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PLEASE READ THESE RULES CAREFULLY:  
IF YOU DO NOT IT IS AUTOMATIC DISQUALIFICATION

Closes in 2 HOURS from now

Prewrites accepted

Must be put through spell check, any spelling errors will be cause for disqualification.

Very Simple

Send me up to 3 HAIKU'S dealing with a SEASON, but you cannot mention the season in your HAIKU

I will accept any form of a HAIKU and basically there are only two:

the 5-7-5 count
where the first line has five syllables
the 2nd line has a 7 syllable and
third line completes with a  5 syllables

BUT:

I will also accept the beat haiku

where syllable count is not important

(but must be between 12=19 syllables)

and  must represent a haiku in some form

AND hints at a season
(even a one line haiku is acceptable)

YOU CANNOT MENTION THE SEASON IN THE POEM

300 Points first prize

50 2ND

25  3RD

5 HONORIA Mentions at 10 points

My Time Now:  1:00 am Contest closes at 3:00 am my time

PREWRITES ACCEPTED

LIMIT:  3 Haiku's

I HOLD THE RIGHT TO CRITIQUE ON YOUR HAIKU
(I will critique your haiku individually when the contest closes since it is a two hour contest)

MUST BE SPELL CHECKED

READY SET GO

Contest is Over

  • Contest was judged on April 15, 2004
  • Rewards: Gold: 300
  • Final notes:
    Firstly, let me tell you that this was one difficult contest. To choose the top 3 for trophies was one level but then to choose 10 Honorable Mentions was another, but here we have arrived at the moment.

    Secondly, unfortunately some had to be eliminated because the rules were not read. Automatic elimination came in if the Haiku did not have at LEAST 12 syllables (that was the rule) and if it went over 19 (another rule). This is not to say that the Haiku did not move me or stir something in my emotional/intellectual critiquing...please see comments left by me.

    Thirdly, I never expected 31 Haikus in a two hour contest, partly because some were added after but I had to keep them in to be fair because it did not say the contest was closed. I like to enjoy and savour the poetry that is entered, even the ones that are eliminated to get to know my poets. (The genral rule for runnning contests is that judges have a week to decide winners, then you can start bugging the hell out of them. It's annoying to get almost as many IMs as there are contest entries, if I have to spend time answering every IM asking if I have finished you are taking away reading time from me, so please be patient and worry after five days, some of us are students/work and have extra cirricular activities. Just because it was a two-hour contest does not mean it is less work on our part. (That's my rant for this contest).

    So now onto the winners and this is important:


    I WILL BE JUDGING A HAIKU CONTEST TO CHOOSE THE TOP POEMS FOR OUR JOURNAL THIS YEAR...WATCH MY AUTHOR'S PAGE FOR MORE DETAILS UPCOMING. AS SOON AS I FINSIH WITH THE RULES AND I AWM GIVEN THE NOD FROM KEVIN AND JADEN, WE WILL BE OPENING IT UP. THERE WILL BE STRICT RULES THAT WILL HAVE TO BE FOLLOWED TO ENTER THIS, THE TOP WILL BE PUBLISHED IN OUR YEARLY JOURNAL.

Entries [16]

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  • once i had you in my clasp
    i loved you so
    by xShadowedxAngelx 3 lines, 14 comments, on Mar 21 5:33 PM 2004. In Haiku, Love
    • Commented on by judge.
  • The sun wakes up
    spreading its rays
    by Simi 2 lines, 33 comments, on Apr 8 12:07 PM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Oh! Sun you are a,
    fiery ball so large, round,
    by Blue moon 2 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 13 2:40 PM 2004. In Haiku, Other, Childrens
    • Commented on by judge.
  • damp virescent leaves
    kiss moss swollen willow limbs
    by fishingwitch2 3 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 13 11:41 PM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Dew drops float
    on a lotus petal
    by Simi 2 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 13 11:43 PM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Blueberries glisten
    beneath emerald green boughs
    by fishingwitch2 2 lines, 6 comments, on Apr 13 11:50 PM 2004. In Haiku
    Silver trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • stormy coastal winds-
    tangles unbraided onyx hair
    by fishingwitch2 3 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 13 11:54 PM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Snow covers the ground
    Death is everywhere you look
    by Dies Irae 3 lines, 8 comments, on Apr 14 12:37 AM 2004. In Sad, Haiku
    Gold trophy winner
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Gentle sun warms me
    Frozen scowl slowly thaws out
    by Yusefeligirl 2 lines, 5 comments, on Apr 14 12:42 AM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Nature all aglow,
    The trees are soon stripped bare,
    by Blue moon 3 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 14 1:22 AM 2004. In Haiku, Other, Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by sanity 3 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 14 7:43 AM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.

  • Dying, falling leaves
    by sanity 3 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 14 7:50 AM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Rub your hands, blowing
    by sanity 3 lines, 2 comments, on Apr 14 8:03 AM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Fresh and crispy leaves,
    Floating, drifting down to earth.
    by Little 3 lines, 1 comment, on Apr 14 8:49 AM 2004. In Nature
    • Commented on by judge.
  • by Desire 5 lines, 4 comments, on Apr 14 12:33 PM 2004. In Haiku, Other
    • Commented on by judge.
  • Love shall fly away
    Frenzied in blistery winds
    by AngelEyes323 4 lines, 3 comments, on Apr 14 12:37 PM 2004. In Haiku
    • Commented on by judge.

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Comments

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  • Blue moon
    April 13, 2004
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    hi there,
    I hope you will like this piece all the best bluemoon


  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 13, 2004
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    Thank you for entering my little contest
    I hope you did not feel pressurized
    The results will be posted
    As soon as I decomprize


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    April 14, 2004
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    Oooh, great contest Gregg. Good luck to all that enters.

  • Loving Slave
    April 14, 2004
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    Wow.. good luck to everyone.. and when I learn how to write Haiku... I'll enter one... LMAO

    Lilli


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    April 14, 2004
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    waits patiently for the winners to be announced :.


  • Menohir
    April 14, 2004
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    Well I don't know if I'm allowed, for it's not closed and it seems this was supposed to be closed an hour ago:

    silent forest
    beneath a pale skyline-
    frozen sun

    btw. cool contest

    Menohir


  • sidewalksolipsis
    April 14, 2004
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    Whoops...disregard "He Loves Me Not", I guess...under 12 syllables.

  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 14, 2004
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    Hello Everyone:

    I have received all your entries and am busy reading and evaluating them all and will have a decision for you this evening. I would like to thank all participoants for entrying this contest and look forward to giving you my critiques.

  • Little
    April 14, 2004
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    Good luck with the judging ~ i c u hav quite alot of entries!! 't least they're cwik 2 read!! Hope u like my 2!!

    luv little

  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 14, 2004
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    The contest is now closed: Actually it was closed at 3AM this morning but I don't know how to do that on an official way, so it is 3PM now I am officially closing it....thank you all for the haikus to read and I will be ready to judge tonight as soon as I finish my class.


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    April 14, 2004
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    You got a lot of entries Gregg. Best of luck judging them.


  • Desire gold member
    April 14, 2004
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    I entered just for the hell of it..Ugh..Sorry I missed it

  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 15, 2004
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    Okay I have just made the biggest booboo in the history of allpoetry.com! While I was typing in my individual comments below each poem, I accidently hit a button on my computer (my hand is in a wrist sling right now because I fell of my horse and injured it), but anyways, that slip caused the contest to be posted and trophies awarded before I could finish. And I cannot get back in to post them. So I will go to each individual poem and post my comments individually so please be patient while I do this. It will take just as much time, but I will get to everyone of you.

  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 15, 2004
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    I will post the Honorary mentions as soon as I spend half the night finishing the commenting. What a numbskull I was. Okay, I will learn from the experience, and at the same time I will start to comment earlier in the game although it has only been two days since we closed and I made draft notes ahead of time. Oh well, can,t beat an egg if the shell ain't broken!


  • Yusefeligirl
    April 15, 2004
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    Excellent contest. I don't ususally enter, for various reasons, but you've impressed me with they way you ran this.
    Good luck with the commenting, now I know why it was only a two-hour contest, can't imagine the amount of work you'd have to put in if this collected entries over a few days!

    Kyla


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    April 16, 2004
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    Hey Gregg, are you still at it? j/k This was an awesome contest, and Congrats to all the winners.

  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 16, 2004
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    Yep just finished commenting and now I'm collecting the 10 HONORARY MENTIONS and IMING ALL THE POINTS in about 10 minutes and the it will officially be over.

  • lordoftherings gold member
    April 16, 2004
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    HONORARY MENTIONS:

    25 POINTS

    The Fight by pinkwhite

    15 points each

    Emerald Fileds of Restless Graves by Cerulean Dreamer
    autumn fire by natazzle

    10 points each

    Sweet Mother of Earth by Fifth Dove
    Passion by Desire
    Spectum by sanity
    Time Seems Endless by Queen AkashaI
    Gentle Sun by Yusefeligirl
    Falling Silk by trumphetfalcon
    Thaw by Absinthe

    Thank you all for participating and I have no more points left or else I would give out more points, but time to go read some more and get racking them up so I can host another.

  • Yusefeligirl
    April 16, 2004
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    Thanks Gregg, I am honoured
    They'll go towards promoting someone elses poem. Pay it forward... ever see that film?


  • haikumonk gold member
    May 1, 2004
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    Nice contest. Just got back to the house to find your contest and IM. Looks like a fun contest. I'll have to take a moment tomorrow and read some of these. I bet you got some great entries.


    Don


  • lordoftherings gold member
    May 1, 2004
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    Thank you it was a very successful contest and fun

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