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Are you lonely?Sad? Tell me why

Hey everyone! This is my 4th contest, so I know what I want lol.. Lately, Ive been reading, and writing sad poems. I lost a few important people that were in my life the last few months, and it hurts.

This is what I want...I guess, emo poems if thats what you want it to be labeled as. Show me emotion, show me how you feel, or felt. Tell me a story in a poem. I don't want short poems, give it a bit of length, yet I don't want these long, story like poems either. At least 10lines please.

1st place-300

Here are the choices:

1. Tell me a time you were lonely, if you're lonely now, even better. Tell me how much it hurts. Tell me your feelings, and why you cry everyday.

2. Write about someone close to you dying..it has to be either Your Friend, or your love. I hate reading about Grandparents, or dogs. I mean, I'm sorry, with all do respect, I'm just 15, and I can relate more to the friends thing.

3. Write about you dying, how people would feel, what would their thoughts be? Their emotions...

Okay, basically just bring me to tears Thats just what kind of mood I'm in right now...To show me that you read this, in your author comments write "I want to bring La-La to tears" and tell me what the poem is about, whether is a true story, whether you really feel the way you do...w/e

1prewrite, and 1orginal(or one of each)

Thanks....La-La

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on August 19, 2004
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    This was really hard...most people didnt win because they didnt follow all of the requirements. They didnt put "I want to bring LaLa to tears" but thank you to those that have...Im sorry if you didnt win. I have a major headache, so I cant really give honorble mentions, because my head hurts to much...but I might come back on a later date and change that. Thank you all, LaLa

Entries [13]

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  • Unknown Angels
    Two little girls, the best of friends
    swore they'd be friends, until the very end.
    by aflackchic 88 lines, 27 comments, on Nov 29 3:42 PM 2003. In Other
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The End
    End of the road, no more signs.
    So this is all I have left?
    by Prodigy 40 lines, 8 comments, on Nov 30 9:17 PM 2003. In Lyrics, Personal, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Our Love
    Every Day You Remind Me Of Our Love,
    The Love We Share,
    by BabyBlueDragon 25 lines, 5 comments, on Jul 24 2:51 AM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Walls
    But I can't break these walls, for I am weak
    I am broken, numbed
    by Concieved 18 lines, 10 comments, on Aug 13 5:57 PM 2004. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Where would it go?
    Why did you die?
    Now my heart is gone!
    by toughone 20 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 14 10:41 AM 2004. In Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Looking to the dark night sky,
    The lights, they're coming closer
    I beg God to hear my prayers
    by 77 lines, 1 comment, on Aug 16 8:27 PM 2004. In Sad
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Can lonely be pluralized?
    Can lonely be pluralized?
    For all the hurt you cause?
    by Rosie Monroe 30 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 17 12:09 AM 2004. In Sad, Dark, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Bring me to ashes
    Somebody just burn me
    So my broken heart can lie in ashes
    by Concieved 19 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 17 12:16 AM 2004. In Dark
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Why I Cry
    Darkness is crawling from out of the void
    Spreading, reaching, into every dim space
    by forgotten dream 21 lines, 2 comments, on Aug 18 5:32 PM 2004. In Sad, Other, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Vision of a long-awaited Death
    Muster prayers to adorn my release.
    So unnecessary! But this is Death;
    by Prodigy 29 lines, 3 comments, on Aug 18 7:23 PM 2004. In Sad, Personal, Angst
    • Commented on by judge.
  • It's True
    (First Verse)
    While Everything Goes By,
    by BabyBlueDragon 41 lines, 4 comments, on Aug 19 12:28 PM 2004. In Lyrics, Love
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • Lune Feu
    August 14, 2004
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    Very Cool Contest! I'll be writing something soon for ya!!!


    One by one, the penguins steal my sanity.


  • Lonely
    August 14, 2004
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    I entered.. Been feeling real down lately.. so here i share with you...

    Love,
    Lonely~


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    August 16, 2004
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    I always feel lonely... I don't know of a single moment when I don't... heh, I'm a total outcast in the world, so I definitely know how that feels. I am interested in this contest and will try to have something for you by Wednesday since it's going to be closed in three days. You have interesting choices here...

    I have a piece about a best friend who has died, perhaps I might enter that as well, but I will definitely add my entry for loneliness.

    I hope that you have great success in your contest.

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora

  • poets delight
    August 17, 2004
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    I apologize about that its good to see some one taking a new direction on this poetry page thanx for giving us all a chance to experience one anothers feelings

  • poets delight
    August 17, 2004
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    i want to bring la la to tears this poem is about me as you can see and basically me within the last two to three months losing everything that ment alot to me


  • LaAmyaArlene
    August 17, 2004
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    Thanks

  • Lune Feu
    August 19, 2004
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    So who got thirdd place?

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