hey people this is my first contest so i want it to be cool.
okay here's what i want:
poems that are dark and creepy. yet on a certain subject. if you have ever been hurt in a relationship or in a crappy friendship, this contest is for you.
i want poems that make me feel your pain and craving for revenge. write me a poem or a story about sorta what happened and how you are trying or did deal with it.
i mean i kinda hope you'll read some of mine. as i dunno maybe you will most of poems are about me being angry with some people. and well bad relationship stuff. so i want to be sure that i am not alone. let me know it bold and clear
i want emotion and anger. passion is the key
sorry but if i can't feel the emotion you probly won't win. i want some stories and poems
rules:
1.) i don't care about swearing
2.)i want stories and poems
3.) not toooo tooo long, but not to short
4.) try and do good spelling, not really caring
5.)no adult cartagory or i can't read it
6.)no more than 3 entries per person
first place: 300 points
second place: trophy 20
third: trophy and 10
i will do 5: 5 pts honorable mentions.
i don't really care if you comment on others in the contest but please read a few. it's nice. and you could read some of mine if you want. but it's all up to you.
so later and good luck.
remeber let me feel the anger and passion.
and to all who enter good luck, make me proud of you for this is agian my first contest and i want it to be good
now go get writing:
i am now allowing prewrites
okay here's what i want:
poems that are dark and creepy. yet on a certain subject. if you have ever been hurt in a relationship or in a crappy friendship, this contest is for you.
i want poems that make me feel your pain and craving for revenge. write me a poem or a story about sorta what happened and how you are trying or did deal with it.
i mean i kinda hope you'll read some of mine. as i dunno maybe you will most of poems are about me being angry with some people. and well bad relationship stuff. so i want to be sure that i am not alone. let me know it bold and clear
i want emotion and anger. passion is the key
sorry but if i can't feel the emotion you probly won't win. i want some stories and poems
rules:
1.) i don't care about swearing
2.)i want stories and poems
3.) not toooo tooo long, but not to short
4.) try and do good spelling, not really caring
5.)no adult cartagory or i can't read it
6.)no more than 3 entries per person
first place: 300 points
second place: trophy 20
third: trophy and 10
i will do 5: 5 pts honorable mentions.
i don't really care if you comment on others in the contest but please read a few. it's nice. and you could read some of mine if you want. but it's all up to you.
so later and good luck.
remeber let me feel the anger and passion.
and to all who enter good luck, make me proud of you for this is agian my first contest and i want it to be good
now go get writing:
i am now allowing prewrites
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on July 14, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: thanx for everyone entering my contest. all the entries were great!!! i am sorry i couldn't give you all points if i could i would. thanx and congradulations to
The darkness by theshadowpoet
betrayal and passion by falling4everxo
graves Dug with knifes by pyrricVictory.
there will be honorable mentions if i can figure out how to use them...lol
Entries [30]
1 - 30 of 30
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I would have sharpened my own nails
And then ripped out your throat• Commented on by judge. -
Do you realize what you do to me?
Make me hate, hate you, hate me.• Commented on by judge. -
You put the razor in my hand
Showed me the red worldby Fallen-Angel 12 lines, 7 comments, on Jan 5 8:34 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
How did you know all of the right buttons to push?
How did you know my insecurities?• Commented on by judge. -
The taste of love,
Upon the tongue,by cocolocoblondie 20 lines, 24 comments, on Jan 16 4:31 PM 2004. In Personal, Love, Contemporary
Bronze trophy winner
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So when you reminisce about the things you have done.
Remember that you ain't nothing but a loser hun, NOW POOF BE GONE!• Commented on by judge. -
Don't read this unless you can handle it......Cuz I dont apologize for shit.......• Commented on by judge.
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Covered with liquid regret
her eyes are open,• Commented on by judge. -
In my hollow mind, I understand everyone
Even you.by n0 regrets 39 lines, 8 comments, on Jun 20 11:46 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
A grave already exhumed
Filled with the cherry excess of my woundsby PyrricVictory 46 lines, 4 comments, on Jun 23 4:53 PM 2004. In Love, Dark, Angst Bronze trophy winner
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Your such a damn fool Taylor...
I gave you everything.....• Commented on by judge. -
I know that I can move on, I know that I'll be fine..
So tired of thinking of you, I'll tear u apart in my mind• Commented on by judge. -
the bind, the twist
in my stomachby mascararunning 45 lines, 2 comments, on Jun 29 3:24 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
hummmmm when you get mad just let it pass. i TRY to do this.• Commented on by judge.
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if you cover pages in blood, they turn browish later....oh and hey wuzzzup ryan?• Commented on by judge.
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Betrayal and Passion
Black and Red Tears• Commented on by judge. -
Real bad ways/messed up ways/by Twisted-Angel 8 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 7 12:42 PM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge.
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My words unheard,
Or perhaps just unspokenby unknownfrailty 51 lines, 16 comments, on Jul 10 2:53 AM 2004. In Other• Commented on by judge. -
Pleasantly dancing
To the beautiful musical beatings of our heart• Commented on by judge. -
I am now dying
life has one on meby Twisted-Angel 13 lines, 3 comments, on Jul 13 12:52 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
I am lost in a maze with no end,
where reality twists and bends.by Cheesy Poof 12 lines, 2 comments, on Jul 13 9:54 AM 2004. In Dark• Commented on by judge. -
An unforeseen call
Awakening feelings that lay hidden• Commented on by judge. -
Just Wait
Just wait• Commented on by judge.
Silver trophy winner
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*sighs* okay, just wanna point out i have 2 poems in here.. not trying to bug ya, but i dont think ya noticed the one cuz it wasnt commented on and all the others were, but if ya read it then im sorry.. just wanted to make sure ya did.. :-/ i like the idea of this contest cuz i want anger out.. and the one i wrote here that was a new one.. was about rape and it pissed me off.. cuz i wish i could do something about it all and my boyfriend wants to hurt him and make him feel as helpless as i did at three...
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wow rape sucks and sorry if i didn't comment on your poem. i am truely sorry. i will do that though. and thanx fer reminding me and don't worry about how many entries you have. okay? it's all good. and i agree anger should be let out. that's what i do. i hate having feelings all bundled up in my heart and not being able to expressthem. that's the #1 reson i writepoety. for expression of feelings.
but ya i am rambling.
great luck in the contest
and thanx fer reminding me
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no prob.. didnt mean to bug or nuttin.. just wanted to tell ya that i posted: "Raped" and "Let Me Be" .. blah.. i wish ya luck in judging this contest.. i know its not always easy.. *sighs* blah.. lol.. i had one and i had it judged within a day, but i was judging it everyday, but changed somethings based on getting new entries and yeah.. it was interesting and fun to do..
yes, poetry is awesome.. its a good way to get things out.. what other people are thinking and personal effects from something or other such.. i have a feeling when i go back to school in the fall.. i'll be writing more~ and if jason (my bf) is still playing the game that he does.. it'll be about a lot of things..lol.
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