I have been rather deppressed lately, do to some personal things going on in my life, but anyways...
I want for you to write me the saddest thing possible, I want you to make me cry out loud. I need to, it's been sometime since I last did. Pretty simple. Try to stay away from self mutilation though, that just creeps me out. I tend to like things about losing a loved one in any way(just a hint)
Rules, I know they suck
1. No cussing unless it's necessary, like a quote or something
2. No erotica, I want to cry not get excited
3. I allow pre-writes because I tend to write something then find a contest about what I wrote that doesn't accept pre-writes, Urgg
4. Just, tell me the saddest story or poem or whatever you can. When you think you've gone to the extreme of sadness bring it another step further, it's difficult to make me cry
5. Any style is acceptable, rhyming or no, I don't care
6. No cheating, like slipping deppressants into my drink or something
I want for you to write me the saddest thing possible, I want you to make me cry out loud. I need to, it's been sometime since I last did. Pretty simple. Try to stay away from self mutilation though, that just creeps me out. I tend to like things about losing a loved one in any way(just a hint)
Rules, I know they suck
1. No cussing unless it's necessary, like a quote or something
2. No erotica, I want to cry not get excited
3. I allow pre-writes because I tend to write something then find a contest about what I wrote that doesn't accept pre-writes, Urgg
4. Just, tell me the saddest story or poem or whatever you can. When you think you've gone to the extreme of sadness bring it another step further, it's difficult to make me cry
5. Any style is acceptable, rhyming or no, I don't care
6. No cheating, like slipping deppressants into my drink or something
Contest is Over
- Contest was judged on March 15, 2004
- Rewards: Gold: 300
- Final notes: There were a lot of good entries. Thank you everyone for entering my contest. But, these are the ones that brought the most tears to my eyes. Thank you all and hope to read more of your stuff in the future.
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I wonder if I did the right thing, I'm not sure if what I believe is true, but I want to say a few things.• Commented on by judge.
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What I've done to feel such pain must have been something terrible. God forgive me for my sins I've not been wise until now losing the one you love is the• Commented on by judge.
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mamma's cryin'
daddy's madby truespirit 87 lines, 9 comments, on Mar 10 6:10 PM 2003. In Abuse• Commented on by judge. -
How long can I last.....
When I am only so strong?• Commented on by judge. -
You were my best friend,
until you died, you still are;by RainyClouds 33 lines, 4 comments, on May 13 10:01 PM 2003. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
Who to call
When shadows loomby WolfKnight 22 lines, 3 comments, on May 29 8:25 PM 2003. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
No more pain now.
The pain is gone.• Commented on by judge. -
Here's a dedication to you Chris,
I miss you so much.• Commented on by judge. -
by -Twilight- 19 lines, 18 comments, on Jan 1 8:17 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge.
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Four years have passed since the fateful day,
When a dear friend of mine was taken away.by perfctdeception 47 lines, 8 comments, on Jan 20 8:31 PM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge. -
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In times of despair,
I sit and stare,by crazychic15 19 lines, 4 comments, on Jan 30 9:36 AM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
My dark secrets
known and retoldby xbyebyebeauty 20 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 1 5:11 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
is there a reason why
you hate me so?• Commented on by judge. -
Just thinking about my dad
coming home to and empty house• Commented on by judge. -
if only he could see
the pain he casues me• Commented on by judge. -
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I wish I could feel pain
Because I want to cryby xemogirl388x 22 lines, 4 comments, on Feb 17 6:50 PM 2004. In Personal• Commented on by judge. -
it hurts inside but these feelings i can not hideby midgetjesus666 31 lines, 3 comments, on Feb 23 3:43 PM 2004. In Hope• Commented on by judge.
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SO why is it i cry myself to sleep every night?by xbyebyebeauty 19 lines, 6 comments, on Feb 25 6:38 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge.
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No one sees the pain she feels
The thundery light of this emotion• Commented on by judge. -
She knew she would never hold her beautiful baby in her arms
Knew she would never feel him kick• Commented on by judge. -
She had the perfect life,
Nothing could go wrong...• Commented on by judge. -
Ive grown up all alone
Where were you when I was lost on my own• Commented on by judge. -
Every rip through My back
Evey pound of the nail• Commented on by judge. -
This poem is through my child within• Commented on by judge.
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There is still something missing
for I have lost my soul.• Commented on by judge. -
He was my companion.
He was my friend.by neptune386 20 lines, 1 comment, on Mar 7 11:09 AM 2004. In Contemporary• Commented on by judge. -
"Where did Daddy go, Ma?"
A child's blissful innocence,• Commented on by judge. -
About a choice I never had a final say in.• Commented on by judge.
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Betrayal like a knife to my back,
My tears like trails of blood;by MirandaNicole 22 lines, 7 comments, on Mar 8 7:18 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
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When we me you asked me:
How long will we be friends?• Commented on by judge. -
here it comes
like the cold water with unbearable movementby cryingcowgirleyes 34 lines, 6 comments, on Mar 10 5:38 PM 2004. In Angst• Commented on by judge. -
WHEN YOU LOSE SOMEONE
CLOSE TO YOUR HEART,by carlspenc1 37 lines, 2 comments, on Mar 10 6:43 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
why must i be confused,
i cant figure this life out,by get off my back 17 lines, 5 comments, on Mar 10 11:21 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
I feel the gun in my hand,
loaded tight like a rubber band,• Commented on by judge. -
Hold my hand, my darling daughter
as the sun rests on the bay.• Commented on by judge. -
That could have been my father or anyone~• Commented on by judge.
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He was like an angel to me,
He kissed me and caressed me through the night,by Razor Tooth 38 lines, on Mar 13 3:17 PM 2004. In Love• Commented on by judge. -
shes got golden curls like sunshine.
at least thats what daddy used to say.• Commented on by judge. -
To allow the doctors to drain my very life blood from me, so that I can spend mere moments with thee.• Commented on by judge.
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STAB STAB STAB...
CACK CACK CACK... will we ever come back?• Commented on by judge.
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I wanted to add my story but it wasnt letting me so check it out any way and tell me what you think it is called "My life has withered"
Love Holly Jean :-) -
Oh My what a number of poems you have here to read
...By looking I don't see a maximum number of entries
Best wishes to all who enter...Great contest idea~ I can't wait to read
Big hugs
and much love~Desire
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umm i was wondering how many we were allowed to put in....
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this is a great contest with lots of great entries. I was going to enter one about when my uncle died, but I can't write about it. Well, I can write about it but I can't write a poem about it, dunno why. Anyway, good luck judging this; I can tell it's going to be hard.
Jen -
I also wanted to add my story. Its this one >allpoetry.com/Story/530003< It wont let me add it. Please include it in your contest or tell me how to do it. Thank you.
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Good luck to you all!
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Excellent choices Congrats to all
Yertweetyness
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Thank you. This was such a hard piece to write. I kept crying while writing.
I read many good things in this contest. There are many wonderful writers here..
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i lost boo whooo
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