Show Me What You've Got

Contest is Over

• Contest was judged on September 16, 2004
• Rewards: Gold: 500
• Final notes:

Entries [61]

• I Fear For Your Soul.(Monorhyme)

  Approaching the sunset of your corruptive animation,
  Do you fear the almighty do you contemplate damnation?

  by leannewales 23 lines, 18 comments, on Dec 9 3:43 AM 2003. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• I Can't Believe I've Finally Met You

  I can't believe we've finally met
  It's like we're meant to be together

  by Crackertl82 95 lines, 18 comments, on Jan 20 3:54 AM 2004. In Lyrics, Other, Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• ~The Game Of Life~

  There comes a time when enough is enough,
  And the game of life is just too tough....

  by Magnum 27 lines, 13 comments, on Jan 28 10:44 PM 2004. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• Twinkling Eyes, Shining Tears

  um, I think this really has to be my absolute favorite poem that I have written... it has too much meaning for me

  by Trilliana 26 lines, 7 comments, on Feb 3 11:48 PM 2004. In Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Pride of the Colors

  The red of blood spilt
  it waves in front of me

  by Swan-Dat-Tang 37 lines, 11 comments, on Feb 19 12:02 PM 2004. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Soul Sister

  I hate to see my sister cry;
  I love the shine in her eyes.

  by PuppyDog13 14 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 25 5:58 PM 2004. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• *~Chained~*

  by Magnum 26 lines, 4 comments, on Mar 18 6:49 PM 2004. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• Jealous

  At this point my crush on friend Jeff was starting over again for the 20th time or so and at this stage in crushing he was dating someone and i was jealous

  by wohadreambig 21 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 2 2:38 PM 2004. In Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Way Too Late

  I thought you loved me
  I thought you cared

  by ATsGirl 03 27 lines, 9 comments, on Apr 14 6:29 PM 2004. In Personal, Love, Hope

  • Commented on by judge.
• Your Words

  MY EYES WERE BURNING,
  A HORRIBLE SENSATION BROUGHT ON BY URE WORDS.

  by Come L-oro 14 lines, 12 comments, on May 14 7:36 AM 2004. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Prey

  Addictions creepin' up, running through your mind... Everyone's got somethin' that stalks them...

  by Anode 23 lines, 5 comments, on May 27 11:19 PM 2004. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Red Spotlight Sunrise

  Red spotlight sunrise
  Why cant we compromise

  by Lacer 20 lines, 3 comments, on Jun 8 4:25 PM 2004. In Hope

  • Commented on by judge.
• Crazed Anger

  I cut my wrists to escape it
  But you've caused so much hate, I cant erase it

  by PuppyDog13 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 18 3:01 PM 2004. In Personal, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• That Fukking Word

  GOODBYE,
  I HATE THAT FUKKING WORD

  by Come L-oro 21 lines, 5 comments, on Jun 22 8:04 AM 2004. In Personal, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Funeral

  sitting in the dark
  afraid to stand

  by X-o 17 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 5 7:43 PM 2004. In Sad, Other, Dark
  Gold trophy winner

  • Commented on by judge.
• Enough

  Why don’t I feel better…?
  Do you feel better…?

  by Lady Patricia 108 lines, 11 comments, on Jul 8 12:35 AM 2004. In Personal, Other, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Garden of Eden

  Memories of you have stained me forever
  To let you go would kill me

  by Jasmin Joy 27 lines, 1 comment, on Jul 15 8:42 AM 2004. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• Dampest RED!!!

  going crazy
  these thoughts in my head

  by UnderTheFloorboards 22 lines, 7 comments, on Jul 23 1:22 PM 2004. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Speechless

  There are no words to describe this feeling
  A feeling that only you could possibly make

  by ATsGirl 03 45 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 25 10:29 PM 2004. In Personal, Love, Hope

  • Commented on by judge.
• Ana

  You can't stay the way you are
  You've taken obsession too far

  by Faded thoughts 17 lines, 8 comments, on Jul 26 10:02 PM 2004. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• No

  I whispered no
  But you pushed me to the floor

  by Acadia 7 lines, 15 comments, on Jul 30 11:10 PM 2004. In Sad, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Shooting Stars

  I think I’ve waited my whole life,
  To find some who would treat me right,

  by acidangel 28 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 4 7:49 PM 2004. In Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• Mendacious Promises

  You promised me loving whispers
  Instead you curse and yell

  by Stefanie Underwood 22 lines, on Aug 8 10:09 AM 2004. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• pretend

  you know what describe pretty for me
  tell me why they get tens while i get a three

  by mascararunning 43 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 8 3:03 PM 2004. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Nestled together in this small space

  Nestled together in this small space
  where we made our life

  by UnderTheFloorboards 24 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 13 5:46 PM 2004. In Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• Faithful

  Snow-made candy canes
  melt on desert fields and sand dunes

  by beauty-of-neptune 48 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 14 9:23 AM 2004. In Fantasy, Personal, Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• On the wings of a prayer

  Just close your eyes and open your heart,
  And feel your worries and cares depart.

  by Stefanie Underwood 33 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 15 11:58 AM 2004. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• End

  Spinning away from life itself,
  My mind slips from your control.

  by t0bias 28 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 15 8:11 PM 2004. In Sad, Personal, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Suicidal Symphonies

  She fingers the fabric of fallen innocence
  A t-shirt from a race she won

  by falling4everxo 52 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 16 10:38 AM 2004. In Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Father, Please Forgive Me

  Father, forgive me, for I have sinned

  by Jessa 52 lines, 15 comments, on Aug 17 7:09 AM 2004. In Sad, Personal, Spiritual

  • Commented on by judge.
• Hey Mom

  Hey Mom,
  You think you know me,

  by acidangel 33 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 18 2:56 PM 2004. In Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• Her

  Butterfly wings
  On a child’s heart,

  by lonicstunthor 22 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 19 2:01 AM 2004. In Sad, Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• Spinning

  by CraZedAsh07 20 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 19 7:02 PM 2004. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• Departure

  I stand alone, on the empty pavement surrounded by traffic,
  and passing pedestrians. They cannot see me, I am not real.

  by JennyNYC 42 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 21 12:06 AM 2004. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Make Me Put This Knife Down

  Come wallow in my madness
  And see what's there to find

  by Lacer 58 lines, 37 comments, on Aug 21 7:32 PM 2004. In Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Missing You

  Being apart from you isn't easy...
  I find myself missing you so often

  by Dymepiece06 22 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 23 9:47 AM 2004. In Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• [this is my story]

  sit down and listen
  i have a tale for you

  by thoudreamchild 30 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 24 10:19 AM 2004. In Sad, Personal, Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Rose

  As it sits atop a hill of mud,
  Unseen by beauty’s eye.

  by Silent Empathy 33 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 24 8:13 PM 2004. In Other, Nature, Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Desolate

  Darkness thick in sweat
  Stinging like heavy breath

  by Depressed Diva 8 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 24 10:21 PM 2004. In Sad, Personal, Abuse

  • Commented on by judge.
• Inside the eclipsing of happiness

  How hard it is,
  To watch mountains turn to sand,

  by Arslongavitabre1 28 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 25 7:39 AM 2004. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• For Granted

  Why do you do this to me?
  You can make me feel like I'm nothing to see

  by twiztidjenn2oo7 23 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 25 9:51 AM 2004. In Sad, Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Stereotype

  I'm young tall and black with braids
  But if you were to see me would you expect good grades

  by amanonceunaware 31 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 26 12:26 PM 2004. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Burning Light - A World Without You

  the light that you see...is a part of the darkness that grows deep within me
  the energy and love you feel...is due to the degrading lifepower of my soul, body

  by FiXato 52 lines, 5 comments, on Aug 26 6:42 PM 2004. In Personal, Hope, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• ~Fate~

  by Catressa 23 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 27 3:10 AM 2004. In Society, Love, Hope

  • Commented on by judge.
• real

  Sometimes I play with my lighter
  Touching the flame against my skin

  by shadow7 12 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 27 6:56 AM 2004. In Fantasy, Weird, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Stone cold

  Yeah, though I walk through the blazes of hell
  my heart is still stone cold

  by Xx Alice xX 22 lines, 13 comments, on Aug 28 7:38 AM 2004. In Dark

  • Commented on by judge.
• Rockin'

  There she lies
  In a black room

  by 76 lines, on Aug 28 11:31 AM 2004. In Personal, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• My Ocean

  Seasons pass, Summer falls, winter springs back in. Year-round the tide is constant, all through thick and thin. A finger stroaked through the ocean breaks the

  by SoulSlave 59 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 28 3:35 PM 2004. In Other, Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• It Hurts Because It's Suppose to

  by LesMis24601 51 lines, 6 comments, on Aug 28 5:19 PM 2004. In Personal, Love, Hope

  • Commented on by judge.
• Mistress Loneliness

  She’s beauty and power
  She’s cold to the bone

  by MoonOttawa 16 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 28 8:10 PM 2004. In Other

  • Commented on by judge.
• Absence

  this vacant room
  is a dying womb

  by jc mcgee 39 lines, 12 comments, on Aug 28 10:39 PM 2004. In Sad, Love

  • Commented on by judge.
• symptom recital

  IVE ALSO LOST ALOT OF FRIENDS, SHED A FAIR FEW TEARS

  by AstroboiFreak 19 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 29 4:12 AM 2004. In Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• Shadow

  The realization of a person with no purpose.

  by FanciullaMare 31 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 29 11:34 AM 2004. In Sad, Dark, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• For no one

  There's the thunder, lightning, and rain drops on the roof.
  I'm angry and broken; my tears fall, I know the truth.

  by -Twilight- 35 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 29 11:53 AM 2004. In Personal

  • Commented on by judge.
• Pretty Pink Sunglasses

  Pull them down, cruising down the Queensway.
  They don't really block out much sun

  by OriginalSin 70 lines, on Aug 29 2:01 PM 2004. In Personal, Love, Humor

  • Commented on by judge.
• The American Dream

  Here I live in this broken down ramshackle;
  This old rental-pit of run-down wood floors,

  by Sherlock Holmes 33 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 29 2:06 PM 2004. In Sad, Society, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• I'll Be There, My Love

  Come for me
  In blackest night

  by Diseased Mind 37 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 29 2:40 PM 2004. In Love, Dark, Hope

  • Commented on by judge.
• The Snap of Us

  I might love you a little,
  But a little is not a lot,

  by be you tiful 31 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 29 3:26 PM 2004. In Personal, Love, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• the beauty hits your lips

  Quiet...
  You choke.

  by tastetheapathy 26 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 29 4:01 PM 2004. In Dark, Hope, Angst

  • Commented on by judge.
• I can watch you, watching me...

  I can watch you, watching me,
  belly-dance like fire over the coals

  by ostrich-eyes 27 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 29 10:05 PM 2004. In Weird, Spiritual, Love

  • Commented on by judge.

Comments

• By me, right now

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  Jessa
  August 17, 2004
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  this sounds interesting. i have to go through my stuff and see if i have anything that you're looking for
• LostParamour
  August 18, 2004
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  Awesome... I hope to see an entry or two from you...
• l-u-b-y-l-o-o
  August 26, 2004
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  hey! wow! you have so many entries, was gonna enter this, but i think you're going to have your work cut out for you! love lulu xxx
• twiztidjenn2oo7
  August 27, 2004
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  there's a lot of entries to this. i just added one and i hope i do good but if not it doesn't matter to me. Weel, good uck to everyone in the contest. =) peace
  ~jenn
• SoulSlave
  August 28, 2004
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  hey, I just thought I would enter a peice in here... hope you don't mind. It's my first peice posted and this is my first contest... so I really don't know what I'm doin yet... hope ya like it...
• Honeydew
  August 28, 2004
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  doubt any one would enter your contest?? huh..well good luck judging your 2 million entry's.. and good job who ever wins ..lol
• 
  Lady Patricia
  August 31, 2004
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  hey babe, it ended..... who won what and what happened? ^_^
  trish.
• LostParamour
  September 4, 2004
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  Sorry... I had computer problems all last week... I hope to finish judging them some time today... Thanks for waiting...
• Sado-Erotique
  September 8, 2004
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  Say euhm... I'd like to know when you're going to announce who the winners are, cuz I would really love to enter my poems in another contest too...
• 
  Laura Lamarca
  September 16, 2004
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  hi, any idea when your gonna judge this? La
• 
  S A Adelmann
  September 16, 2004
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  Thanks so much for the Trophy. Your job was not an easy one - so many entries. I am proud to have won.
  
  Scott
  Edited on Sep 16, 11:02 because 'typos'.
• 
  onerios13
  September 16, 2004
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  Oh hey, yes, thank you so much for the trophy...I didn't even know I WON at first! lol Stupid message thingy didn't tell me, lol, I was just scrolling down checking out the winners and VOILA there I was! lol Again, thank you Lost, you really made my day!
• 
  Catressa
  September 16, 2004
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  Wow like One I didn't get a message that I had won I was scrolling through and Wa La, thank you, this write is one of my favorites that I actually wrote when I was in High School. You know the bitter teen years? So for it to win touches my heart, Take Care and Thank You again, Be Safe, Catressa

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