts me
it screams in my headby Feline2001 18 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 11 6:29 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
Oh, Mother, if you only knew,
The trouble your daughter is getting into,by Rabbinator 21 lines, 10 comments, on Mar 13 10:00 PM 2004. In Spiritual• Commented on by judge. -
We've live our lives,
The best we can,• Commented on by judge. -
Slow Death
Slow Deathby Dragonhippie 23 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 23 10:01 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
You'll never know
How much my heart races for youby too many cutz 14 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 29 8:36 AM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
got my foot in the door,
What are you waiting for?by Tonights Angel 35 lines, on Apr 7 9:25 AM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
Needles and hand grenades
The only road to fame.• Commented on by judge. -
Thank you dear lord For cancers and disease
For watching loved ones die And float away like the breeze• Commented on by judge. -
What would I give for one night in your arms?
What would I do to have you forever?• Commented on by judge. -
this is an intresting one wrote this morning at like 7• Commented on by judge.
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crimson seas
of a supposed trend• Commented on by judge. -
When a red ribbon line
Caught the eye• Commented on by judge. -
Ahhh why do you people have to treat people like this?• Commented on by judge.
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no more tears
will run from these eyes• Commented on by judge. -
I got sick of all these Stereotypes and Hipocrites.by Dancing-Incessantly 28 lines, 4 comments, on May 31 3:28 AM 2004. In Weird• Commented on by judge.
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The blood is pouring down
drip after deadly drip• Commented on by judge. -
Sluts to the execution
Of sterile gain• Commented on by judge. -
don't call me a heartbreaker
i've only received the pain• Commented on by judge. -
This is what people really do to me. I get made fun of the why I dress and wear my makeup. It sucks. Realicide is a violent band in Cincinnati.by europhoicx 37 lines, 10 comments, on Jun 25 9:08 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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Sometimes i feel
Something inside,• Commented on by judge. -
I said yes and you said no, and carelessly we let go
Just this once, just this time• Commented on by judge. -
I can attempt to change the substance of the inward materials deep within your mind
And you can believe that I have, fiercely and frantically• Commented on by judge. -
Not based on anything. Just like a story really.by Dancing-Incessantly 28 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 28 5:29 AM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge.
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by WontShedAtear 18 lines, 1 comment, on Jun 29 11:47 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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I need some one
some one to make me happyby Schweetie NickyBond 28 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 9 9:43 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Fearlessly, I've drifted past desiring you and bleakly, I cling on needing you.• Commented on by judge.
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This is where all
dead souls float outby imnotyourstar 11 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 19 2:20 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
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My body is numb
This blade you put in my hand• Commented on by judge. -
I have this theory that with time
You can always get what you want• Commented on by judge. -
I'm happy with the English Pound
I won't invite the Euro roundby Feline2001 21 lines, 8 comments, on Aug 2 7:25 AM 2004. In Society• Commented on by judge. -
u think u know me
but its all mythby bord psycho 26 lines, 7 comments, on Aug 3 10:53 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
this is 1 of my poems, about my imaginary feelings...• Commented on by judge.
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This world is deeply flawed
I would start over if I was god• Commented on by judge. -
I am the Red Blooded Woman
Come of age in a godforsaken land.by CaramelJamaican 23 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 11 11:55 AM 2004. In Sad• Commented on by judge. -
A yawn disrupts my thought pattern and I remember the way you looked as you lay asleep beside me.• Commented on by judge.
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It is hard to grow
Healthy and strong• Commented on by judge. -
I'm tired of feeling so angry
I'm tired of all the pain• Commented on by judge. -
Suicidal Poem i wrote when i was really depressed - please read it & tell me what you think• Commented on by judge.
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I flew free of the box
That you enclosed me inby BlazingSwords 21 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 19 12:55 AM 2004. In Weird• Commented on by judge. -
Why do i see your face, is it i that love you,
But i don't understand, how i could love you too,by foresaken-fate 47 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 19 2:33 PM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Faced with all this I feel like I cant cope
A string attached around my finger• Commented on by judge. -
Getting ready for our date.
Alas, we are back together.by fadedblkwings 36 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 20 6:31 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Am I just another reflection in your mind? Fading like everything ells! Or am I new in your mind?• Commented on by judge.
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for what I wished to come true
was wanting to be something more to youby spice010722 27 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 20 4:49 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
When you say it
Don't expect me to say it backby ItsOnlyMe89 25 lines, on Aug 21 7:58 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
Inside I'm dying,
My heart is crying.• Commented on by judge. -
Why am I such a fuck-up,
Why am I never right;• Commented on by judge. -
Until now, when the walls of my heart are crumbling
and the scars are still wet from fresh tears.• Commented on by judge. -
torn pages and wasted ink stains
butterflies and steaks knifesby xXbrKnsoUlxX 14 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 23 2:06 PM 2004. In Weird• Commented on by judge. -
Pretty Words And Pretty Promises
Why are you always telling me such pretty words?by Rose Patrick 75 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 23 2:30 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
There he awaits
not noticing me or seeing meby soconfused02 33 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 23 8:40 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge.
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Im sorry I havent commented on a poem for every of my prewrites YET! Once three more poems get entered I WILL check em out! I entered this just for fun and coz its such a wicked contest so anyone out there who thinks im entering coz i think i might win coz mascararunning is my friend, thats not it coz winning doesnt matter to me, and i seriously mean it. Its just for fun! Goodluck to everyone!!
Love
Choc
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This is a very nice contest, thanks for bringing this contest up, as well for all these as well that posted their poems, very nice. Good luck to everyone I hope everyone wins.
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hey my poem is about some1 i cared for who i dont now its not like bf and gf love but its diff hope its alright and suitable for ya contest.. cheers
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some of my poems don't make sense i kow, but some are from confusing times and there was one i'd like you to read i didn;'t enter called i'm here, it's about my sister when she went through a depression stage, i know you're having family prob. as you say i don't know what kind bu ti may know what your going through, please don't mind the spelling it's late and i can't see..lol! well i hope you enjoy and have fun
!~Jenni~!
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I just want to wish everyone best of luck, great contest, and some amazing stuff here. There was one in particular think it was by Sad Chicka. good luck judging
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lol thanks fer the encouragement=D It's gonna be a tricky contest to judge there are over like 125 entries=P hehe Well thanks fer comment, And good luck to everyone as well=D
love ya
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Hello there, I've put a prewrite in it...
It's just a poem that I wrote for my father, but I haven't got the guts to give it to him...
I just wanted to let him know what I feel about his reactions on gay-people...He should know I am one of them...
He's a very difficult person and I'm sure, when he knows, either he never wants to see me again, or he does something to me... and those options are both something I really don't want... so... yeah...what can I do then...so I wrote this...
This poem concerns family-trouble
I really hope you like it, have fun judging this contest.
The second one I put in (again a prewrite) is a poem I wrote for all the people that let me fall in the beginning of my coming-out... I hope they've got the message, if they had the chance to read it...
Leander
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OMG HOW ARE YOU GOING TO JUDGE THIS!? JESUS CHRIST!!
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he he he he he too many broken hearts, I'll read some of your work so you won't get so depress.
Hint to get through it quicker, read their first two lines and last to lines, the ones that get your attention put a side, then work from there. -
lol whoa!!! Looks like you've go an overhaul! Gee I was gonna enter too
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Thank you so much for the trophy! I know it's only third place but it is still very special to me. I don't get a chance to get on here often and that made my day to learn I won in a contest. Thanks to everyone who commented on my poetry as well. I tip my hat to the other winners. Thank you! Thank you!! Thank you!!!
Lotsa Love,
Steve
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